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When I finished writing these three words, my heart felt like a big stone falling.

In fact, strictly speaking, there is something that can be written later.

Zhao Si has not yet ascended the throne, the little slave has not grown up, the Western Regions has not been taken, and the Peacock Kingdom has not yet been destroyed......

If I want to write, I'll never finish it, and I've even considered whether to use the jade aura to directly induce an aura revival ......

Actually, I thought about when it would end a long time ago.

What aura revival naturally doesn't need to be considered, this is a historical text.

For me, there are two places to choose the ending.

One is now, and the other is written about the death of the first emperor, the death of Fusu, and Zhao Si's commitment to reform until the death of old Qin.

After careful consideration, I chose the former.

Mainly because the writing experience of this book is not fantastic.

This is the first book I started in March, and fortunately, the subscription has been good, and it can even be said that it has greatly exceeded my expectations.

When I sent out the book, I just wanted to try it, and I didn't plan to write it down at all, so I can say that I sent the book with the mentality of cutting the book.

I'm even ready to cut the book if the first order is only one or two thousand.

It's not that March was arrogant, but the main thing is that I was busy for a long time before writing this book, and I started working again when I sent the book, and the reason why I wrote this book is mainly to test the water, go through the recommendation process of the starting point, and familiarize myself with the rules of the starting point.

Listening to others, checking, and asking, it is better to go through it yourself.

That's why the book was issued......

But what I didn't expect was that the first order was nearly 4,000...... And the orders behind it are all over 10,000.

But here's the problem, I haven't actually written at the beginning, or I've never written a book with more than a million words.

So my shortcomings are also clearly exposed.

Let's put it this way, I watch book reviews every day to change the plot, and when readers say water, I will speed up and skip it, and the foreshadowing can be saved, and some plots are cut directly.

Originally, there were a few plots that needed to be foreshadowed for a long time were cut directly, because this kind of plot didn't have enough foreshadowing and it wasn't good at all.

This has led to a series of problems.

The character is superficial...... The plot is too flat and straightforward......

The front is not in place, and how to write in the back is water.

As a reader myself, I am naturally aware of the inherent shortcomings of this book.

Because I didn't have a good mindset when I was sending out the book, I didn't have a lot of information and wrote it completely based on my previous experience.

So some of my initial points seemed reasonable, new, and good.

But the empty feeling came out in the later stage, to put it bluntly, I relied on basic skills to write earlier, but because of the lack of 200,000 foreshadowing in the previous article, the tone of the book was born.

It's not that I can't accept driving low and going high.

But writing a novel in front of hundreds of thousands is like laying a foundation, the foundation in front of you is unstable, and no matter how good you write in the back, it is a castle in the air, because the novel is related, and unfortunately, I am completely confused in front of me, and even purely coping, because I don't plan to write with my heart, I am completely rushing to go through a process to cut the book.

In the medium term, I have tried to solve this problem in depth, but unfortunately with little success.

There is only one solution before me, and that is to change the previous word.

I tried it and found a bad dish, and if I want to change it, I have to change not only the previous text, but also the plot.

There is a very important point in this kind of historical text, and if you want to change it, it must conform to history......

So...... That's all there is to it.

So this book is so not up and down, I used a lot of methods to try to make up for it later, and finally avoided the fate of 500,000 that is, the peak......

Now 1.8 million words, it can be regarded as a smooth landing.

The reason why this point in time was chosen to end is also very simple, because there is nothing wonderful to write about later.

Whoever fights is crushing, and what remains is nothing more than political struggle and factional balance.

But this is also the place where I pull my crotch the most, and the writing is really ugly.

In addition, the previous characters are too face-painted, and there is basically no need to think about political struggles.

I'm good at emotional drama, but when I first wrote this book, I was holding it out of my comfort zone.

As a result, I found that I couldn't go out halfway through, and I didn't like the four things I wrote, so I returned to my comfort zone, and after I went back, I found that I didn't want to go out.

In short, this book has made too many mistakes, and if I were to give myself a review, it would give me a feel that it was below the level except for the number of words that were enough to satisfy me.

Strictly speaking, this book is really not my level, I did not have the courage to step out of my comfort zone, and secondly, I did not write what I was most satisfied with in my comfort zone.

So...... That's all there is to it.

Although I have been complaining about this book myself, I have to say that this is the first book that I have ever finished in the true sense of the word.

Wow! You don't know how much it means to me.

It's not the end of the system, but the end of what I think is the plot.

As for the follow-up plot, in fact, it is nothing more than continuing to expand the territory, and there is nothing more to write about.

But there are some things that I don't feel comfortable with, so I'll write them out on the sidelines.

For example, the farewell to the First Emperor......

The little slave who became an adult......

The future of Daqin......

Later evaluation and archaeological excavations......

Well...... In short, I will make up for these extras one after another.

These I think are meaningful and interesting, I will write them out and put them as a supplement to the text, probably there can be 20,000 or 30,000 words or more?

If you have anything you want to see, you can also leave a message.

This book is very tiring to write, while working, writing a book, and taking a baby, it is indeed a bit of a toss.

The main body has always been bad and still very fat, so the book is over, and I plan to take time out to lose weight and exercise.

I'm 175 now, and I'm about to match my height, a pure square warrior......

Therefore, if the new book is released, it will probably be later, because it has been open for two consecutive years, so the new book is currently scheduled for September.

Take a few months off in between, take a break to lose weight, and prepare for a new book.

Well...... This book really has to say sorry to all readers, because the book was relatively perfunctory at the beginning, so the content was not exciting enough, and the later remedies were somewhat useless.

But the next book, March, will give it all its might.

Having said that, this book is currently booked with an average of nearly 18,000, which can be regarded as a smooth landing, and I also thought about competing for the list during the period, but after all, I was still a little embarrassed, mainly because I felt that I couldn't read it, and I felt that I was no longer at the level, so I would compete for the list again......

All I can say is that in the next book, there are surprises......

Don't pay attention to me, when I send out the book, there will be a place for me.

Having said that, it's still this number to issue books, so I won't open the trumpet, and I'm still a little confident in the new book.

The main thing is to find your own position.

After all, it's from an outlet, and I don't know what level my previous level was at the starting point.

The results of this book have landed, and I basically know what level I am playing normally at the starting point and what level I am doing my best.

In a word...... Just sauce purple......

Except for a few fan.,If it's a new book.,I'll see you in September.。

Well...... Let me know in advance.

It's either the Han Dynasty or the Tang Dynasty, so there will be no voting, and I'll read it myself after writing the beginning to see which one is above the level.

Yes!

Bye-bye-bye-bye!

Love you guys, readers!

Thank you for being with me on this journey.

If you can't find a history book when you look back, you can try searching for the name March, and you may be surprised.

In short, it won't be a brainless article......

The last of the last!

I wish the readers a smooth sail and a prosperous life!

See you in September!

Start losing weight!

See you next time, it's March 140!!