Testimonials
At this point, the book is officially over, but there is still a small question that needs to be talked about with you.
As mentioned before, I'll talk about the heart of the palace after the end, the biggest bug in this book that has undergone a huge change in this character.
Originally, I thought about typing a lot of words to explain in detail, but I was still too lazy......
So I'll try to keep it as concise as possible and tell you about it.
First, in the original design, Ma Miya's real name is Bai Hexin, and he is the son of Bai Heqing and Sharon, the younger brother of Bai Hejing, and the elder brother of Bai Heying.
He is the number one in the IQ of the characters in this book and has good fighting ability, but he ranks behind the likes of Shirakawa Kiyoshi, Shirakawa Shizu, Mary, and Akai Shuichi.
His initial character is also set in poor health and spent a long time in the hospital, but unlike Shirakawa, who was later designed, he was completely cured in the years before the book began, and then traveled abroad.
As a result, because of his highly similar appearance to Bai Heqing, he was caught by Black Feather Chikage.
After realizing that Mamiya Xin didn't know about Shirakawa Kiyohe's organization, Kuroba Chikage once wanted to cultivate him and use him and Shirakawa Kiyoshi to stage a cannibalistic drama between father and son, and Mamiya Kokoro's disguise and voice change were learned during this period.
But in the end, the depressed Black Feather Chikage still couldn't make this ruthlessness, and was finally moved by the sincerity of the palace heart.
So, before she died, she told Mamiya Shin some of what she knew about Shirakawa Kiyowa's organization, and advised him to be careful of his father.
The death of the Black Feather Thousand Shadows stimulated the heart of the palace to a certain extent, and at this time he did not know the relationship between his family and the organization.
And two years before the story began, in order to investigate the organization that Kuroba Chikage said, and also to investigate his father, Miya Xin used the energy of the family to successfully join the FBI.
This is also the reason why Gong Xin is so young in the middle of this book, and he has not been in the FBI for a long time, but he can be so reused, and it can even affect the judgment of the FBI's top management.
After all, in addition to ability, his background is also quite large. (laughs)
In the design of the book at the very beginning, Mamiya only thought that his father had faked his death and had a relationship with the winery, completely unaware that the winery was actually run by his own family...... (laughs)
As the plot progresses, he gradually realizes this, which is also very subtle foreshadowing in the plot of the early part of the book, when Mamiya Kokoro first disguises himself as Miyano Shiho and meets Chriss, Shirakawaying, Conan, and Kuroba Kaito at the party.
When he finally left, there was a very meaningful emotion. (End of Chapter 80)
In the early stage, it is an obvious foreshadowing, only this one.
According to the original plot, the fact that Mamiya Shin joined the FBI and went undercover was promoted by Karasuma Renya.
Karasuma Renya's motive was to use the heart of the palace to kill Shirakawa Kiyoshi.
This is also another dark line originally designed for this book, namely the special relationship between Shirakawa Kiyoshi and Karasuma Renya.
Shirakawa Kiyoshi controlled the European and American branches, and formed a situation of weak cadres and strong branches in the organization, which made Karasuma Renya, who was already wary of Shirakawa Kiyoshi, even more uneasy, so he had the idea of wanting to get rid of Shirakawa Kiyoshi.
And in the middle of the book, Mamiya will gradually become aware of this, as well as Karasuma Renya's motivations, and look for a way to get out.
In other words, the heart of the palace in the middle of this book should not have died at that time.
So why died?
The reason is very simple, because at that time many readers were spraying, this character was too smart, to see Black crush, hurry up and get killed, you have to kill him or something, at that time I had to spray every three or five days, so I ended up killing him as soon as my brain was hot. (Stalls)
Of course, I don't mean to blame the reader, it's mostly my problem.
And after the death of the heart of the palace, a huge hole suddenly appeared in the original plot, and the plot of the whole book began to collapse uncontrollably.
In the original plot, Mamiya Kokoro did have a plot of fake death, which was when he realized that he was being used by Karasuma Renya, and he was looking for a way out.
First Plum Wine and Cointreau played, and finally Cointreau was killed, Plum Wine was injured, and Shirakawa Kiyoshi personally came on the field to clean him up, but at the same time, he was also aware of his disguised identity.
From then on, Mamiya Shin will go to find Shirakawa Ying and join forces with her to investigate the organization with the identity of "Karasuma Ying......
As for the original ending of the palace heart, there are two, one is that he replaced the identity of Regel, and he wanted to die to atone for his family, but he didn't die, and finally lived happily with Judy
And the other one...... It's now the end of Bai Herui, and the killer is painful.
Almost, that's probably the end of the problem of the heart of the palace.
Then there is Bai Ha Ying.
She originally had an extremely important plot.
The first is the Halloween bride, and I decided to write this one after watching this theatrical version.
In this theatrical version, Shirakawa Ying's good girlfriend and Terumi Hoshino will be killed by Pramia at the last moment, and her death will greatly irritate Shirakawa Ying, eventually causing her to turn black.
Then I picked up the plot of looking for her after the palace heart faked death and got out.,But because of the bug of the palace heart.,I didn't know how to write this plot in the end.,So I gave up.。
And after she returned to the United States, she originally designed a plot related to the garden organization, that is, after the end of Clover Villa, it was mentioned in the conversation between Shuichi Akai and James that one of the organization's undercover members in the FBI was exposed, and it revolved around this person.
I even had a name in mind, Violet.
As a result, I thought that no one wanted to read it, but after all, the characters were original, so I gave up (laughs)
Originally, there was a lot more I wanted to say, but I was too lazy to type, so I just clicked until I stopped.
All in all, in a word~
Originally, the role of "Bai Hexin" was a combination of today's Gong Xin and Bai Herui.
And after writing the heart of the palace in the dead with a moment of brain fever, the huge plot hole directly made my whole person rotten.
At that time, I really didn't want to write, I wanted to be a eunuch.
But in the end, I cheered up and thought about writing about it.
A lot of unused foreshadowing in the later stage of the plot was basically buried by me during this period, such as the plot of Bai Heying in the United States that was originally going to be written, Miwako Sato's relationship with the organization, and the confrontation between the garden organization and the winery that I plan to expand, etc......
However, in the end, I found that the bug was too big, so I put it on again (music)
These foreshadowings are all just beginning, and they are immediately invalidated.
In the end, I started my mind a little bit, thinking that I should give an ending, right?
That's why I insisted on writing until the end of the book.
Tired......
Don't say it, don't say it.
Finally, let's talk about your plans for the future.
Although I've told readers before that I'm going to write about Attack on Titan's fanjin in the next book.,But because I've been playing Star Iron for a while.,I suddenly wanted to write Star Iron Doujin.,So I ran to the cat first.。
I guess I'll wait until I'm done writing the Star Iron Doujin over there.,I'll come back to write the giant's fandom.。
And then, in the end, the little novel is a mouthful, my pen name over there is Muzhu Sakura, and the title of the book is "Simulating Star Iron, Let Them Regret It for Life" (a little shameful)
If you want to see it, you can search for it.
Thank you~