Chapter 67: A Full-Score Essay with Full Heat!
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If the reason why "The Death of the Red Rabbit" can become popular and famous in the earth world is that it is a refreshing college entrance examination full score essay, then it became popular and caused controversy in this parallel world because the person who wrote it was Xu Qingru.
Otherwise, it will not cause too many waves as an essay that is just a perfect score on the mid-term exam in high school.
Xu Qingru was the "most beautiful military training goddess" at the beginning, although now her identity is already outdated, and there is not much traffic.
But don't forget, she's still the up master of Xiaopo Station.
After the Haiyan video, she did not stop updating.
With the assistance of his brother Xu Mingwei, he has successively produced several videos and uploaded them, all of which are original songs with a literary and artistic atmosphere - "The Old Man Who Doesn't Know the Return Date", "Thousands of Towns", and "Leaves".
These original songs are not popular, but those who like them like them very much, and the fan stickiness is extremely high.
There is a lyric in the song "Leaves" that is still out of the circle, it is - loneliness is a carnival of one person, and carnival is the loneliness of a group of people.
However, this lyric is on fire, and many people like to use it as their Feixin signature, etc., but not many people know its origin.
All in all, Xu Qingru's identity as a "treasure up master" is still recognized by many people, and the traffic that was once like duckweed has slowly transformed into her loyal fans.
And her modern poetry collection "Flying Birds" has been sent out on the Internet, and it has been widely circulated.x63xs.
Her name is well-known in the contemporary poetry world.
With the help of her mother, Li Yi'an, "Flying Birds" is about to be published as a physical book, which will further increase her fame.
In addition to "Flying Birds", Xu Qingru also continued to publish essays in the pure literary magazine "Haijiao", which also made her gain a group of fans of literature lovers.
Whether it's "Haiyan" or "Hurry", readers who like them really like it.
She also recently published an essay titled "Wen Yi Pot of Moonlight Wine", and with this title alone, many literature lovers feel a strong literary atmosphere.
And the text did not disappoint them either-
"If the snow is really boiled, other things can also be left, we can use an empty bottle to fill up the fragrance of osmanthus tonight, and wait for the osmanthus to be gone, and the autumn has passed, and then open the bottle cap and taste it carefully.
The warmth of the first love is packed in a delicate glass box, and when the youth is over, when the old age is dying, the lid of the box is lifted, and a stream of heat is enough to make us feel comforted.
There are also many unexpected pleasures, such as serving moonshine in a flask and drinking it warm over a simmer...... There is a true meaning in this, and it is the realm of the wine fairy.
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After reading her article "Wen a Pot of Moonlight Wine", many literature lovers feel like they are drinking the moonlight and drinking the wine, which is simply enjoyable!
Coincidentally, Cheng Wenkang, a special teacher and head of the Chinese teaching and research group of the "High School Affiliated to Jiang University", also saw this prose.
After he was exhilarating, he suffered from an occupational illness, and he felt that this essay was quite suitable for language comprehension questions......
Cheng Wenkang didn't specifically remember the name of the author of this article, otherwise he would definitely be unable to help muttering, why did the prose he read was written by Xu Qingru, and the full-score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit" that had just been corrected was also written by Xu Qingru?
He may not believe that the two Xu Qingru are the same person.
After all, the literary realm of a high school student's essay like "The Death of the Red Rabbit" cannot be compared with the famous prose "Wen a Pot of Moonlight Wine".
All in all, just because Xu Qingru is famous on the Internet as a "literary girl", "folk singer", "prose author", and "modern poet", and her appearance is indeed too high, this naturally has the value of hype.
Originally, Xu Qingru took the "No. 1 in the city" exam this time, coupled with her full-score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit", which just existed as a hot post in "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School".
The post was full of students from the school who worshiped her, and there were all kinds of jokes, so that Song Shuhua, a waste of foreign wars and prisoners, hurried out and apologized, and they even played with the P picture, Pping Song Shuhua's avatar to the dog's head, and Xu Qingru's avatar to the head of the person holding the pet dog......
So, a "world famous painting" of Xu Qingru holding his pet dog Song Shuhua was born, but unfortunately this spoof P picture was directly deleted by the permission dog, they think such a P picture is too much.
The funniest thing is that someone directly pointed out that in fact, everyone still envies Song Shuhua, after all, he can be Xu Qingru's dog, and the others are just mice, and the possibility of being P does not even exist.
