Chapter 139: The ups and downs of the plot

Recently, the Huanyu Pavilion has been very lively.

Most of them came to inquire about the first night of the begonia girl.

"I heard that your begonia girl here sold for 2,000 taels on the first night, and she directly compared the hairy staff outside. Asked a foreigner to pick this delicate flower? ”

The flower girl who was held in the other party's arms was not angry, but said: "Miss Begonia is indeed very blessed, that master is still in the house of the girl Begonia on the second floor, I heard that my mother personally entertained her." Hey, a few years earlier, when I was still an Oiran, I was taken by that master, and wouldn't I be famous? ”

The man lightly picked the lower jaw of the flower girl, "Just you?" ”

"Don't underestimate me, I was no worse than Miss Begonia when I was young."

"It's not because of her looks, I heard from my best friend that the begonia girl used to be in the capital and was born in a big family. Just that temperament and cultivation, I'm afraid that you can't catch up with it in your lifetime, otherwise who would want to pay 2,000 taels? ”

However, in the eyes of these people, the Oiran is good-looking, and no matter how temperamental it is, it is not worth it for them to spend two thousand taels of silver to buy it overnight. The woman in the Qinglou who has not opened and budded can redeem herself for a few hundred taels, two thousand taels......

Tang Zangyue became a person in their hearts, and before they saw him, he was defined as a stupid person with a lot of money.

Tang people are stupid and rich Zang Yue is enjoying lying on the couch on her side at this moment, letting the other maids pinch her legs, while Wen Siyue peels grapes one by one and feeds them into her mouth.

She looked at the poor scholar who had polished the ink on the table, and said: "The main thing is the dialogue and scene of the characters, and the plot is promoted, just follow the original folk tale to promote a few climactic nodes." The dialogue of the characters is as vernacular as possible, so that ordinary people can also understand and understand, and the words of the scene are reflected in the props and background......"

What she said is that the scripts of later generations are similar, as long as the poor scholars write wonderful and easy to understand, Wen Siyue must be able to accept it soon. After all, this is the only way she seeks for her future situation, and if she can't grasp it, it's up to Wen Siyue herself.

In the face of adversity, people can always stimulate unlimited potential.

"Props?" The poor scholar was puzzled.

Tang Zangyue gave an example: "When Mulan goes to the battlefield, she has to have a knife in her hand, right?" Do you have to wear armor? Even Zhu Yingtai in Liang Zhuli also has to dress up as a man...... These are props that have to be embodied in a scene when they appear. ”

"Oooh."

Tang Zangyue continued: "Literati and writers, romantic and talented people, even if they are market figures, both men and women look forward to beautiful love, but ordinary and ordinary love is not impressive enough, and it has to be ups and downs. ”

"Ups and downs?"

Tang Zangyue frowned slightly, stretched for another moment, and said, "That's right, ups and downs." For example, Liang Zhu, there is always a person with a humble status on both sides of the man, which leads to different family concepts, opposition from the elders in the family, and too deep love, which eventually leads to tragedy. You can make changes as appropriate, and the process is pretty much the same. ”

β€œβ€¦β€¦ How to change it? ”

The poor scholar came to this Huanyu Pavilion for the livelihood of his family, and he knew that the person in front of him had spent a lot of money. When they didn't meet, the poor scholars also classified them as gentlemen. When I met him, I was attracted by his bearing and novel thinking.

Only then did the poor scholar realize that he was narrow-minded.

A man's romance is nothing, as long as he is talented, he is respected everywhere.

Tang Zangyue: "If women are strong and men are weak, the sense of substitution is not strong, and it will even attract a lot of slots." Then the identities are reversed, with Liang Zhu as the center, to carry out the unfinished ghost love, sadomasochistic love triangle, and finally end tragically. ”

is not only a poor scholar, but also the maid who pinched her legs behind her and Wen Siyue who peeled grapes, even the well-informed bustard listened to it with relish.

The poor scholar asked for advice again, and Tang Zangyue was not stingy, and said: "The female protagonist disguised herself as a man to enter the academy, and fell in love with the male protagonist. Because of the difference in status and status, coupled with the resistance of the heroine, the second male raised him outdoors. ”

The poor scholar was indignant: "This is too much! And then what? ”

"......" Seeing that everyone else was looking at him with great excitement, looking forward to the follow-up appearance, Tang Zangyue couldn't say anything.

Originally, I wanted to bury it at the beginning like this, and then throw it to poor scholars. Let the other party make up the follow-up by themselves to see how strong the other party is.

Never mind.

Tang Zangyue continued: "On the night of being forcibly robbed, the male protagonist wanted to save the female protagonist, but was beaten to death by the people below the second male. ”

Wen Siyue covered her mouth in shock, and even the maid who pinched her calf followed suit.

The old bustard, who has always disregarded people's lives in vain, also sighed with some emotion: "How sad it is for the male protagonist's father and mother to send a white-haired person to a black-haired person." ”

Tang Zangyue: "It was the night of the full moon, the male protagonist was wearing a big red robe, trying to save the female protagonist, and eloped with her at the same time, which eventually caused a tragedy." God can't stand it anymore, so let the male protagonist turn into a ghost. ”

Bustard: "Is this going back for revenge?" ”

Tang Zangyue lowered her eyelids and said, "Revenge? I'm talking about love and hatred here, what kind of revenge? ”

"That,The male protagonist has become a ghost......"

"The second male is from an extraordinary background.,When the male protagonist first became a powerful ghost.,There are restrictions.,It can only cause nightmares.,Later, I was invited by the family to be a Taoist priest.,I knew that the male owner existed.。 At this time, the female protagonist followed the second male, and her heart gradually followed her body, and she had a different affection for the second male, and asked the male protagonist to let the second male ......"

Wen Siyue snorted lightly, and even the old bustard said angrily: "This heroine, in vain the male protagonist died to save her!" ”

Compared with the angry expressions on other people's faces, Tang Zangyue was very calm, and said: "The male protagonist is angry that the female protagonist intercedes for the second male, the reason...... Nature is just like you. So the male protagonist hated because of love, and did the same thing to the female protagonist as the second male. ”

This time, it is difficult to explain the poor scholars.

Why does it become more outrageous the more you listen to it? Can......

He was also a little curious about the follow-up development, and like the others in the room, he also looked forward to Tang Zangyue continuing to make up.

Seeing that Tang Zangyue didn't speak for a long time, the old bustard couldn't bear it anymore, and said, "And then what?" ”

Tang Zangyue didn't blink her eyelids and said, "What does Mom think of this plot?" ”

"Good! It's so appealing! Once the platform is built, it will definitely attract many guests! "Even if she is well-informed, she has never heard of such a love triangle, the love between people and ghosts is not over, and the heroine is still half-hearted!

It's the Qinglou woman who sells herself, that's also the price is clearly marked, this heroine is good, not only sorry for her fiancΓ©, but also fell in love with the man who killed her fiancΓ©, and she also fell in love with the ghost's fiancΓ©......

The plot does have ups and downs, and it's exciting enough.

Tang Zangyue's eyes fell on the poor scholar: "You need to highlight the helplessness of the female protagonist, the strong domineering of the second male, the deep roots of the male protagonist's love as a human being, and the resentment and temperament after turning into a powerful ghost, so that this story can progress." ”

The poor scholar touched the lifeline and nodded, "Okay, I know." ”

The old bustard couldn't help but say, "Master, what about the follow-up?" You're too appetizing. ”

(End of chapter).

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