First of all, I'm sorry 00, the plot performance of the recent paragraph is not good, it's because I wasn't prepared before, I'm in a hurry, and there are many loopholes in the logic, and it even makes people feel awkward and uncomfortable, causing this kind of mistake shouldn't be, and I'm sorry for everyone.

It's also my own mentality is more anxious.,This book has had a lot of stiff points from the beginning of the book to the present.,This is more fatal in the early stage.,If this happens in the middle and late stages.,The characters and plot structure have been roughly perfected.,The impact won't be great.,But the bad writing in the early stage will affect the follow-up reading very much.,Let many people abandon the book.,And then there's no then.。

There were already some problems, and they were also pointed out by everyone, and I really wanted to write something wonderful to reverse the downward trend, but the result was that the more anxious I was, the more problems appeared, alas......

Even if I have written good things before, it doesn't mean that I can always write wonderful stories, which is very sad, this book is still too inadequately prepared by me, because of the changes in the interstellar era, there are a lot of things to tell, and it can't be written in the way of a new book, you have to connect with the past of the Third Age, and do some connection, which causes too many settings, and the background needs to be described, which is undoubtedly a headache and a heavy burden.

In the early stage, I felt that the plot was too depressing, because Tilan's background and identity were different from Lolan's, when Lolan appeared, her personality and mentality were almost complete, and Tilan's limited experience and background couldn't write it so perfectly and powerfully, she was only 16 years old, extremely young, and there were many, many places to overcome and grow, timid, not confident, less insightful, not comprehensive thinking, not enough grasp of the overall situation, and so on.

Although this seems a little "real", it is undoubtedly uncomfortable for the protagonist to be deflated, and Ti Lan was bullied and ridiculed by her classmates in the early stage, and many readers reported that it was also a little depressing, but if the protagonist suddenly changed his personality, it seemed torn and inexplicable.

And because of the character of the protagonist, she must take the most conservative strategy to do things, so it's okay for a short time, but if the plot is like this for a long time, it will seem too plain and flowing, lacking ups and downs, and sometimes readers don't feel relieved enough (why is Xiao Tilan always bullied TT)

So in order to improve this situation, I had to speed up some progress, lead out my sister's affairs in advance, the awakening of talent revealed, etc., as well as this trip to the city and so on.

disrupted the previous arrangement, the plot became abrupt, although it was relieved for a while, but the rhythm was also messed up, which also exposed a lot of my shortcomings and lived up to everyone's expectations.

To be honest, it's a little self-defeating00, not only for the reason of the book, but also for practical reasons, in the past two years, the family has been urging marriage to get tighter and tighter, and sometimes I think that if the second book goes to the next level, if it is popular, I will probably have the confidence to explain it to the family, and I can also have a little freedom of marriage and love.

But at present, it seems that it is impossible, I am still too whimsical, and it is not a good thing to be arrogant, to come step by step, I have long understood this truth, but the age of people is getting older step by step, as some old readers know, Qingkong has missed a lot, whether it is college, or after graduation, he is looking for jobs everywhere, constantly changing jobs, until finally he began to try the writing of his previous dreams.

It takes about 2-3 years to write a long-form online book, but how many 3 years do I have left, and a lonely life may be a good choice, but sometimes I also think that the fork in the road in life, if there is another opportunity to choose......

Things don't always go smoothly, and now looking back, the first book was really lucky, it was able to be signed by the editor when it was 150,000 words, and then it slowly gained popularity, and it played well in the early stage, and wrote some scenes that I had imagined for a long time, which made people happy and nostalgic.

It's always easy to be late at night, I'm sorry, but I know that everyone has their own pressures in their lives, and I always want to relax.

In the future, I will continue to work hard to write a book, try to show a moving and comfortable world, and it is annoying to sell badly, and I will not say anything like this in the future.