Guo Yunchen's change in mentality, Song Huanxi didn't know.

Although she had decided to temporarily close her pen, after receiving a reply from Mr. Wine and Story, which had been renamed as Mr. Wine and Story, she couldn't help but ask the other party for advice, and mailed "The Story of Wonton Shop" and Rongchang's rejection of the manuscript together.

Of course, Song Huanxi re-copied Rongchang's rejection letter - for Mr. Ugly Characters, she has a subtle psychology that the ugliness of the family cannot be publicized.

The next day, Song Huanxi received a reply from no wine and no joy.

"Hello, Miss Yixiao, see the words like faces.

I have read both the manuscript and the letter, and I think the other party's evaluation is very appropriate.

Your writing and writing are all in the house, and the characters you have created are very fleshed out. ”

Song Huanxi was overjoyed, what the hero saw was really the same!

The comment given to her by Mr. No Wine is exactly the same as Mr. Ugly Word!

"And yet—"

No wine, no joy, a turn:

"What about your story?

Indeed, I saw Brother Fugui, I saw Atubo, and I saw a shadow, sitting in the corner drinking coffee-

Just when I was expecting some story to happen between them, you ended? ”

Song Huanxi frowned, the evaluation of no wine and joy was still the same as that of Mr. Ugly Word, but she was a little confused.

Tale? Brother Ah Sheng and Ah Shuibo, such a rich experience, isn't it a story?

Mr. Ugly's advice is to watch more movies, and she has a plan for this: when the training class starts tomorrow, she will ask Director Zou and Pei if there is a movie screening room or something!

Rongchang Pictures has all the facilities, and Pei's family, which is quite strong, should also have it, right?

I don't know what kind of advice Mr. will give if he doesn't have a drink-

Song Huanxi couldn't wait to watch it:

"Take your "The Story of the Wonton Shop" as an example.

Among them, Atubo's experience can be written as an independent short story.

For example, when Atubo retreated after his success, and his son provoked public anger, would there be such a scene: The neighbors who bought things, you complained every word of the word, and gradually became angry, shouting together to let Atubo come out?

If you are a passer-by and see such a noise, will you stop and take a look at the bustle?

When your readers see such a scene, will they want to stand with you, take out a handful of melon seeds, and watch this excitement together? ”

"You see, that's probably the funniest part of the whole story, and you didn't write it at all!

Because Atuber's experience is only hearsay, not what you have seen with your own eyes, you are completely unaware of which part is interesting. ”

Hit the nail on the head!

Song Huanxi was like pulling out the clouds and seeing the sun, and he was enlightened in an instant!

Indeed, whether it is Brother Ah Sheng or Ah Shuibo, she is just hearsay, neither seeing it with her own eyes, nor being substituted for it!

Song Huanxi's spirit was lifted, and he only felt that this Mr. who was not happy with wine was like a god, and he was really a god!

Song Huanxi watched it intently:

"Solving this problem is both simple and difficult, what you lack is experience, and experience takes time to precipitate.

You have to observe the things around you more and always put yourself in the role of a passerby, is this scene enough to gossip? Is it worth stopping and watching?

If the answer is yes, then write down the scene and write it into your essay later! ”

"Settle down for a while, and when one day, you see a person, touched by his experience, and naturally want to use your pen, with him as the protagonist, to write a story, you can start to prepare to write!

When this idea is like a volcanic eruption in your heart, and you can't suppress it no matter what, you can put it to paper. ”

The vertical version of the letter is really convenient to read, Song Huanxi doesn't need to nod her head extra, she read the first half of the letter from Mr. Wujiu and Buhuan over and over again, only to feel that every sentence is golden and jade.

In her heart, no wine and no joy is already a good teacher!

If you don't read the second half of the letter, Yiyou will do it too.

Song Huanxi sighed and looked at the second half of the letter:

"I'm living at a friend's house for the time being, you know.

A few days ago, two friends and I went to the ballroom for a small gathering, and we met a Miss Cheng, who was beautiful and kind, and invited me to live with her.

Should I say yes to her offer? ”

Song Huanxi sighed again, the last letter was in the tavern, and she met a Miss Xu, but although Miss Xu was beautiful, her heart was not good enough, so she didn't invite him to live with her.

If she remembers correctly, Wujiu Wuhuan mentioned in her first reply letter that he was going to take the pen name Gu Long, just because his girlfriend's name was Gu Feng.

It seems that this Miss Gu Feng is already an ex-girlfriend.

Song Huanxi secretly guessed that this Mr. who was not happy with alcohol should be a talented person born and has a rich net worth, otherwise where would so many beauties meet by chance!

Beauties aren't stupid!

It's just that she doesn't have any experience in love, so how can she teach him?

After thinking for a moment, Song Huanxi directly substituted for her stepmother An Xiuniang and replied:

"Hello Mr. No Wine!

The letter has been read, and it can be described as deafening, and what you said is very true.

What I wrote in my book is all from hearsay, and I don't know what I really see, and I don't know what it really is about, so I decided to follow what Mr. said and precipitate for a while!

When there is a bamboo in my heart, I will write again, and when the time comes, I will ask Mr. to give me advice! ”

"In addition, I will only mention one point about Miss Zheng that you mentioned.

What you see now is her beautiful appearance after wearing makeup, if you live together, are you ready to see her sloppy appearance when she wakes up in the morning, unkempt, yawning and going to the toilet?

Yes, she probably also wore a pair of boxer shorts and a white tank top. ”

Song Huanxi is not exaggerating at all, An Xiuniang is like this, and I don't know if she is used to marrying the He family for the second time, and the old man He is not used to it!

Anyway, she was frightened one morning, and thought it was a homeless man from somewhere who broke into the house.

At that time, her father was still there, An Xiuniang didn't know how ugly she looked, and glanced at her with slanted eyes: "What happens between husband and wife, where do the children know!" ”

Song Huanxi said that, and the custom stuffed a return envelope with the address written in it.

……

I received her reply the next day.

After several letters and replies, Miss Yixiao has become the common object of attention of the prodigal trio.

As soon as Xiong Yaoying opened the letter, Yu Xilou and Lin Ziqi came over left and right-

After reading two sentences, Yu Xilou looked strange: "She really believes your nonsense?!" ”

What to observe and think more, when Brother Yaoying writes martial arts novels, who to observe!

Xiong Yaoying glared at him: "What nonsense! I have already entered the house, she is just a first glimpse of the door, I guide her, naturally from a high position! ”

"Besides, I asked her to accumulate life experience, where is wrong! You wait, I'll write your upside down in the ballroom yesterday in a novel another day! ”

In the West Building: "......"

I really shouldn't owe it!

I forgot that this guy is a novelist!