First of all, I'll have fun.

That is, in fact, at the very beginning of the article, my setting for Lao Eleven here is very, very simple: I set him to be a primordial with insufficient ability, and he was lured deep by the Randan Empire with his own legion, and then directly killed, and the legion was destroyed.

Later, I felt that this setting was more or less degradous: even Conrad shouldn't be so ashamed, so I strengthened him by 100 million points, and then the old eleven 2.0 became a much-anticipated [perfecter] (mainly because I heard a speculation at the time that there was a commander before Horus)

Then, considering that he became the original body that was erased, then he must have committed something angry, so the name of Old Eleven 3.0, that is, [Menger], was officially born, and at that time, my setting for Old Eleven was: a flesh and blood reformer who cooperated with the alien, and then was sold by his alien consultants in the war with Ran Dan.

Yes, until this time, the old eleven was a shameful thing.

But after a while......

As the plot progressed little by little, I suddenly had an idea, mainly because I happened to play a game mod called TNO, and there was a character in this mod called Heydrich.

One thing to say, the timeline of Heydrich's shooting made me fall in love with him all of a sudden, so the idea of wanting to play some bumpy content surged in my mind: so after several revisions and reasoning, our current old eleven 4.0 [Heydrich] was born.

Who would have thought that he would be a disgraceful person who was defeated and died at first......

In fact, until I wrote the plot of the death of the eleventh, I have been adjusting and improving the image of this character, so it does make the plot seem very draggy, mainly because one of my writing habits is [flash of inspiration], whether it is the original Emperor Ran Dan or the current old eleven, it is the product of several flashes of inspiration.

Another writing habit is that I like to constantly patch up a story and improve a story in every way possible, and add a little rhetoric if I can: this should be clear to many readers, I like to prefix each paragraph a little bit when I write articles, and I vow to change this habit every time but not every time (covering my face)

The result is a procrastination: I am quite helpless to be reasonable, and I sometimes often think to myself about how I wrote these plots to more than two million words, and then have a deep self-doubt (the group members in the book friend group should be able to testify for me, I am a person who is on average two to three days and has a broken heart and goes crazy by the way)

Another point is actually the influence of accidents and daily factors, for example, the eleventh should be finished at the end of last month, but I just had a high fever at the end of the month, and the state of those two days was so bad that I didn't know what I was writing, so I put it off.

But after killing the eleventh, this problem should be alleviated: the main thing is that there are no big plot points in the future, it's nothing more than the return of the Hacker King and the Raven King, and the Perfect City event, and then it's a series of bad things almost to the end of the Great Expedition, and I think the overall style can still be kept a little lighter.

Next, I decided to shift the focus of the article to Morgan's interaction with other primitives: for example, Angel, a popular character who doesn't appear properly at all, and if the next plot is written about Morgan's Terra's Travels, Horus and Angel should officially appear.

By the way, there is a small difference from my initial overdue situation: because Morgan is a bad woman, she has fallen for the better, so angels will not be the ones who untie their hearts, and our St. Giles and Morgan are more like ......

……

Plastic sister flowers?

Add a silly Horus or a similarly plastic but substandard Foghem in the middle, and it's perfect.

Well, that's the main thing, and then I'll answer the questions I saw in the comment area and in the intermittent post (I said it all, if you have a problem, you can ask it, and I'll pay attention)

First of all, there is the problem of war scenes: I am really not good at war scenes and battle scenes, but everyone knows very well that the war hammer, what kind of war hammer is not Tata, so I can only write hard to find the feeling by the way, but it turns out that it is still ...... Not very successful.

Well...... I'll learn a lesson in the future and try to avoid this problem, in fact, I don't really want to write about the war scene of the old eleven, but this boss has been paved for so long, and if I don't write his ending earth-shattering, there is really a feeling of unfinished ending, and I have to hold on to it.

Although it still seems to be unfinished......

So as I said earlier, I plan to shift the focus of the plot to other primitives, and write family ethics dramas honestly (it's just that if the characters of each primordial want to be distinct, it's not much simpler than war)

The second problem is the problem of this guy Johnson.

Everyone can see that Johnson is definitely the first supporting role in this book now: insert a sentence here, in fact, I initially positioned the lion king as a second-line supporting role, who still remembers that I said at the end of the first volume that I wanted to write about the lion king? At that time, I thought that it would be a great success for me to write Morgan's position in the heart of the lion king second only to Coswayne.

The result......

A flash of inspiration...... It's all a flash of inspiration......

Then, the Lion King of the Great Expedition is actually a very interesting character: this guy belongs to both the style and the comedian, jumping left and right between the reliable destroyer and the double reed of the Second Empire, and adding a spoonful of ignorance, there is one thing to say, I once almost wrote the lion king down, but finally braked on the corner here in the death of the old eleven, and the lion king's forced character was still successfully saved by me.

