In the mid-term examination of the city's unified examination, the marking of papers has been in full swing.

Generally speaking, the most time-consuming thing for marking papers should be the subject of Chinese, after all, the amount of work required to batch essays is still quite large.

Of course, it is impossible for the marking teacher to read every student's essay carefully, basically they are all skimmed, anyway, most of the students write routine essays.

Many Chinese teachers actually encourage students to write routine essays, because as long as they don't deviate from the topic and don't talk nonsense, they can always get the marks they should get.

At this time, in this school called "Jiangzhou University High School", the school's senior high school Chinese teaching and research team was correcting the Chinese test papers of "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School".

"Jiangda High School" is also one of the best high schools in Jiangzhou, the provincial capital, and belongs to the biggest competitor of "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School", and the two schools are called "Jiangzhou Shuangxiong".

Jiangda High School is not as strict as Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School, but its student source is also very good, and the score line of the high school entrance examination is exactly the same as that of Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School.

Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School has more advantages in science teaching, and various mathematics, physics and chemistry competitions are in full swing.

The High School Affiliated to Jiangxi University is biased towards liberal arts, encouraging students to participate in the "New Thinking Essay Competition", and there have been several provincial champions in liberal arts, from the High School Affiliated to Jiangxi University.

It can be said that the Chinese teaching and research group of the High School Affiliated to Jiang University is very powerful, and it is not an exaggeration to say that they are the first in the province.

The head of the teaching and research group is named Cheng Wenkang.

He is the director of teaching of the high school affiliated to Jiang University, a special high school Chinese teacher, and is quite famous in the high school education circle in the province.

This time, he also participated in the Chinese test paper of the mid-term examination of the city's unified examination, and it was very difficult to come out, which was undoubtedly very beneficial to the "Jiangda High School", which has a stronger liberal arts.

Cheng Wenkang was criticizing the essays of the students of "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School" at this time, and he criticized them quickly, shaking his head while criticizing: "The Chinese teaching work of No. 1 Middle School is really rough, and the students are all taught very rigidly. ”

As soon as he said this, another Chinese teacher, Wang Xiaofang, immediately echoed: "Director Cheng is so right, Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School has completely copied their science teaching to Chinese, and the students they have cultivated feel that they are all test-taking machines and have no spirituality." ”

Cheng Wenkang has been approved until now, and the highest score given is 53 points for a 60-point essay, which is still based on the neatness of the other party's volume, but unfortunately the style is also an argumentative essay with no new ideas, and the writing is very routine, but the example of victory is very novel.

Then another teacher gloated: "In this city-wide unified examination, our school's comprehensive score is definitely better than that of Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School by virtue of the subject of Chinese!" ”

Wang Xiaofang also smiled: "I estimate that the first in the city this time is also in the bag of our school, Director Cheng, in the class you teach, the girl named 'Yu Bingwei' seems to not only have good grades in science, but also liberal arts, especially Chinese, is her forte, I feel that she has a good chance to become the first in the city this time." ”

Cheng Wenkang heard the other party mention "Yu Bingwei", and couldn't help but smile on his face, obviously this girl was his protégé, he said: "Yu Bingwei is really talented in literature, full of aura, every time she writes an essay, it can be used as a model essay, presumably the scoring team of No. 1 Middle School should be very surprised when she approves the article she wrote." ”

Wang Xiaofang also smiled: "That's right, it won't be like the essay test papers we are batching now, at a glance, they are the same." ”

All of a sudden, the entire high school Chinese teaching and research group of the High School Affiliated to Jiang University was full of a happy atmosphere in the office, and the champagne was opened in advance!

As a result, not long after Wang Xiaofang's voice fell, Cheng Wenkang approved Xu Qingru's essay test paper, and the title was "The Death of the Red Rabbit".

First of all, Xu Qingru's "professional-level" calligraphy skills, the composition volume written, straight to the point, made Cheng Wenkang feel a little system shock!

"Hiss......" Cheng Wenkang gasped and couldn't help but admire: "This student's handwriting is really good!" Her hard-pen calligraphy is not just as simple as the tenth level, it can be used as a calligraphy and let others copy it! ”

His surprised voice was heard by the other Chinese teachers, and those who were more curious came directly to watch.

Then they were naturally stunned by the "first impression" of this composition, and they sighed one after another-

"This regular script is indeed written like art, I didn't expect that there are students with this kind of calligraphy specialty in No. 1 Middle School!"

"The handwriting is beautiful, it is too dominant in the Chinese exam, and the impression score is directly full!"

"Can you take a photo as a souvenir, I want to take it to the students in our class to show it, so that they can feel the gap!"

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Of course, it's okay to take pictures, anyway, it's just a midterm exam, and it's not as particular as the college entrance examination papers.

Wang Xiaofang didn't come to watch, she also said something cool: "No matter how good the writing is, it is a waste to put it in Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School, and the students of their school will definitely not be able to write any amazing compositions." ”

But at this time, Cheng Wenkang has completely attracted the attention of this "Death of the Red Rabbit"!

He found out that this student actually imitated the style of the famous novel "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and wrote this essay in the ancient vernacular!

Cheng Wenkang was shocked!

Several other Chinese teachers who were watching because of curiosity were also shocked!

How talented and agile is a freshman in high school who can skillfully use the ancient vernacular to write such an eloquent essay in such a short period of time in the examination room?

Originally, Cheng Wenkang admired students who played tricks and had aura in composition, and the previous batch of essay test papers really made him feel tired and bored, and now this calligraphy full of "The Death of the Red Rabbit" was placed in front of him, and he was naturally amazed all of a sudden!

After reading "The Death of the Red Rabbit" in one go, he couldn't help sighing: "It's really a good essay, I didn't expect that there are also whimsical and eclectic students in No. 1 Middle School, I think this essay can give full marks, everyone take a look." ”

"What, a perfect score essay?" Wang Xiaofang was shocked, but she knew how high Director Cheng's vision was, and there were students in Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School who could write an essay that asked him to give a full score?

Then she saw this "The Death of the Red Rabbit", which is the same process, first of all, the student's calligraphy directly captured her, the words are well written, and the first impression is too dominant.

Then read the whole article, she has to admit that it is really too good as an examination room essay!

Considering that this is still a freshman in high school's composition, it is even more shocking! It's amazing!

And then there were other students to set off, so that such an ingenious ancient vernacular essay of course, of course, instantly conquered all the grading teachers present!

Full marks, full marks must be given!

Cheng Wenkang was happy to see the hunt, and then wrote the reason why he gave a full score-

One is the novelty of the story. Based on his familiarity with the stories of the Three Kingdoms, the author compiled the touching story of the Red Rabbit Horse's death for integrity, and his imagination is really rich.

The second is to be ambitious. The article personifies the red rabbit horse, so that it shows the praise and disapproval of Guan Yu, Dong Zhuo, and Lu Bu in the dialogue with Boxi, and realizes the theme of "true heroes must be honest";

And with the couplet of "the bird flies away with the luan and the phoenix, and the person accompanies the virtuous and virtuous self-exaltation", and the sentence "things are like this, how can people be worthy", it expresses the ambition that life should choose the good and follow, and only honesty is the vision, so that the idea of the article is on a higher level.

The third is that the language is old. The whole text uses proficient ancient vernacular, scattered and intricate, clear and clear, and the writing is flying, this kind of old-fashioned language kung fu is beyond the reach of many candidates.