A sense of hell of a joke.
But the atmosphere of the post bar is like this.,It's all grumpy brothers.,Aggressive.,Whoever is serious loses.,The main thing is abstract.γPlaying stalks.γSpoof.γ
The hot post about Xu Qingru in the campus post bar, with the passage of time, its popularity will definitely slowly decrease.
What I didn't expect was that I didn't know if it was the students of Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School who were backlashing, or if it was indeed the students of the High School Affiliated to Jiang University who caused trouble.
Someone actually reprinted Xu Qingru's hot post to the post bar of Jiangda High School, and then rode his face to output-
"It is said that the strongest high school in liberal arts in Jiangzhou City and even in the province is the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, but in front of Xu Qingru, the emperor of liberal arts in Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School, it is not a fart, it is all rubbish!"
"Yu Bingwei, a prisoner of war from Jiang University, is out of the ranks!"
"All kneel down and pay homage to the full-score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit" by Xu Qingru, a Chinese science and technology emperor next door!"
"I really laughed and cried, before the city's ranking came out, a group of Yu Bingwei's filial sons and grandsons attached to our middle school were blowing the first place in the city, but in the end, she was not only the best at completely defeating the language, but also in science, Xu Qingru was a few points ......behind."
"It is said that Yu Bingwei is the first talented girl in Jiangda High School, and no one can touch the porcelain at the level of composition, so can she write an essay like "The Death of the Red Rabbit"?"
"If you can write a fart, it's in the tense examination room, Yu Bingwei is talented, but she is not talented at all, Xu Qingru is a real genius!"
"I really don't know how a girl like Yu Bingwei, who can only be regarded as delicate, is so popular in Jiangda High School, if it is Xu Qingru, I can't think about it!"
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Yu Bingwei is indeed the first year of high school affiliated to Jiang University, and she is recognized as a talented woman.
Although her grades are not as strong as Song Shuhua's steady first, she has never fallen out of the top ten in the school.
She is also better at liberal arts, and slightly weaker in science, so this city-wide unified examination is also good for her.
Her final ranking is the first in the school and the second in the city.
It can be said that if there is no Xu Qingru, a guy who was born out of nowhere, then Yu Bingwei will be the biggest winner in this city-wide unified examination.
With her delicate appearance and extraordinary talent, Yu Bingwei is quite popular in Jiangda High School.
She was also invited by the president of the school's literary club to join the literary club and become a mainstay.
In each issue of the school newspaper, she has works published on it, with a variety of themes and gorgeous and beautiful writing.
This kind of factor makes Yu Bingwei have a lot of fans.
In the campus post bar of Jiangda High School, I often see people posting to blow her from various angles, even the appearance that could only be regarded as delicate, with the blessing of the talent filter, some people directly worship her as a goddess.
may be because of all kinds of embarrassing blows, which caused her to encounter a "backlash" recently, and some students from the attached middle school who had a rebellious psychology directly invited Xu Qingru from No. 1 Middle School to come over as a tool man and stepped on Yu Bingwei!
"The Death of the Red Rabbit" has become their output tool.
And Yu Bingwei's supporters, of course, will not give up after being output by such a riding face, and begin to refute in a fancy way, and at the same time fire at the full score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit".
Their counterattack was not limited to the campus post bar, but further opened up the battlefield, and even fought a verbal battle to "Zhihu".
In this era of this parallel world, the reputation of "Zhihu" is not rotten, and it is not "forced" or ridiculed as "sharing the story you just made", it can be said that there are still a lot of elites and bigwigs from all walks of life who are mixed with "Zhihu".
"How do you evaluate the full-score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit"?"
This question was heated up by both sides who were arguing out at once!
The key is that the two sides are arguing, not only the students are arguing, but many onlookers are also involved.
Below this question, the respondents are also clearly divided into two factions, and some people don't look down on this full-score essay at all-
"Thank you, as a senior Chinese teacher, I think the level of this essay is very low, and it is off topic, I will give a 38 out of 60."
"From an objective point of view, the choice of words is not literate, white, formal, and has a serious sense of disobedience, in modern terms, it is mixed with a lot of English in Chinese.
Chitu: I am a horse, once my rider was Lu Bu, but after meeting Guan Yunchang, I was moved by his integrity, he is mine, and now I don't want to live if he dies. Let's make the sauce. β
"Looking at the death of Chitu with the requirements of the article, the idea is not profound, the language is too lame, and the angle of entry is quite novel.
