Ladies and gentlemen, I apologize in advance.

Because I have had the experience of being sprayed into the defense of the comment area before, I rarely read the comment area when I open a new book this time.

Today, I happened to finish the code and flipped through it.

I found that many readers are a little confused and puzzled by the last few chapters.

Let me explain it to you.

If you are still dissatisfied, you can leave a message in the comment area, and I will revise the previous chapters as appropriate after reading it.

The first is about Lin Feng's loyalty.

In fact, I have been emphasizing from the previous chapters that Lin Feng is not loyal to Mondstadt, and even has a lot of resentment.

He was able to help Mondstadt purely because of his adoptive father's last words.

As for whether this last word is true or false, everyone will see the wisdom of the benevolent and the wise, so I will not say it.

And Coulson is very good to Lin Feng, he is completely raised as his own son, and there is Duo Torre staring at Lin Feng in Solstice, so in contrast, Lin Feng is willing to help Mondstadt.

And Rosalia didn't blame Lin Feng, but felt sorry for the loss of another younger brother, and the emotions expressed may not be in place, I will revise this paragraph.

The second is that Falga wants to kill Lin Feng, why did Lin Feng scold him at length, instead of turning his face on the spot.

This point is the most criticized.

Because when I wrote this, I substituted it from Lin Feng's perspective.

From his point of view, it was a complete misunderstanding that Falga wanted to kill himself, and if he explained it clearly, he would be fine.

But it just so happened that he didn't want to do anything for Mondstadt anymore, so he used this as a logical reason to break with Falga.

As for the intermediate process, you may find it grinding.

Maybe I wrote hi when I wrote it.

My original idea was to first occupy the moral high ground (I worked for Mondstadt for ten years in exchange for an indiscriminate sword), then threaten Falgar not to think about attacking me again (I have information about the Anemo God and the Dragon of the East Wind, and if I attack me, I will wait for the two of them to die), and finally make a public break, with the handle in hand, and the moral high ground in hand, and ensure that I and Eula will be safe in Mondstadt, and then cut ties with Mondstadt, and by the way, I will have an addiction and scold Falga. (The matter of taking a sword must not be just settled, I can't swallow this breath.) ）

The reason why I wrote this way is because Falga was written by me as a man who would do anything for Mondstadt.

When Lin Feng breaks with him, Falga will become a huge threat, and if the force value is not as good as Falga, Lin Feng and Eula will be in danger at any time.

Therefore, it is necessary to seize the initiative in your own hands first, so that Falga does not dare to do it again.

In addition, when you read the book, it is from God's perspective, and a lot of information is omniscient and omnipotent, so some places may indeed explain too much, and you can point out the bad things for me, mainly because when I wrote this book, my thinking was very smooth, and many times I wrote a lot of things unconsciously while writing.

In addition, the authorities are obsessed with bystanders, and I really can't find the problem when I check the manuscript, so I need everyone to help me correct it.

Here are some analyses of the plot, which is why I wrote those clips, so let's tell you about it.

1. The problem of information asymmetry.

Lin Feng had a three-year gap in information about Mondstadt, so there were many things he didn't know.

Now let me summarize what I already know.

(1) Lin Feng was disloyal to Mondstadt and even had a deep grudge.

(2) Simon thought that Coulson was angry with himself and was the backstabber.

(3) Falga is the real murderer, but no one knows.

(4) Lin Feng thought that with his own importance, Falga would not be able to kill him, even if he quarreled with Falga at the headquarters of the Knights of Favonius.

(5) After the first battle of the Lawrence family, he mistakenly thought that Falga wanted to kill him because of the power of the outer gods, but in fact, Falga had this idea when he found that Lin Feng was uncontrollable, but the timing was not right, and he was not ready to implement it at the beginning, and he really had the idea of killing when he saw the power of the outer gods.

(6) Falgar's compromise was also due to the problem of unequal information, he didn't know if it was true that Lin Feng said that he had the position of the Wind God and the East Wind Dragon in his hands, but he didn't dare to bet that once it was true, something happened to the Wind God and the East Wind Dragon, and Mondstadt would be completely finished.

2. What did the protagonist do to Mondstadt.

The first thing, the assassination of Clips, by mistake, exposed his evil eye.

