Looking at the two lyrics written separately on the paper, Lin Bai groaned.

The two capitals can be regarded as short video Internet celebrity songs on the earth.

The former is "Girl", which has become the exclusive BGM of a major Internet celebrity on the mainstream short video platform.

Netizens even played a stalk into a Hangzhou city song.

Thinking back on these efforts, Lin Baiduo remembered two or three more lyrics.

"For you to go up the mountains and to the sea, for you to empty your pockets......"

"Patience for you?"

“……”

Thinking about it, Lin Bai muttered to himself: "It seems that the lyrics are basically similar to those repeated, change and fill in them slightly." ”

"It's mostly the composition part."

It's not that he can't remember the three or two lyrics of the most climactic of those classic songs in his youth, but he doesn't want to destroy the classics.

The Internet celebrity saliva song changed a few words, but it is not very destructive.

You can sort it out like this.

Then Lin Bai looked at the latter again, the song was called "That Girl Said to Me", and his impression didn't seem to be bad.

Later, the short video era was re-popular.

The lyrics are not very repetitive, but the only memory points of the public are: the girl said to me, saying that I was like a fool... Something like that.

Lin Bai had a plan: "The score and timbre are well organized, and the lyrics are coordinated." ”

This time, he wasn't going to ask anyone.

Writing is bad songs, and the main purpose is to improve one's complete composition ability by completing the finished product.

………

In the next few days, Lin Bai's life returned to normalcy.

Update Weibo news at 7 o'clock in the morning, or gag with netizens, or run away after bubbling.

Then fitness, reading, calligraphy, vocal music, and ......

Expand the lyrics of the two songs with their existing capabilities.

Occasionally, I listen to stock song works and compare the daily guidance of vocal teacher Chen Jia to determine my debut song.

The difference between a song and a song is that there is a full set of content, including the original soundtrack, the music video, etc.

The reference value is 100%.

…………

Thursday the 12th.

At four o'clock in the afternoon, Lin Bai took a Babos MPV business car given by Songle back to school.

I came earlier than usual, and I just got out of the car and ran into Lu Man.

"Hello senior sister."

"Junior came a little early today."

Lin Bai pointed to the car next to him: "I brought some special products for everyone, why don't you send the senior sister to the residence now?" ”

Lu Man laughed when he heard this: "Okay." ”

He asked again: "Have you ever visited the teacher's house these days?" ”

"I went back to Yangcheng on the day I went there." Lin Bai replied with a smile, "Thank you, senior sister, for your words and deeds." ”

Lu Man nodded happily: "Don't send me back alone, take it directly to the classroom." ”

Lin Bai responded.

Immediately asked the new life assistants Xiaoyu and Xiaowei to help and bring the specialties to the small classroom where they were taught.

Although Songle did not give Lin Bai a new agent, he gave him a team.

Its members include drivers, assistants in life, security, and bands.

Among them, the life assistant mainly cooperates with the agent Xiaowei.

Xiaoyu, like Xiaowei, will appear in all of Lin Bai's schedules, mainly to solve some daily trivial matters.

The point is to let Lin Bai focus on business, don't worry about small things, otherwise......

He couldn't become a front-line in two years, and Lin Bai could lie and say that Songle did not provide an environment to concentrate on work.

In terms of fulfilling the contract, Wu Wen is very professional, because these are not counted in the 30 million resource package.

The specialties that Lin Bai brought back from the magic capital, the ones that are seriously called specialties are Chongming cakes, butterfly cakes, and Gaoqiao muffins.

There are also souvenirs, big-name silk scarves, card holders, etc.

It cost a total of fifty or sixty thousand.

Wu Wen is too rich and doesn't like to be given gifts, but she is quite satisfied that Lin Bai remembers to bring gifts to familiar friends and teachers when she goes out.

In addition, Li Lanhui is also quite satisfied.

Lin Bai came to the school for a walk with her that night when she came back from the magic capital, and brought a small amount of special products for her to taste fresh.

However, now, after Li Lanhui walked into the classroom, her face was as serious as usual, her eyes swept over everyone, and she started teaching directly.

Concentrated dismantling of each problem.

In the end, Li Lanhui specially set aside a few minutes to look at Lu Man and the five of them.

"Your second year of research is almost over, go to Huale Online to register an account to try what your level looks like in the market."

"Don't use your real name, I'll look at it at the end of the year."

Speaking of this, Li Lanhui looked at Lin Bai: "Xiao Lin, if they encounter any difficulties and come to you privately, don't interfere." ”

Seeing Lin Bai nodding, Li Lanhui said again: "You can only rely on yourself to improve your composition ability now, don't come here in the future." ”

Lin Bai bent down and saluted: "Okay, thank you teacher." ”

Forty or fifty days have passed unconsciously, and Lin Bai's composition level has reached a point where it is difficult to improve through non-individual teaching.

Because......

Composer: LV4 (132.5/200)+

The middle boost doesn't use stat points.

The 'sequelae' of the experience card is absorbed, but he also relies on daily composition and refers to Li Lanhui's composition notes to improve deeply.

“……”

After class, Lin Bai accompanied Li Lanhui around the campus.

