April Summary
Write to 700,000 words.
Summing up again.
It can be seen from the subscription results that the main line of "Chinese football" is really a big failure for his mother.
Even, the whole "football" part, may not be very pleasing.
I've thought about why.
Because the early stage was written about running.
The connection between marathon and sprint is extremely close and interlocking.
This part is also the most fully written.
However, the span to football is equivalent to screening out the "running" part of the readers.
At the same time, if you like to read football texts, the first hundred or so chapters are not written about football.
Originally, this paragraph was expected to be written in millions of words, but since I don't like to read it, let's cut it.
In the process of this reflection, I have unearthed a few other points that I can write about.
I'll adjust it again.
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- A good question is half the answer.
I now suddenly understand why the first two books collapsed later.
I thought it was a problem with the finale.
Didn't think about the finale in advance.
So for this book, I thought about the finale in advance.
Several sections of the outline were also made.
But, it is written, in terms of results, it proves that the path is still wrong.
So something must have gone wrong.
So, I thought about the main line again.
The problem with the main line is that -
Not enough pits dug ......
The original motivation in the heart is not enough......
The sense of anticipation has been greatly diminished.
The main goal is not strong enough...... In other words, the attraction and excitement of this main line itself are not enough, and readers do not recognize it.
Take running, for example:
Practicing sports since childhood, he was injured in the iliotibial band and went all the way to the final world champion.
This story line is extremely full and powerful.
So it was written successfully.
But football ......
The original motivation in the heart is insufficient, and the foreshadowing is not enough, so it is much worse than the running part.
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Of course, I probably know that this is not my problem, it is a common problem in almost all cities.
That is: the length that the first main line can support is only 500,000 words, to about 1 million words.
If it is longer, the rhythm will slow down in the early stage and appear watery.
In the past, the urban bigwigs all wrote and wrote, and began to cultivate immortals, which is also a road, but they have long been aesthetically fatigued.
As for now......
I've got some new things to think about, but I'm still figuring it out for the time being.
The main story, the sense of anticipation, the characters......
Piece by piece.
And also...... Because I was too afraid of being harmonized, I "missed" a lot of wonderful plots that could have been written, and I didn't dare to write them.
The scale here can be grasped more chicken thieves.
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It's long, it's really hard to write.
It's hard to start a business.
Starting a business only needs to grasp a little advantage, and you can get up quickly.
Long-form, there can be no obvious shortcomings.
My current skills can only support me to achieve excellent results.
If you want to make up for it, you still need to make it up, one by one, one by one.
When will it be almost made up, I guess...... And it is.
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(End of chapter)