If I were a big sand sculpture who had never seen the world, I would give this exam room essay 60 points, but I am already 26, and if I go to judge the paper, I will only give her 42.
To be honest, among the 18-year-old ancients, there are countless articles written better than the death of the red rabbit, and such an essay with a full score can only show that the present is not as good as the past. β
"Personally, I feel that it belongs to the general garbage level, and the level of the marking group is too low. Although it is not a zero score, it is at most a little higher than the entry score, and it is far from the full score level.
This article has been very popular on the Internet recently, and I heard that it is in classical Chinese, but it is in ancient vernacular at a glance.
Unfortunately, the level of the students is not enough, and the writing is nondescript. The storyline is also very average.
In fact, this is a typical off-topic essay, which is just a gimmick of semi-literary writing, which has been hyped up.
It writes about loyalty, not integrity, and loyalty and honesty intersect, but they are two different concepts.
Of course, in order to avoid going off topic, the author used a third-party perspective to force the comments into integrity.
It can only be said that the author is clever, but the writing is really not good! β
"I've read so many ancient texts!
This little essay is ordinary, the text is not white, the language is as immature as a baby in swaddling clothes, and the shallowness of the foundation is exposed.
In today's society, the extreme culture is barren, and such a clumsy little article can actually attract widespread attention.
You know, in ancient times, children with a little traditional education wrote better than this, at least the writing was mellow, fresh and natural, and ran through the Chinese literary atmosphere.
On the other hand, this little article is boring and almost the same as white water, I can't read the taste of culture, and I can't read the taste of China.
The idea is far-fetched, and it is off topic!
As we all know, Guan Yu is loyal, and this article is actually stiff and hard, and it will be blatantly and arrogantly honest, and its clumsiness of literature and science can be seen. β
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Yu Bingwei's supporters, seeing that the Zhihu bigwigs are so good at spraying, and they also criticized "The Death of the Red Rabbit" from various angles as useless, and they were suddenly **!
They were like eunuchs holding holy decrees, and hurriedly reprinted these answers into the campus post bar, fiercely fighting back against those guys who held "The Death of the Red Rabbit" to the sky and had to use Xu Qingru to step on Yu Bingwei.
Not to mention, with those Zhihu users who are full of compelling flavor and first-class mouths as foreign aid, they really have the upper hand for a while.
At this time, this full-score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit" has been completely hyped, and it has simply become the current traffic password.
Xu Qingru, who was already angry, was hyped up by the marketing accounts again, before her nickname was "The Most Beautiful Military Training Goddess", and this time she won the nickname "The Most Aesthetic Goddess" and "The Most Beautiful Literary Goddess"!
The marketing accounts directly hyped her list of the city's rankings, after all, she is "the first in the city", and with her beautiful pictures, it is indeed quite gimmicky, and it is normal to get the nickname of "the most aesthetic goddess".
As for the source of the nickname "The Most Beautiful Literary Goddess", of course, it is to skew the topic to the recent popular full-score essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit".
When "The Death of the Red Rabbit" was criticized in various ways, some reasonable netizens couldn't stand it, and they felt that those Zhihu bigwigs who could only talk about cannons were too pretending!
Since you think this essay is useless, why can't you write it during the exam?
Someone went directly to the question of "Zhihu" and fought directly in the ring with the group of guys who looked down on "The Death of the Red Rabbit"-
"This essay is easy to come by, but there is no sense of piling up, Xingwen Xiaochang understands, is familiar with the history of the Three Kingdoms, just these are enough to kill eight adults in seconds, not to mention that this is a time-limited examination room essay, I think it is completely worthy of a full score!"
"It's a classic! Benevolence, righteousness, propriety, wisdom, and faith in the five virtues, there is a reason why faith is at the end. Looking at the above answers, some people suspect that the essay is off-topic, but it is actually to the point.
Here through the mouth of the red rabbit to say the virtue of integrity, because the righteousness of the thin sky of Guan Sheng does not need to say more, has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.
Only the master of benevolence and righteousness can cultivate the faith of the red rabbit.
Here is the red rabbit on the surface, and Guan Yu on the dark surface, which is meaningful to read!
If there is no virtue of benevolence and righteousness, there is no way to talk about the virtue of integrity!
Wonderful......"
"In fact, it is very much the style of Luo Guanzhong, the original author of "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", as a student, it is already considered a high level, and the idea is appropriate, the language is fluent, and it is not easy to write such an exam essay in a limited time.
