Written at the end of the volume
Hello everyone, this is Yu.
First of all, I apologize, this volume ended hastily like this, and it wasn't that I couldn't write it, but it was caused by the contradictory mood of wanting to write and wanting to finish it sooner.
It's the same as when I wrote the second volume, I set a lot of things at the beginning, but if I write it, I guess I can't beat hundreds of chapters, just like a certain treasure in the comment area said, "If you write it again, you can write it as a separate book."
In fact, at the beginning, in my setting, I wanted to learn from the two films I watched a few years ago.
They are "I Create Urban Legends in Tokyo" by the full service, and "My Lilliputia" by Xiaobai in green shirts.
At first, I planned to write the world of the second disease as a Japanese urban legend, similar to the plot of Rutsuki Station, Hanako, Human-faced Dog, and Rift Girl, and then I coded a few chapters at home after work, and I always felt uncomfortable in the middle of the night, and I had nightmares about this that night, so that I didn't have any energy at all the next day, and passed it directly.
The second edition is written with various breakthrough materials around Rokka, and at first I wanted to write about Japanese Hyakki, for example, the breakthrough material needed for Rokka is the eyes of Hyakome Ghost.
Later, it felt too complicated, and a lot of chapters would be derived, so I simply passed it and replaced it with the most common in-game breakthrough materials to speed up the progress of the plot.
In the original setting, the treasures of the game party must be clear, such as the breakthrough materials of weapons, the breakthrough materials of talents, and the copies of holy relics.
At first, I was going to write a small world of that type of secret realm, and then go on an adventure, but then I threw it all away in order to speed up the plot.
Like a natural disaster turned into a mysterious setting, it is taken from the calamity converter in "My Lilliputia", which seems to be called that? I don't know, but if it's just a natural disaster, I feel like it's going to be beyond the limits of what the world can handle, so I add some mystery born of resentment.
It stands to reason that there is no problem with the outline, it appears in the rhythm.
From the beginning to the foreshadowing, climax, and end of a disaster, it is not a problem to write a dozen chapters and dozens of chapters, but this book is comprehensive! It's really not appropriate to write so many things in one world.
I never found a suitable rhythm, so I could only slow and fast, which made me nervous.
The second is a quick wear like this, and the first point should be to continuously deepen the image of the protagonist, rather than behind the scenes.
If you want to write behind the scenes, you have to write group portraits, and then you are afraid that the rhythm will be lengthened, and it will naturally collapse.
The next volume will fully absorb the lessons of this volume, and continue to deepen the characters to write, and will not pull other messy things.
There is also a more catastrophic point.
It's the setting at the beginning of this book.,I want more treasures to be able to read and understand.,Not just the treasures who have played Genshin Impact.。
Because I've seen a similar book before, and I haven't played that game before, and I watched it with relish.
As a result, I made a stupid mistake again, and added a lot of Genshin Impact elements to the second volume, which made many treasures look confused.
For example, the process of Liuhua obtaining the Vision of God, veteran players of the game can definitely see that going to the boundary between life and death is one of the background plots of Hu Tao, and those secret rivers of refining the heart are taken from the 2.8 island version of the previous year, the process of Xinyan's secret realm.
It's just that Xin Yan uses a mirror, and Liuhua uses a river.
Xin Yan broke it by himself, and Liuhua relied on the power of his friends.
That's all for the topic of game elements, and the treasures can rest assured that the next volume will drastically reduce the game elements, at least as much as the first volume of Noelle, and there will be no more chaos in the second volume.
Other than that, let's talk about the plot.
Originally, America was portrayed as a villain, and there were many scenes, including the walking corpse researched by Qianghui Pharmaceutical, and in the follow-up plot, they will become the model of America's new transcendent human.
In Sanae and Fennel's trial character plots, they will be decrypted one by one, such as hitting the Amerika Walking Corpse Experimental Base and other plots.
But because I was afraid of lengthening the plot, I vetoed them all.
For a while, I wondered if I really took this idea to open a new book, and I felt hiss~ It's really there, it's a head.
There is also the plot of Ten Flowers, and in my outline, Ten Flowers is also the owner of the Ice Vision.
She is the target of revenge, because America's aircraft carrier fleet was almost wiped out in the South Pacific, and the relatives and friends of the soldiers who served in the fleet learned the inside story, and in a fit of rage, they ran to Yingzhou to shoot Shihua to pave the way for Shihua to obtain the Vision of God.
I'm still afraid that it will be too long and I haven't written.
There is also a popular character in the second disease of the seven palaces, but I still haven't written it, because I can't grasp the rhythm problem, so it makes a mess, and the characters are very poorly portrayed, and I apologize again to the treasures here!
Okay, that's it for the second volume, let's talk about it for fun, and everyone can just watch it as a joke.
For example, last month, May, was the most unlucky month I have had in the past two years, including but not limited to the hospitalization of elders, gas leakage at home, scratching my wrist during the first rainstorm, high fever in Eryang, scraping off a small piece of meat in my right middle finger by the bottle mouth in the second rainstorm, choking on saliva for about ten minutes and almost not breathing, and the company is about to close down, etc.
I was so scared that I bought several pairs of red panties and red socks.
According to the cute owner of this book, 'Aloya', I may be in May when the water is reversed, and I will be unlucky when I encounter water.
Anyway, I finally survived the calamities of May, and I sincerely hope that I can transfer in June.
In June, after I finish the handover of the company, I will continue to make up the chapters, and there are dozens of chapters owed, which is really head-scratching.
In order to cure my own slackness, I want to raise the chapter of the third volume to 3,000 words, and cure myself who can't sit still.
Ahem~ Digression to this.
Let's talk about the third volume.
Sorry, not Wendy on the profile.
I don't want to write about brain holes, my hair is falling out badly, and I want to write something simple and crude.
Write an idea from a treasure in the book review section.
The dungeon world is pitch black bullets!
Our protagonist is the "sun!" that everyone loves and flowers bloom! ”
Spark Knight 'Klee'!
In short, it's an elf little Lori.,Well.,Carry a bomb with you.,Like a little Lori who bombs wildly.。
In the world of pitch-black bullets, Klee is no longer bound by Captain Jean and wants to blow everything up!
Fry it and you're done! Let Klee blow up the bastard who abused Lori in that world!
I'm dying of hunger, so I'm going to eat first.
See you tomorrow, treasures!
(End of chapter)