Li Lanhui asked kindly: "In the future, you will have less and less time to come to school." ”

Lin Bai thought for a while and replied: "It should be, I will be busy in the future, and I want to make my debut as a singer." ”

"Is it difficult for you to become a first-line singer in two years?"

"It's not big, I've studied the relevant standards."

"That's good, you don't have to think about going back to school all the time when you're busy, you can go farther and farther, and we're happy to watch."

"Thank you, teacher."

"I have a lot of eyes, the singer circle is not like the lyrics circle, and I am afraid that there will be all kinds of inexplicable contradictions in the future."

"Understood."

“……”

…………

…………

Saturday the 14th.

At ten o'clock in the morning, Lin Bai logged in to Huale.com, and then published the two songs that had been completed on his homepage.

The name follows the original.

In advance, he had registered the copyright and negotiated the corresponding matters with Xingchen, which is the proper meaning of the question.

After that, Lin Bai reprinted it on Weibo and updated it into a dynamic, with the accompanying text:

"I wrote two songs seriously, and everyone can take a look at them casually. PS: This time, the main hit is to listen to persuasion, write badly, and tap the sharp comment"

It's not an exaggeration at all, it's serious.

The two songs went back and forth no less than fifty times.

Of course, the results are good, as if the level of composition has improved by leaps and bounds again.

Composer: LV4 (143/200)+

Still no stat points.

The previous lyrics featured a squatting system song reward.

This time highlights the authentic level of a badly written lyrics.

On the contrary, although Lin Bai knew that he would not be able to produce lyrics, he still practiced lyrics many times, but there was still no change.

It may also be the content of independent efforts, and the system does not include it as attributes......

Lin Bai waited patiently for a while before refreshing the page, of course he was not expecting praise, but wanted to see the excitement and relax his brain.

The jewels are in front of them, and they will be sprayed.

"I was tempted to find a meme to describe my emotions right now, but I couldn't find one."

Blogger...... You don't have to be so persuasive, you can't say it's bad, you can only say that these two songs are true and too much saliva repeated. ”

"I won't comment sharply, and I will take a screenshot of Huale.com's professional sharp evaluation."

“……”

Chubby Bojam is called a high-intensity surfer, and she can be seen everywhere: "'Old man, subway, mobile phone'.

"Don't be so polite to bloggers, it's rotten, the first word is rotten."

"Professional sharp reviews really save face for bloggers, I'm afraid he hasn't won the award, and there is a trace of noodles in the circle?!"

“……”

Lin Bai saw at a glance that the sharp comments of insiders were very pertinent.

pointed out some flaws in the lyrics and songs, and even put forward a small improvement suggestion.

It also gave a high evaluation from an objective point of view:

"Mr. Lin's complete composition ability has improved so quickly, and the lyrics are basically simple with melody, which is not very beautiful, so it's hard for Mr. Lin."

“……”

Lin Bai looked at the excitement, and immediately participated: "Bologna, don't you have a black powder posture here." ”

Chubby Bolognese: "Ahhhh ”

There is no money to punch the card: "I dare to bubble, in short, everything has nothing to do with me, the blogger is so special Allah to listen to it!" ”

Almost at the same time, 'just changed the name and sang the opposite' inserted: "You guys are really a good trick, you know in advance that you can't write a good song, and then pretend, heh!" ”

"Look, I'll just say that Jiang Lang is exhausted."

"What kind of garbage saliva song is this, it was actually written by the cutting-edge songwriter of the year?!!"

"The lyrics are really how greasy and greasy, how pretentious and pretentious! Moaning without disease!! ”

"Saying that garbage is all lifting!"

“……”

Chubby Bolognese: "Blogger have a good experience, don't rush to run~"

There is no money to rush the card: "Yes, yes, this is just the beginning." ”

It's really just getting started.

In the two hours after Lin Bai released his two new songs, the number of comments on his latest Weibo news exceeded 30,000 for the first time!

10% of the activity is mainly reflected in likes, and the number of comments is generally less than 1% of the total number of followers.

Lin Bai's latest fans are more than 250,000, and the latest news should be within 2,000 comments within 24 hours.

Now more than a dozen times!

The scolding accounts for 9 percent, and they are basically all:

"You **** me *** what ** dog ***"

"A few ****"

The remaining 1 percent, half of which is questioned.

"Can you get twelve Chinese music at this level? Best Composition? Cutting-edge songwriter? ”

"I can't believe it was you who shouted 'Chinese music is the best'! If it's all this kind of saliva song, a few handfuls of Chinese will be in your mouth. ”

“……”

At noon, Lin Bai was directly scolded at the end of the hot search.

#新锐词曲人新歌超烂

In addition to doubts, there is scolding in the topic.

Zhuyu is in front, and an excellent songwriter who can control a variety of styles suddenly writes saliva songs, and netizens who pay attention to the music circle feel unbearable.

So much so that Pei Ming, who saw the movement, hurriedly dialed Lin Bai's phone.

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PS: The selection is an Internet celebrity song that has been popular for a while, and if some Internet celebrity songs are completely reviewed, saliva is saliva, but the degree of singing will not be bad, so only excerpts are made.

For example, Meow Meow is one of the top ten of the year in Billboard Greater China, and the top ten of the year include Dong Chou's "Waiting for You to Get Out of Class", "Young and Promising", "Decent", and "Countdown......

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