I believe that only those who truly love classical literature will have this kind of background; Only by reading countless famous classics can you have this kind of quick wit.
It's not blowing or black, but I want to say that some people take the trouble to think about this is an exam room essay before they are black, how much time do you have to think about it slowly? β
The original text of "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" is just one sentence.
To the effect that Guan Yu died, and then the red rabbit horse died of hunger strike.
However, this candidate wrote such an essay in this way. At least I admire it.
Seeing that someone asked for details, I specially went to find the original text, in the seventy-seventh chapter: Yuquan Mountain Guan Gong appeared to the saint, and Cao Cao of Luoyang City was moved.
There is a small paragraph in the middle, which is transcribed below.
Guan Gong died, sat down and the red rabbit horse was captured by Ma Zhong and dedicated to Sun Quan. The right is to give the horse to sit on the horse. The horses died without forage for several days.
Then the rest is paraphrased below.
The original text may be intended to show loyalty, as the other respondents have said.
But to be able to think of this small detail in such a short period of time, and then rewrite it as integrity, I don't think it's a sudden enlightenment, but I usually pay attention to and like to think when I read, so that I can write in one go. It's great. β
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With the support of these rational netizens, the reviews of "The Death of the Red Rabbit" have returned to their original height, because as an examination essay, its author is indeed quick and talented!
And when Xu Qingru's loyal fans found out that this full-score essay was actually written by this "literary girl" who was their fan, they were even more energetic!
These die-hard fans have the taste of rice circles, and as we all know, the combat effectiveness of fan circle fans is called a strong!
They are worried that the popularity of a treasure master like Xu Qingru is always tepid, so of course they must make good use of this opportunity to promote her, if only she could be out of the circle.
They saw that some Zhihu users who like to pretend to be forced ridiculed Xu Qingru for their lack of talent with "The Death of the Red Rabbit", and they were directly angry!
Where is "The Death of the Red Rabbit"?
This is just an exam room essay that came out in a hurry, how can it reflect Xu Qingru's true talent?
They directly use "Flying Bird Collection" to ride face output!
The funniest thing is that among the Zhihu users who ridiculed Xu Qingru for his lack of talent, there were also signatures that used the classic sentences in "Flying Birds......
When this person was mocking, he probably didn't expect that the author of "Flying Birds" was the one who wrote this full-score essay.
Not only is there a "Flying Bird Collection", but some people also use the sentence "Loneliness is a person's carnival, carnival is the loneliness of a group of people", which is also from Xu Qingru's original lyrics!
You use her classic sentences to pretend to be literary and artistic, and in turn mock her for being unliterate?
Isn't that funny what is it?
In addition to "Flying Birds", Xu Qingru's fans have exported a lot of ammunition, and they also threw out Xu Qingru's original songs, essays, etc.
When so many works that reflect her talent and literature are presented to the public, those who stare at the black of "The Death of the Red Rabbit" will naturally become clowns in an instant!
All of a sudden, Xu Qingru's traffic on the Internet was like a dream back to the period of military training!
Xu Qingru herself didn't care about the controversy about "The Death of the Red Rabbit" on the Internet at all, but such a full-score essay can have such a hot spot, causing so many people to study and think, and she has earned a wave of literary value!
After all, someone is justified in hacking "The Death of the Red Rabbit", so you must read it carefully!
Some people who have read carefully enough have really found the bug in this composition, that is, Guan Yu's defeat of Maicheng was actually 219 AD, the twenty-fourth year of Jian'an, but the beginning of the composition was written in the twenty-sixth year of Jian'an.
That's not a huge mistake, so I conclude that it doesn't deserve full marks!
If Xu Qingru sees someone picking out details like this, she will not be annoyed and angry, she will only be happy, after all, the more in-depth, the more serious, and the more she perceives, the more literary and artistic value she will gain!
If you look at it this way, the well-founded sunspot provides more literary and artistic value than those who have no brains to fan her and protect her.
After all, some die-hard fans are directly fans of her, and if you work it, you can blow it brainlessly.
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In reality, the usual parent-teacher meeting after the midterm exams is finally going to be held.
In order to compete for the opportunity to participate in this parent-teacher conference, Xu Qingru's parents quarreled at home......
Who made Xu Qingru take the first place in the city this time?
Who has such a child and doesn't want to rush to a parent-teacher conference?
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