() First of all, thank you for your support to me, as a newcomer, the first urban novel successfully hit the street in more than ten chapters, and then when I wrote the same person, there was support, which is a very happy thing for me. Thank you.

Again, thanks to the rain to clear the marks.

He complained about my book

Well, someone gave me an opinion, which is very important for a newcomer.

It must be that the new words of the newcomer determine his immaturity in all aspects.

I welcome complaints, even scolding. I'll gladly accept it. My ideals are high, and I hope to move forward more in my career as an author. I need to improve, and the basis of progress is everyone's prompting, blaming, building, and criticizing.

Below, in order to show that I took a serious look at the building of the rain falling clear marks. Correcting or explaining the questions he asked.

First of all, my fanfiction is expected to end up in the form of a forbidden extra?

In short, it is based on the background of the Demon Forbidden, the major events of the Demon Forbidden, and the story of another traverser. So, Intix is a hemp, Sister Cannon

I won't let Sister Cannon be as desperate as the original book

The second point, about Xigong Yu, this character is plucked from the world that only God knows, and it has been changed slightly, but it is generally the same. That's what she was like in Divine Knowledge

When I watched Shenzhi, I personally liked this role sè, so I asked him to make a cameo

When the heroine, well, she is the heroine hidden in the end.

If I want to say that it is the only heroine, I don't know how the crowd will react.

This is the truth, the only one

The third point,

I'm wrong! I'll make the protagonist just a scholar.

While thanking everyone for their support, I would like to show it to you

It's for me

Original text? (Is it a manuscript fee to borrow someone else's text in this way?) I didn't say either, so you didn't either.) ）

The author wants to complain, but in fact, there are only three points if we want to complain...... First: The author doesn't want to be a hemp, especially don't rob the pet raised by hemp, as for Sister Cannon, leave the suspense! It's better to open a fan! The main text has too many descriptions in her heart, and she is in a groove... Isn't she mouthless? Mouthless or something, she has to be like Nagato's big cute god. Third: The protagonist's reading comprehension ability,, this one is worth complaining about... The development of science needs to create zàoxìng thinking, and you can become a great scientist with super reading comprehension ability, I don't believe it, at most I am a scholar!!ah! That's it, I hope to adopt!