Professor Lin was very happy to see Gao Jialin, "Writer Xiao Gao, what's wrong?" How's the draft changing? ”

"Mr. Lin, it's almost changed. When it comes to the technical part, I would like to ask you to check it again! ”

"Yes, yes! It just so happens that I have time, and there is not much content related to technology, so I will check it for you now! Professor Lin is also a vigorous and resolute person, so he took the manuscript immediately and began to review it according to the position pointed out by Gao Jialin.

The old professor was an extremely strict person, and he pointed out every word that was ambiguous or inaccurate. It made Gogarin very embarrassed, he thought that he had basically changed it without any problems.

"That's it! Now it's perfect! It took Professor Lin two hours to finally complete the manuscript.

Gogarin gratefully did not know how to repay. At that moment, he proposed to invite Professor Lin to dinner. Professor Lin readily agreed, but when he went to the school cafeteria, he found that only special meal tickets issued by the canteen were accepted. In the end, it turned out that Professor Lin invited this meal. Of course, Gogarin knew that Professor Lin was doing it on purpose, and he knew that the cafeteria couldn't spend cash, so he brought Gogarin here.

Gao Jialin was even more ashamed, Professor Lin gave him so much for free, but he didn't know how to reciprocate. However, the older generation of scientific and technological workers is like this, they feel that as long as Gogarin can promote the new technology and let the farmers reap the benefits, it is also appropriate to pay more.

Gao Jialin was very moved, and was ready to go back and write a novel with the older generation of scientific and technological workers like Professor Lin as the protagonist, and eulogize this spirit.

Gao Jialin left BJ Agricultural College, felt that he still had some time, and wanted to buy a gift for Liu Qiaozhen. And he walked around the department store for a long time, but he didn't dare to make a move.

The price of BJ is very cheap compared to later generations. But compared to northern Shaanxi at this time, it is too expensive! I can't afford it!

In the end, Gao Jialin reluctantly took action and bought Liu Qiaozhen a bottle of alabaster, which could wipe his face and hands. This little bottle costs a full five dollars, which is too expensive! He could imagine that Liu Qiaozhen must be reluctant to use it, I am afraid that only at major moments will he take out a little bit and wipe it gently.

The next day, Gao Jialin took the manuscript to see Editor Zhu, he had completely changed it, and the number of words had been pressed to 60,000.

After reading it, editor Zhu Wei was very happy, and he was even more relieved to learn that Gao Jialin specially asked Professor Lin to check the technical content. This kid is diligent and careful, and has a high talent, and he must be a literary master in the future.

At that time, he took the manuscript to see the editor-in-chief Guan Zhihao: "Editor-in-chief, the long and short columns in August will be published directly." It is in response to the question of how to support rural entrepreneurship! ”

Editor-in-chief Guan didn't say a word, and agreed directly. This matter is a certainty, and there is no mistake.

Since it was okay, Gao Jialin planned to return to his home in northern Shaanxi immediately, although he had been away from Liu Qiaozhen for less than a week, he had already begun to miss it.

Editor Zhu Wei was about to say goodbye to Gao Jialin, when he suddenly remembered something, "By the way, Xiao Gao, didn't you say that you are still writing a children's novel?" Can you give me a look? ”

Of course, Gogarin had no problem, took out the manuscript of the first "Harry Potter" "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone" that had been completed, and handed it to Editor Zhu.

Editor Zhu took the manuscript and read it. He originally planned to only watch the beginning, but the more he watched, the more fascinated he became, and the more he watched, the more fascinated he became, until he finished reading the first part of the whole thing.

"Xiao Gao! If nothing else, your imagination is amazing! This book is so interesting that even I can't put it down as an adult! By the way, I see that this spell in your text is a bit weird. How did you make this up? ”

Gao Jialin scratched his head and said, "I took the pronunciation of Northern Shaanxi dialect and made it look like English pronunciation." For example, in this opening mantra, the mantra is "Aranon Cave Open". In fact, it is the dialect of northern Shaanxi: "I can get it open"! ”

Editor Zhu was stunned for a moment, muttered in his mouth and tried to pronounce it, but suddenly thought about it and burst into laughter.

"Haha! Ha ha! It's so much fun! What do you think, it's amazing! ”

Editor Zhu laughed for a while, and then slowly stopped. began to explain to Gogarin why he asked him about this children's novel.

It turned out that Editor Zhu had a classmate in "Juvenile Literature and Art" and served as an editor. He often heard his classmates complain that they didn't get any good manuscripts. Since Gogarin has this content, he wants to take a look at it for himself first, and recommend it to his classmates if it is really good. I didn't expect this novel to be more interesting than I imagined, it was simply wonderful.

Editor Zhu gave Gao Jialin's contact information to his classmates and suggested that he contact the other party as soon as possible after completing the first part.

Finally, Editor Zhu made a few comments on Gao Jialin's novel. The first point is that the translation is too heavy, and it is better to adjust this. The second point of advice is to try not to mix in the content of the child's love.

Finally, the sentence should be more concise and accurate, because the child may use this novel as a model for his own composition. All in all, even children's literature should be fully committed and not too perfunctory.

