Report on the change of text
The book has been on its own for too long, and the number of readers who have given comments in almost 200,000 words has increased.
I'm basically a pure novice author.,In many places, I've been single-handed.,There are some problems with writing.,But I don't know where the problems are.,Just bury yourself in writing.。
When I first wrote it, there weren't that many business and entrepreneurial elements in the early days, and this can also be seen in the main character's plan in the early chapters.
In the early stage, it is more about the feeling of learning to dominate literature, focusing on papers and technology, and only in the middle stage will I turn to entrepreneurship.
After the number of readers increased, many of them expressed their hope that there would be a commercial component soon, so they temporarily cut into the plot of whiteness.
Later, he said that after making enough money, he hoped to have an entrepreneurial component as soon as possible, and hoped to see a more enterprising protagonist, so he was also looking for an angle to cut in recently.
Personally, I don't have any obsession with the plot direction of the story, and I am also in a state of exploration, at the beginning, I just wrote the protagonist to a lot of money, and it may be more of my personal expectation of a leisurely life after working overtime all day.
I feel too tired, and it's most comfortable to lie down and divide the money, and instinct is written like this.
If possible, try to satisfy the wishes of the readers.
However, after changing the plot and direction, sometimes it will lead to insufficient foreshadowing, or some details that I have not thought through, which I try to avoid.
I've been making changes a lot lately based on feedback.
For example, because I want to strengthen the entrepreneurial part, the contract with Google has been changed from three years to one year, and the plan is to run away and do it myself after completing the thesis in one year. Before I went to start a wave of domestic entrepreneurship, I went to Google to accumulate a year of American resources and start another wave of entrepreneurship. Maybe the plot will also travel around the world because of his career, and he won't stay in Silicon Valley as long as he originally planned.
For example, many readers have reacted that the role of the female supporting actress is redundant (the heroine has not been decided in this book), I have already deleted two chapters before, and the follow-up plan has also been adjusted, ready to dilute and dispose of it, and introduce some new characters to see the feedback.
For example, some contracts have not hired a lawyer, the equity distribution is unreasonable, and some operations may be illegal.
I basically folded back and modified or patched the unclear points.
It's really not easy to change, and there's really no way.
If you find that the paragraph comment you have is missing, it's not that I deleted it, it's basically the text that has been changed.
Listen to everyone's opinions with an open mind, and reasonable suggestions will be turned back for revision.
The direction of the plot in the future will also be adjusted according to the discussion with everyone.
For example, the lack of professionalism, in addition to my personal instinct to lie flat, on the other hand, it is also because the time plan for the original school bully to change to business was late, and it will be adjusted and accelerated recently.
There are several book friends who help me find unreasonable places in the plot all day long, and there are also book friends who specialize in correcting my typos.
Of course, it's more of a book friend who silently follows up every day.
Of course, this number of readers is not a lot at the beginning, but for me personally, it is much better than the previous stand-alone machine.
Thank you very much!