Someone else writes about the protagonist cow in the whole article, and you write about the protagonist in the whole article that the protagonist has some kind of superpower so he picks up the cheap.

In terms of coolness, if you don't use your superpowers to the extreme, the protagonist is a little salted in it, and the reader gets a weak experience, and even gives birth to a certain sense of unfairness.

Shen Sanwen paused again.

I always feel that all this is talking about myself, and I don't know if Wang Bin has found out.

Wang Bin saw him stop, "Go on, why don't you say it." ”

Shen San asked: "Take a break and sort out your thoughts." ”

Wang Bin: "I found that you still haven't said the real reason, so I tried to summarize it myself. ”

Shen San was taken aback, "Brother, you are amazing, come, you can talk about it." ”

Wang Bin stood up, turned his head very solemnly, and walked back and forth in the living room.

"The first is that the positioning is not clear, which makes the reader misjudge. For example, some people like to watch wars, and some people like to watch daily life, if that is too long and there is no main plot for a long time, it is a failure.

In a history, it is bound to be worthwhile to write about the true feelings of people, and it can also move people, so that the reader can worry about the future of the characters and wonder how they will change later.

But the theme of the book should still be that the protagonist is adapting to history, or struggling to change history.

Let the reader see the efforts of the main character, recognize his efforts, and develop a sense of approval for what he does.

If you don't have this resonance, the reader will leave, and that's what I feel most personally.

Second, it should be a matter of character portrayal.

Everyone likes their protagonists, everyone likes them, but just like in real reality, no one can be perfect enough for everyone to like, and pursuing perfection too much will cause character conflicts. This is only for you, the leader of the Ministry of Education.

Most of the street fights do not depict people, and they must write out the words that the characters can blurt out and the strong emotions in each event.

For example, in a book I read, it was written that a person was a scumbag.

How is he a scumbag?

The first step is to ask the heroine to do many things to satisfy his personal requirements, and he doesn't have to do much, portraying the selfishness of this person.

The second step is to ask the heroine's family to be good to him, and even to be good to other people he likes, this requirement is very excessive and unreasonable, isn't it?

The third step is to write about how the person treats his parents and friends, how selfish, and only thinks of himself in the face of real interests, to show that the person has an inferior personality.

The fourth step is to give the female protagonist the identity of a male protagonist's life-saving benefactor, so that the reader will despise what this man has done from the bottom of his heart.

The fifth step, wait for the heroine to be freed, and after the two are out of the relationship, another male protagonist will beg for mercy, and the female protagonist will help with kindness, and finally be victimized again.

In this way, the image of a social and emotional scum is portrayed in place, and the reader will feel that this person is simply a waste of air to live, and strongly likes to see the tragic ending of this person in the end, and he can't eat or sleep if he can't see it. ”

"Wait, is that your book a female frequency? When have you ever been to the female frequency. Shen San asked a little incredulous, could it be that the eldest prince Wang was actually a person who liked to watch the house fight.

Although the character portrayal he said is indeed quite good, for people like Shen Sanwen, who watch and judge with mixed male and female frequency, he has actually seen a lot, and there are more disgusting characters than this.

Wang Bin: "Look at what's wrong with the female frequency." ”

Shen San asked and stared at him with a smile, "How do I remember that the last time we went to you and you only bought a few books for the male frequency, when did you secretly go to buy the female frequency, or when you were in Luoyang, you stared at the books of the female frequency, no wonder I haven't seen you in the Ministry of Culture." ”

Wang Bin smiled embarrassedly, "Actually, I've read it all, the key is that I'm a man who reads women's books, and I feel quite strange and a little embarrassed." ”

Shen San asked: "What's wrong with this, the books of female frequency also have the advantages of female frequency, I also read it, but I often don't read it for long." ”

At this time, Wang Bin had already put the analysis of the street hit behind, "Come, let's talk about it, I think the routines of the female frequency should be much more exciting than the male frequency, especially the female frequency's description of the indescribable." ”

Shen San asked a step away from him, "It turns out that you want to discuss this, you better think about it yourself, I'm not interested." ”

Wang Bin took a step closer, "Don't, let's talk about it, you can say whatever you like." You've seen more than I do, so let's dig a little deeper. ”

For the sake of this kind remark, Shen Sanwen decided to discuss it with him reluctantly.

"I'll talk about male and female frequencies together."

Wang Bin nodded, "How happy are you?" ”

Shen Sanwen slowly spoke: "The book routines of the male frequency are mainly changed to fight monsters and upgrades, and the protagonists of all colors have changed from weak to strong, and you will know who the protagonist will become in the end when you read the beginning." As for that kind of fantasy, in the end, the protagonists are invincible, and where are they slapped in the face one by one, all kinds of anti-heaven characters are slapped in the face, which is really greasy enough to make people unbearable.

The routine of the female frequency is similar to her theme, and the main line of the female frequency is the emotional line, so there is only one routine, that is, the male and female protagonists are divided and combined.

The poisonous point of the female frequency lies in the particularly embarrassing reasons for separation, all kinds of strange psychological changes and descriptions, and then with an inexplicable and unbelievable explanation, and finally the two released their suspicions.

In the writer's pen, two people always love each other, but they never trust, which is the most poisonous point in the eyes of contemptible people.

And then there's the explanation.

I've read no less than ten books.,There will be such a plot.,The master or parents of the male or female protagonist don't agree to this marriage.,And the relationship with the parents and the master is very good and can't disobey.,And then both sides can't be people.。 The second is that one party has a disease or an incurable disease, and the final result is either a misdiagnosis, or suddenly the world's scientific and technological progress, and other problems dare not be said, and the solution to this disease is called a foolproof.

Even if the success rate is only 1 in 10,000, the protagonist must be the lucky one among them. ”

Wang Bin couldn't help laughing when he heard this, thinking of his reading experience, Shen Sanwen said that these were very right, and he hurriedly added, "There is also the kind of person who recognizes the wrong person, and then both parties give up the person who thought they had feelings before, and chose the male or female protagonist, and experienced the revelation of the mystery in the end." ”

Shen Sanwen agreed, "In short, the female frequency is a difficult marriage history, if two people love not vigorously enough, do not experience family, friends, society, country, natural and man-made disasters, self-doubt opposition, and finally customer service difficulties prove the power of love is great, this is a must hit the street." ”

(End of chapter)