Discuss the plot with my seniors.,My seniors pointed out many of my recent problems.,I revised the outline.,No change today.,Tomorrow 8,000 words will be updated and supplemented.。

The seniors said that in addition to the loopholes in the plot, the biggest problem is that I don't update it well, otherwise the score of this book will be doubled.

He has a point.

The predecessors also said that a book says that it is necessary to start from the beginning to the end, and it is the same as being a person.

I used to update it very little, if it suddenly changed...... He has a point.

Now push this senior's new book: Mana Boundless Tall Immortal, the great god of the starting point Author: Treading Snow Zhenren

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