058 Once upon a time there was a little daughter-in-law (second watch)
Qin Dao didn't sell it, and said straight to the point: "I told you just now, the first element of the script is unexpected. ”
"If you surprise each plot and end up with a climax, then this is a very wonderful script!"
Looking at the students who were all stupid under the podium, Qin Dao said twice: "Don't talk nonsense, let's just use examples to illustrate!" ”
He erased the words on the blackboard again and knocked on the blackboard: "The beginning of the story is a young daughter-in-law with two young children, who received bad news early in the morning, her husband, who was out on business, died. ”
Qin Dao wrote down the three words of the little daughter-in-law, wrote the two young children in the remarks, and pulled an arrow to the side, writing that the husband died.
"Just when the little daughter-in-law was crying and grabbing the ground, a group of creditors came to the door!"
His plot line has taken a step further and written the creditor.
"When she was desperate, the rich man who had coveted her beauty for a long time in the township appeared, and this rich man was very old and obscene."
"The landlord said that as long as the little daughter-in-law is willing to marry him, he can help her solve the debt problem."
Qin Dao wrote down the three words of the rich man again.
"At this time, another person appeared, he was the childhood sweetheart of the little daughter-in-law before she got married, and because she had no money, she was broken up by the little daughter-in-law's parents."
"Now that he has returned to his hometown, he hopes that his little daughter-in-law will marry him."
Qin Dao looked around at the students who were obviously relieved, and he sighed in his heart, and continued: "But he said that he has already married a rich lady's daughter and daughter-in-law outside, and he can only be a shady outer room, and he can't bring two children with him. ”
"The old rich man also said that he didn't want two children either."
Qin Dao wrote down the last plot character, a childhood sweetheart who returned to his hometown in fine clothes.
Qin Dao's slender index finger slid over the characters on the blackboard one by one:
The little daughter-in-law (two young children) - the husband died - the creditor - the old rich man - the childhood sweetheart who returned to his hometown
"How's it going, is there a ring after a ring, and the feeling of orgasms one after another?"
Qin Dao looked at the students of the training class with a smile on his face.
Wang Yu couldn't help but shout: "I don't feel the climax, it's getting worse and worse, it's true!" ”
Qin Dao laughed dumbly, he coughed lightly and said: "In short, the plot is going to become more and more intense, when the protagonist is walking a tightrope, we are going to send a hurricane to the protagonist!" ”
"Next, let's do a simple exercise."
After Qin Dao pulled out another arrow after the plot line on the blackboard, and put a question mark: "Now, please continue to write this plot." ”
After a pause, he smiled and said, "There will be a reward for writing it." ”
Not every student is like Song Huanxi, who will prepare paper and pen in advance.
Qin Dao had already prepared for this, took out a stack of paper and pens, and each student was given a piece of paper and a pen.
Back on the podium, Qin Dao glanced at his watch: "Okay, students, it's limited to 15 minutes!" ”
Song Huanxi stared at the blank paper in front of her, and she found that her old problem had returned: she once again had a blank feeling that she couldn't write.
The sound of brushing was already ringing in her ears, and it was obvious that the classmates around her were not as entangled as her.
Song Huanxi's eyes fell on the long list of plot developments that she copied into her notebook, not so much a climax, but a thrilling step.
The appearance of each new character seems to push this young daughter-in-law deeper into the abyss.
If you follow the story trend of screenwriter Qin, it should be another layer of bad news, but Song Huanxi doesn't want to write like this.
She inexplicably felt that there should be hope for people to live.
Just like her family, her father, who is the pillar of the family, died, and the family should have collapsed in an instant, but in fact, although she was stretched, she stumbled until she reached adulthood.
Song Huanxi actually has some gratitude to An Xiuniang, there is an adult at home, and there are only three underage children, which are two completely different concepts.
Therefore, she went against her father's last wish and asked Senior Brother Feng to inquire about the He family's family background and personality.
If you don't want to continue the bad news-
The first thought in Song Huanxi's mind was that a noble person descended from the sky, and even had an irrepressible rebellious impulse: Qin Da Villain can constantly arrange bad guys to appear, why can't she arrange it, and the good guys who can help the little daughter-in-law's family appear? !
After the wine and the pot water, Song Huanxi's nickname roster finally appeared a second character: Qin Da Villain.
Song Huanxi thought about it for a long time, but still denied the idea.
It's really simple for a noble person to descend from heaven, but can he really change his fate?
For example, she rejected the checks of President Chen and Guo Hansang successively, because she knew that the funded money would run out sooner or later, and what would happen after it was spent?
It is better to rely on yourself now and seek a job in a down-to-earth manner, which is the long-term way.
Song Huanxi felt something in her heart, and an idea in her mind gradually took shape, she finally picked up the pen and dropped the first word seriously-
"Okay," Qin Dao glanced at his watch: "Please put down the pen in your hand, who will come first?" ”
Wang Yu did not hesitate: "I! ”
He stood up, picked up the paper in front of him, and read: "Just when the little daughter-in-law was in a dilemma with a sad face, a hero fell from the sky, he left the green dragon and the right white tiger, a black bear plucked out his heart, and another white crane spread his wings, directly beating a group of creditors to the ground, and beat away the old rich man and the hypocrite!" ”
After Wang Yu finished reading it aloud, he raised his head and looked at Qin Dao proudly: "Teacher, how did I write?" ”
Qin Dao: "...... Oh, what is the identity of this hero? Why would you help this mother? ”
Wang Yu waved his hand impatiently: "It's all said that it fell from the sky!" Aren't the heroes in martial arts all falling from the sky?! ”
Qin Dao: "...... Okay, I got it. ”
He chose to ignore Wang Yu directly: "Next." ”
Wang Yu sat down stupidly, hum, forget it, he doesn't care about a dead emperor!
This time, it was Qin Haoyang who stood up, he coughed twice and cleared his throat, and read: "Just when the scene was scorching, there was a burst of shouting, what do you want to do to my goddaughter?" A white-haired rich old lady hurried over in a sedan chair for four people. ”
"It turned out that this rich old lady fell into the water a few years ago, but fortunately she was rescued by her little daughter-in-law, so she recognized her godfather."
Qin Dao interrupted him expressionlessly: "May I ask this classmate, how did the old lady sitting in the sedan chair of four fall into the water?" Was it thrown into the river by four palanquins? ”
The audience burst into laughter, especially Wang Yu laughed the loudest: "Hahaha, you fool, you are not as good as my hero!" ”
Qin Haoyang sat down stupidly, is this still my brother?! When he went back, he told his mother not to burn taro chicken for a month!
Don't cook any of his brother's favorite dishes!
Qin Dao: Boss, the students are quite stupid, so let's disband as soon as possible!
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I feel like this chapter is a bit spiritual.
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