The current Lion King is actually more difficult to write than the original guy: he has to be both reliable and interesting at the same time, and by the way, on the basis of the original ignorance of people's hearts, to improve his explosive character without changing it a little, and the slightest difference in the charm of this guy is more than half of the character.

By the way, there is another point, that is, there is a question about the lion king and the war marshal: in fact, until now, there are only people who can use the word war marshal to tease the lion king, alpha is half of it, which is what he did in the original book, and Riemann Ruth is also one, but the wolf king himself is very shrewd, and the rest is Morgan, but this depends more on Morgan's position in the lion king's heart.

Until now, the Lion King is actually not a complete battle marshal demon, Morgan can use the war marshal to tease the lion king, that is because her name is Morgan, except for Morgan, other people's interactions with the lion king rarely involve the war marshal: just like the first few times when Conrad persuaded the lion king, everyone thought that he was using the war marshal to persuade him, but in fact, Conrad came with a reasonable basis, the word war marshal is not so panacea, even if the war marshal is a catnip, the lion king is not a real cat.

One more digression: the Dark Angel Legion here actually has a very good military force, because according to the information I have consulted, the Dark Angel had about 60,000 people at the time of the meeting with Johnson, and after the three Randan Wars, this number [1 out of 10], that is, less than 6,000.

And in my case, the Dark Angel still has more than 30,000 Terra veterans under the influence of Morgan, and the foundation is still there, I never think that it was the Randan War that defeated the First Legion, but after the Randan War, Johnson continued to work intensively for another century, and the continuous bloodshed dragged down the Dark Angel.

But that's okay, now we have Luther, who has a stable mindset, Morgan on demand, and the endorsement of Johnson and the Emperor: witness the rise of the Caliban Star Nation, and Johnson is about to be crowned with ambition!

Of course, the siege of Terra said that the Dark Angels could pull out more than 10,000 Terra veterans, so I don't care about that......

And one last question: that is, the so-called mom of the Dawnbreaker.

I don't think the Dawnbreakers' moms are a lot of serious (I'm sure), the Dawnbreakers do love Morgan very much, but that doesn't mean they're moms who have lost their minds.

The real mom is Karn's kind of unconditional madness, and the three representative characters of the Dawnbreaker: Bayar is the thinnest image as a force leader, and there are no Mama Bao deeds in my impression, and the wild goose Hector hasn't appeared for a long time (don't rush, I'll try to let you out right away), but Hecht's feelings for Morgan, I think Astarte's feelings for the original body, are fine.

In the end, Lana, as the most portrayed Daybreaker, may be the closest to the setting of Mabao, but please also pay attention to one problem: Rana has never brainlessly supported any of Morgan's madness, and whenever Morgan went crazy or chose Tata to drive, Lana was very determined to stop him, and his sanity was always on the line, not like Karn.

If you really want to say mom bao, these two are not as good as Virgo's (music) when they are tied up.

In fact, I've personally been avoiding the so-called rotten stalk problem.,Just like someone reacted to Ahriman's Arena Martial God Terrier being said too much.,I'm consciously avoiding.,I'll also look at each inter-post several times.,To grasp the problems in the article (so,What questions do you have to write in the inter-post.,I'm not used to reading the comment area.,It's good to inter-post.,I'm sure I'll change it if there's a problem)

Another point is that my pen power is limited after all, and some characters really can't be written, such as our most powerful and domineering brother Dun, even if I asked Morgan to dig him up, but I didn't have time to write about him at all.

I had thought of describing these Astarte warriors with a colorful daily life of the Legion, but I found that I could not write about a colorful daily life at all: because I did not have a colorful daily life at all!

(Weeping...... (*)）

Okay, that's all I want to say now, thank you for supporting me to write until now, can let me calm down and continue to finish my book, this is the first time I have written such a long book, there must be a lot of problems, can only be found and improved little by little.

In addition, I was also thinking that after writing so many war scenes, I personally really wanted to start two games: I have been very fond of events like Anko recently, and I had a very, very strong Anke idea.

(But the starting point is to write Anke?) ）

To put it simply, I'm here to ask you what you think: if most book friends don't object, I want to write something about the Anko type, which may be:

The Franco-style Astarte Legion and their original Joan of Arc

Happy.

Of course,If you want to see other styles or have something you want to order,You can also say it in the intermediate:I may write a little extra in the next one or two days.,At most, it won't be more than two days.,The right is to adjust the mood of writing to the collapse now.,It won't affect the next text.。

Finally, I hung the group number of the book again: 684947131 (for practical reasons, I was more impressed by the proposals in the group, everyone just added, I just recently upgraded the number of people in the group ( ̇▽ ̇))

Anyway,That's it.,Today's update is relatively early.,There's no burden.,If the response is good, I'll start preparing for the extra~.

*。 (ˊωˋ*)*。

(End of chapter)