424 Pauline Lamp 2nd Edition (3rd Update)
After Song Huanxi wrote a reply, the second sister Song Huanyun had already made dinner, and the big singer was now doing housework in addition to humming a dog song at every turn when cooking.
Song Huanxi was very satisfied with this, and began to think about what theme to write for the second song for the second child.
After eating, the dinner table routine is Song Huanxi alone: she has given up the second child's studies, as for Wen Zai-
No matter how bad it is, will it be worse than the second child!
She couldn't help but pick up the letter from the editor-in-chief again, and she was still very angry when she read it again, how can the governor of Hong Kong be so fickle!
In Song Huanxi's mind, he unexpectedly appeared at the governor's dinner, Governor Bai's smiling and welcoming face, and then in the next second, the governor turned around, and the smile on his face quickly put away!
What an impressive duplicity!
Wait a minute!
Song Huanxi's brain was stunned, and she suddenly realized that at the beginning of the "Baolian Lantern" she had just written, what was the problem!
The characterization is not clear enough!
It is true that the agarwood in her pen is angular and angular, and her love and hate are clear, but what about Liu Yanchang? ! What about the Three Virgins?!
If her script is really made into a movie, and the audience watches it, who will remember Liu Yanchang, who is so cowardly that he is useless? Who remembers the Three Virgins who were under Zhenhua Mountain and only showed their faces for a moment!
Song Huanxi suddenly remembered what he said without drinking:
Even if it is a supporting character who comes out to play soy sauce, he must have flesh and blood, crying, laughing and his own life, so that he will come back to life and let readers feel that the world you write is real!
Oops, how could she have forgotten such a crucial thing!
Song Huanxi's eyes suddenly brightened, and when he looked at the first draft, he felt that it was difficult to see everywhere.
She simply grabbed both ends of the manuscript paper, worked hard with her hands, and directly tore the manuscript that she had been writing for a day and tore it in half!
Re-draft:
The Three Holy Mothers were originally a lively character, but they were born in an immortal family, and the name of the god was crowned with a holy word, and their actions were inevitably restricted everywhere.
The model that her brother Yang Jian set for her is Guanyin Bodhisattva: smile like a Bodhisattva, speak softly like a Bodhisattva, and live in the clouds like a Bodhisattva, without moving.
Only...... It's too hard.
Fortunately, her brother also knew her nature and allowed her to go out once a year.
The so-called one day in heaven and one year on earth, the Three Virgins automatically converted this year into a human calendar.
So, she can sneak out and play for a little bit every day!
On this day, she met a stupid scholar.
At that time, the weather was fine, and the Three Virgins were swimming on the edge of the West Lake, and suddenly the clouds were overcast, and there was about to rain a lot.
The Third Lady knew that this was a warning from her brother that she had been messing around for too long and that it was time to go back to the Holy Palace.
Her mana is not as good as her brother's, and if she insists on staying, I'm afraid she will be drenched in soup.
But she was unwilling to give in, looked around, and told her to find a scholar, carrying a bookcase and holding an oil umbrella, looking up anxiously from time to time at the sky, and hurried away.
The Third Lady immediately greeted her: "The little princess is polite, the little girl forgot to bring an umbrella when she went out, I don't know if I can borrow the umbrella of the minister?" ”
The stupid melon urn replied to her angrily: "If it's just me, it doesn't hurt to lend the umbrella to the lady, but I still have a box of books, and this umbrella needs to be left for books!" ”
Our Lady of the Three: "......"
People are not as good as books, are they?
At this moment, she only hoped that the rain would come more violently!
The Three Holy Mothers silently followed the dumb melon, the elder brother's patience has always been limited, and sure enough, the pouring rain poured out without a cup of tea.
The dumb melon opened the oil umbrella for the first time, and the umbrella was completely covered on the bookcase as he said, completely ignoring himself and the delicate little lady around him!
The fool didn't forget to tell the three virgins: "Little lady, stand far away, don't splash the water droplets on the bookbox!" ”
The Three Virgins: "...... Scold. ”
She silently took half a step back, as he wished, to make way for the bookcase, but still stubbornly followed him.
The Three Virgins looked up at the sky, thought about it, raised their hands and waved, and jumped twice, looking elated.
Sure enough, her brother didn't let her down, and more black clouds began to gather, and a moment later, hailstones the size of beans smashed madly on her head.
With a bang, the oil umbrella that could be used for thirty years was completely scrapped, and at the same time, the rain and hail that had accumulated on the top of the umbrella poured onto the bookcase—
The dumb scholar was stunned, and turned his head to look at his book in disbelief.
The Three Virgins moved their feet quietly, and kicked the silver glittering scissors, washed by the rain, into the ditch by the roadside—
If she is not mistaken, this scissors were brought by her last time, and she cut up a box of her brother's new clothes, just because he refused to take her to the queen mother's peach feast.
Oh, isn't she just at the last peach banquet, she ate a few more peaches, and hid a few peach pits, such delicious peaches, who doesn't want to plant a few in their own backyard!
Alas, my brother is too rigid, and he didn't say anything when he didn't see the queen mother!
I probably know that the scissors in the sky are indeed a bit excessive, and in a blink of an eye, the sky is clear, only in the sky, and there are some thunders wandering, like a brother's incompetent roar.
The wind and rain stopped, and the sobbing sound in his ears immediately became harsh, and the three virgins turned around in surprise to find that the dumb melon was holding a box of books, and she was already crying silently.
Our Lady of the Three: "......"
Forgive her, I have seen too much of my brother's roar and my uncle's laughter, and it is the first time in my life that I have seen a man crying so rarely.
A conscience that I hadn't seen for a long time came out, and there was still a little pain.
The Three Virgins were silent for a moment, first cast a spell to dry the puddle of water on their bodies, turned their heads to look at the bookcase, took out a copy of the book, and shook the water on it—
Well, the rain had mixed with the ink and turned into a puddle of black water.
She held the book at a loss, and the dumb scholar also came back to his senses, he sniffled, took the book from her hand, did not look up, and said in a hoarse voice: "I knew that this book still couldn't be kept, so I might as well give you the umbrella." ”
Our Lady of the Three: "......"
This nerd can be regarded as a human being.
She was in a better mood, rolled her eyes, and said generously: "Tell me the title of the book, I will compensate you!" ”
Duggle glanced at her and said seriously: "It's not the book you broke badly, what do you pay for!" ”
He looked lonely and stroked the cover of the book in his hand: "Besides, this book was copied by me one by one, how can it be measured by money!" ”
The Third Lady blurted out: "Then I'll copy it for you!" ”
The voice fell, the sky thundered, look closely, there are golden dragon-like thunder cruising in it, and in the ears of the three virgins, there is the arrogant and hearty laughter of the elder brother!
In the name of the saint, the exit is the holy word, the heaven and the earth move with it, and the golden thunder is the oath!
If she can't do it, even the golden thunder of the six gods will hurt the six gods and no master, and it will fall on her!
But since the Three Virgins were young, there were only two things that they hated the most-
One is reading,
The second is the brother who forced her to study!
…… You won't read the books I read!
Right! I swept the sports category on the monthly pass list of the main station!
The first book relied on fighting Jordan to get on top, and the second book started with Jordan as his thigh-
The third book went to play football, Atletico Madrid went from being on the verge of relegation to winning the Champions League!
Then my brother entered the game text and read another LoL!
(End of chapter)