The second thing is to find out Mondstadt's undercover agent Elok and join forces with Falga to get rid of him.

The third thing, interrogating Clips, leads to information that he is cooperating with the Fatui.

The fourth thing is to chase Eula.

The fifth thing is to help Eula get rid of her family's troubles, break away from the control of the Knights of Favonius, trap Klober to death, and help Eula re-ignite her vision.

The sixth thing, which is what we are doing now, is to worship Coulson.

3. The strength of the protagonist.

Lin Feng has a special constitution, ignoring the evil eye, and can purify and devour the power of the defiled demon god (including the breath of the god and karma).

The main combat power is proficient in all martial arts, all weapons can be used, including bows can be used in melee combat (magic weapons can also be used, this has not been written), the seven-element evil eye, the disadvantage is that the physical strength will drop rapidly after overusing the evil eye ability, the unknown demon god power, the biggest hole card, and it is also the move that consumes the body the most.

As for the fight between him and Falga, I have to say sorry for this, because I'm not very good at writing fights, and I can't write the feeling I imagined.

First of all, Lin Feng and Falga are not comparable, and so is Eula.

During the battle between Falga and Lin Feng, Falga released water in the early stage, which I wrote.

But Falga didn't expect Lin Feng's martial arts skills to be so strong with his bow, and he not only couldn't take him down with his big sword seriously, but was also injured several times.

Later, when Falga moved his real character, Lin Feng was seconded.

On the question of Eula's combat power.

Eula's strength comes from swordsmanship and the Seal of Ice.

Eula's swordsmanship is very strong, but it is not enough to see in front of Falga, at most it is to make Falga a little more serious.

Eula's Ice Seal is super strong, after all, it is the strongest force of the Lawrence family when they ruled Mondstadt, and the attack power of the full burst is directly higher than the previous executive level (I set it myself, hehe).

However, the disadvantage is that it needs to be charged, it is slow, and it takes a long time to launch an attack, and it may be interrupted by someone as soon as it is cast. Therefore, Eula's swordsmanship is to completely abandon defense and launch a continuous offensive in order to cooperate with the launch of the Ice Seal.

Eula has used the Ice Mark twice so far, but the opponent's strength is far superior to her own, and the shortcomings of the Ice Seal's great power and slow speed are all exposed.

Let's summarize Lin Feng's change of mentality.

Before the age of eight, happy.

Between the ages of eight and ten, he had a lot of criticism about Mondstadt.

Between the ages of ten and fifteen, he has a grudge against Mondstadt, but Coulson is alive and willing to do things for Mondstadt.

Between the ages of fifteen and seventeen, his resentment towards Mondstadt deepened, but Coulson was alive and willing to do things for Mondstadt.

At the age of seventeen, before returning to Mondstadt, Coulson died, unwilling to do anything for Mondstadt, and was reluctant to do things for Mondstadt because of Coulson's will and nurturing grace.

On the eve of the events from Mondstadt to the Lawrence family, he felt powerless about the current situation in Mondstadt, and he moved forward with a load in front of him, and the people of Mondstadt pulled him backwards by the legs, so he was ready to turn to a cooperative relationship with Mondstadt.

After the end of the Lawrence Family incident, he no longer worked for Mondstadt, including the partnership, and officially broke with Falgar, and the next step was to return to the winter to compete for the executive seat (revealed in advance).

I saw a message saying that the protagonist is not too early to jump back now.,First of all.,That's how my outline is.,That's why I'll say that the title of the book I thought of temporarily didn't match the plot later.。

In this regard, it is also said in the plot that the protagonist will not be able to live without Mondstadt, but that Mondstadt will be in a very difficult situation without the protagonist.

Lin Feng is very strong personally, no matter which country he goes to, with his force and the amount of information and advanced information of the two countries in his hands, he can mix and thrive, so it is not a big deal to break away from Mondstadt.

Finally, I have an outline.

It's just that when I write, my thinking tends to diverge, and the general situation is, "Oh, this plot can match the history of Mondstadt XX, expand on it", so the plot will be much richer when I write it.

Okay, if you have any comments to post in the comment area, I'll look at it this time, and you can leave a comment if you have any good suggestions.

I will correct my mistakes, and I will take good advice as appropriate.