359 Textbook writing instruction (Supplement 10)

Song Huanxi's pen hung on the paper, but it didn't move for a long time.

Guo Yunchen saw the difficulty of transcendence, but he didn't know that it was even more difficult for Mr. Hongchen in his mouth to surpass!

Fundamentally speaking, Qin Dao's version of Liang Shanbo's original idea originated from Song Huanxi's practice in the screenwriting class of the student training class.

In other words, what Song Huanxi wants to surpass is not others, but herself.

No matter which writer he conceives a book, the protagonist of the original setting must be a perfect character created by bringing together all his ingenuity and exhausting the aura of heaven and earth.

If he were to overturn the original idea and create a better version, the first would keep jumping out and thwarting him.

Song Huanxi is in such a situation now.

All she could think of was Liang Shanbo sitting behind his desk, looking at her with a smile, as if everything was under his control!

What's even more hateful, he still has a Guo Hansang face!

Song Huanxi was in a stalemate for a long time, but finally put down the pen, she remembered that Mr. Wujiu said that when you can't put pen to paper, just look at the information you have accumulated.

The power you have accumulated is far greater than you think.

Information, about Liang Zhu, what information does she have?

Unexpectedly, Song Huanxi began to recall the Liang Zhu script written by other students in the training class.

Well, the first one is the cowardly version of Liang Shanbo, which can also be called the outer soft and inner rigid version of Liang Shanbo, who was taught a lesson by the bully Ma Wencai, and immediately woke up and decided to join the army.

Then there is the rollover group, Zhou Qi's group, the performance on the first day overturned, and the second day was impressive, Song Huanxi is willing to call it a calm version of Liang Shanbo-

Handsome is justice, Lao Tzu is handsome!

The third group is impressive, the heroic version of Zhu Yingtai, the three of them sleep together after drinking, and the older the son, the more he looks like Ma Wencai!

The last group –

It was she who created the perfect character, and was even favored by Qin Dao and changed it into a black version of the script, Liang Shanbo!

As a result, she just went out to shoot a scene, and was made into a butterfly specimen by Guan Zhizhou and slapped on the wall!

At that time, I couldn't cry or laugh when I read the script, but now, Song Huanxi just wants to laugh.

While reminiscing, she wrote down the main points of different versions of "Liang Zhu" in each group, and unconsciously, her smile crawled all over the corners of her eyes and eyebrows like a climbing tiger on the wall.

When all four groups were written, Song Huanxi picked up the notes and looked at them with a smile-

The cowardly version of Liang Shanbo

Calm version of Liang Shanbo

The heroic version of Zhu Yingtai

The belly black version of Liang Shanbo

Song Huanxi was slightly stunned, she suddenly discovered one thing, Liang Zhu Liang Zhu, Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, it is obviously a love story of two people, each version, but there is only one character, which is impressive.

Her gaze fell on the script version of "Liang Zhu" of Qin Dao in front of her-

The version of "Liang Zhu" used by Pei's seems to have the same problem?!

Zhuge Shanbo can be a god, but what about Yingtai?

Oh, she's playing hide and seek, hiding.

Hiding from Liang Shanbo, who pulled her out of the shower with him, hiding from the wolf ambition of the scumbag Marven who wanted to pull her to read at night, and hiding from the Keju game, the ball that always flew towards her intentionally or unintentionally!

This heroine-

It seems that anyone can play it.

In an instant, Song Huanxi thought of several female classmates in the actor training class, Shen Mengru, Zhu Shengxiao, Zhou Qi-

It's really anyone's play.

Song Huanxi's brows furrowed unconsciously, no, it shouldn't be like this, a character should be recognizable, she should be irreplaceable!

Song Huanxi looked at the right-hand side, where there was a neatly stacked, thick stack of letters, and on each letter, there was even a sticky note, noting the time of the correspondence and the main content of the letter.

Song Huanxi directly picked up the letter at the top - after her "Gillian and Ah Qiang" became a popular serial, Mr. Wu Jiu finally began to discuss deeper writing issues with her.

Like this one.

"Nuwa has created so many people, everyone has two noses and one eye, what makes different people different?

I think it's a personality, it's a different personality!

For example, a housewife, every day's work, is to clean the room, cook three meals a day, and maybe send the children to school-

If you write like this, then she is just an ordinary housewife, so ordinary that the reader will not have any impression of her after reading it.

What if the housewife, after sending off the children and cleaning the room, changed into a beautiful dress, sat on the balcony, sunbathed and drank red wine?

Doesn't it feel like she's elegant and has a lot of personality?

Trivial housework that did not bury her beauty in the slightest? ”

This can be called a textbook-style writing guide, Song Huanxi has read it countless times, and she still feels that she has benefited a lot when she reads it now.

She put down the letter paper in her hand, and her eyes fell on the note in front of her again, thoughtfully-

The five versions of Zhu Yingtai, except for the deviant Zhu Yingtai, are the other four like ordinary housewives in the example of Mr. No Drinking?

She is just an ordinary lady, a little lively but not personalized enough, so it is difficult to be impressive.

As for the heroic version of Zhu Yingtai -

Song Huanxi's brows furrowed, and he was too heroic, it is no exaggeration to say that this one is very reasonable to say that he is a man and a woman.

So, how to write her Yingtai in order to be impressive?

Thinking about it the other way, what is a lady who can't do something?

Climbing trees, digging birds' eggs, making a fire and roasting meat, drinking wine and eating meat -

Song Huanxi's brows furrowed again, these don't seem to be the skills that everyone should master, just like that housewife, drinking in her spare time, that can be her own habit.

Song Huanxi's gaze subconsciously swept towards the draft, and three Liang Shanbo, who were side by side, jumped into his eyes-

If...... Someone took her to do these things?!

And this person is-

Butterfly!

Song Huanxi's eyes became brighter and brighter, and the images of Zhu Yingtai and Liang Shanbo became clearer and clearer in her mind, and finally the two of them raised their feet at the same time and kicked Zhuge Shanbo, who was smiling calmly behind the desk!

Song Huanxi took a deep breath, her thoughts were like a spring, her hands, as if she had self-awareness, picked up the pen:

…… Zhu Yingtai was like a fledgling bird, sitting in the carriage, looking out the window, only to feel that everything was so fresh.

Until someone blocked the car.

"Brother, but you want to study at the Mountain Academy?"

Zhu Yingtai looked over, and saw that the brother who was blocking the road was talented, polite, and suddenly had a good impression, and couldn't help but respond: "Exactly, may I ask Brother Renβ€”β€”"

"Heh, it's not just Liang Shanbo, it's the academy who sent him to pick up his brother and go up the mountain."

Zhu Yingtai was overjoyed, and asked, "Your Excellency is a professor of the college?" ”

Liang Shanbo smiled silently, and Zhu Yingtai acquiesced.

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(End of chapter)