These three points hit the nail on the head.

Especially on the last point, Gogarin used this novel as a tool to make money, and it was indeed too casual to write it. Even if you copy it, you should copy it well, change it carefully, and don't ruin the classics in order to make money.

Gao Jialin humbly accepted, thanked Editor Zhu again, and said goodbye and left.

The next day, Gogarin set out on his way home. The editor of the article is very powerful, I don't know whose relationship I trusted, but I actually helped him buy a sleeper ticket.

These days, it's not something that can be bought with money.

Of course, Gogarin is very grateful, and thanks to the editor for taking care of him.

The sleeper is naturally much more comfortable than the hard seat, and Gogarin lay on the bed all the way to catch up with the manuscript, and when he was tired, he turned around and lay down to sleep. With the sound of the green train clanging, I slept very comfortably.

More than 20 hours passed unconsciously.

Gogarin also got off the train with his backpack and came to YA City. He bought some more things in the city, snacks, silk scarves and daily necessities, and planned to give part of them to his parents and part of them to Liu Qiaozhen.

Then, with his heavy luggage, Gogarin got on the bus back to the county seat.

It's like an arrow! The closer he got to Gaojia Village, the more excited Gao Jialin became! He couldn't wait to see Liu Qiaozhen at first sight and take her into his arms.

Maybe it's because of the sigh in his heart, when Gao Jialin approached the village, he saw a girl at the entrance of the village from a distance, he rubbed his eyes, and that Qianying was Liu Qiaozhen!

At this time, Liu Qiaozhen also found Gao Jialin and ran desperately towards him. Gogarin also threw his luggage and ran to meet him.

When the two met, Gao Jialin hugged Liu Qiaozhen, lifted her high, and turned her around.

Liu Qiaozhen giggled, not to mention how happy she was!

She finally met the long-awaited Galingo. It is no accident that Liu Qiaozhen is at the entrance of the village, since a few days ago, she has been waiting at the entrance of the village every day. She wants to let Garlingo come back and see her as soon as she comes.

The two hugged heartily and told about their parting.

Gao Jialin suddenly thought of something, pulled Liu Qiaozhen and ran back to the luggage, eagerly opened it, took out a small bottle of alabaster and a bright red silk scarf, and handed it to Liu Qiaozhen, "Qiaozhen, this is what I bought for you, do you like it or not?" ”

Liu Qiaozhen didn't mention how happy she was, and carefully held the crystal clear alabaster, "Brother Garin, what is this?" ”

"Alabaster, face and hand, BJ people use this. We are also prone to dry skin, and if you apply a little bit every day, your skin will soon become white and tender. Gogarin explained.

"Really?" Liu Qiaozhen carefully unscrewed the lid, lightly dipped it a little with the tips of her fingers, and then rubbed it in the palm of her hand according to what Gao Jialin taught, and then rubbed it on her face.

"Brother Galingo, it smells so good! Do you see my face is white? Liu Qiaozhen was anxious to let Gao Jialin see it.

Gogarin looked at it pretendedly, and then shook his head: "I can't see it!" ”

"Why can't you see it?" Liu Qiaozhen was a little puzzled.

"Our Qiaozhen is very white, and it is very white whether it is wiped or not!" Gogarin joked seriously.

"Nasty!" Liu Qiaozhen rolled her eyes at Gao Jialin, but it was more like a wink. She looked at her hands carefully, and sure enough, she rubbed the alabaster, which was much whiter and more delicate.

"Gallingo, is alabaster expensive?"

"It's not expensive, it's cheap!"

"You're lying to me again, it's going to be expensive! When you go home, you must hide it, don't let Qiao Ling Na Nizi spoil it! ”

Liu Qiao treasured the alabaster and wrapped the silk scarf around his neck.

"Brother Galingo, am I good-looking?"

"Of course it's good-looking, all the women in the world are not as good-looking as you!"

"I don't believe it, when you go to BJ this time, you must have seen a lot of beautiful BJ girls!"

"Why! BJ, how can there be a girl who is more beautiful than you! ”

The two of them chattered meaninglessly as they walked. Suddenly, Gao Jialin remembered something, opened the mezzanine of the box, and showed Liu Qiaozhen.

"Wow! That's a lot of money! Garlingo, how do you have so much money? ”

"Haha, guess!"

"I guess......" Liu Qiaozhen figured it out with a blink of her eyes, "Oh, I know, Brother Gallinger, this is the manuscript fee for your novel!" ”

"Haha!" Gao Garin smiled proudly, "I got off the bus in the county seat and took all the manuscript fees by the way." Guess how many? ”

Without waiting for Liu Qiaozhen to guess, Gao Jialin couldn't help but reveal the mystery by himself, "Six hundred yuan!" Now you can come to the door to propose, the bride price is enough! ”。

"That's a lot! Galingo, you're awesome! Liu Qiaozhen covered her mouth, for fear that she would exclaim and attract robbers.

"By the way, Brother Galingo, I've already told my dad that I don't want a bride price! If he dares to open his mouth, I will cut off the father-daughter relationship with him! Liu Qiaozhen put on a menacing expression, looking very cute.