Liu Lanhua's father wrote according to his father Gao Yude, an honest and honest farmer, who thinks that women's learning knowledge is useless, so he didn't let Liu Lanhua go to school since she was a child, and only let her do housework and farm work. Liu Lanhua's eldest brother is also the same as his father. Their father and son are considered by the village to be a reliable family. However, this is a barren northwest village, and it can barely eat enough just by digging in the fields, and I dare not think about anything else.

Wang Manyin is the opposite, he is considered to be a second slipper who does not do farm work and wanders around. And he is actually a very business-minded person, and of course he is also a relatively lazy person.

Such a character setting forms a sharp contrast with Liu Lanhua's father and brother, and the contradiction is naturally easy to unfold.

Why does Liu Lanhua like Wang Manyin? Not only because Wang Manyin is tall and handsome, but more importantly, Wang Manyin represents the outside world and unrestrained freedom.

Why does Wang Manyin like Liu Lanhua? First of all, he wants to find a mother-in-law, because he is old and wants to find someone who knows cold and hot, Liu Lanhua is virtuous and beautiful. Later, in his contact with Liu Lanhua, he was infected by her boldness and enthusiasm, and both of them had a yearning for freedom and a disgust for the closed and decadent atmosphere of the village, which is the empathy together.

Breaking through the feudal barrier between the two and breaking through the strong opposition of the old-style parents is the most contradictory plot in the book, where we should focus on highlighting Liu Lanhua's bravery and enthusiasm, and also hint at Wang Manyin's inferiority complex.

Later, when the two were together, Wang Manyin was determined to get rid of his laziness and live a good life. At first he made some money and began to indulge in pride, showing off in front of the villagers, like an upstart. was severely criticized by Liu Lanhua, he couldn't see his own problem and lost his temper with Liu Lanhua. There is a rift in their marriage.

The next thing is because Wang Manyin showed off everywhere, he was targeted by the bad guys, drugged him, and stole all the money.

Wang Manyin was so depressed that he didn't dare to go home and wandered outside. Liu Lanhua looked for him everywhere, and finally found Wang Manyin, who was like Huazi, and beat him to completely obey his wife, and the power of the family will be in Liu Lanhua's hands in the future.

Liu Lanhua took out the private money she saved, all of which were the money that Wang Manyin asked her to buy clothes and jewelry, as well as the money sponsored by her mother's family, which was the money that Wang Manyin gave to the Liu family after she became rich. They didn't spend any of the money.

Wang Manyin took the money and made a comeback and started doing business again. Liu Lanhua also pretended to be a man and went with Wang Manyin. The two partnered together, went through a lot of hardships and hardships, and slowly started the business.

Later, Wang Manyin found the business opportunity of willow weaving, Liu Lanhua said that the village committee supported, organized the women of the whole village to set up and join the village-run craft factory, supported Wang Manyin, and finally the village-run craft factory brought a lot of income to the whole village. There is Wang Manyin's credit in this, but it is more due to Liu Lanhua's credit. So in the end, Liu Lanhua became the factory director and Wang Manyin became the sales manager.

When Gao Jialin wrote this book, he always paid attention to highlighting the image of Liu Lanhua, and didn't write that Wang Manyin was the protagonist.

Of course, the role of Liu Lanhua is a bit too "Wei Guangzheng", but there is no way, women are always questioned intentionally or unintentionally in this era, if they don't write "Wei Guangzheng" a little more, everyone will not believe that Liu Lanhua can do so many things.

Just give a few examples, and everyone will understand.

The characters in "Dream of Red Mansions" such as Lin Daiyu, Xue Baochai, Tanchun, Miaoyu and so on are almost perfectly portrayed, and no one thinks there is anything wrong. On the contrary, those women, who were portrayed with a little flaw, were reprimanded as bad people. For example, Wang Xifeng, who is beautiful and capable, is because he is jealous and designed to make the second sister of the junior You fall out of favor, and he was intoxicated with a femme fatale.

Another example is the little dragon girl in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", the image of a fairy like a fairy, because of the loss of her body, which made countless readers indignant. As for Yang Guo, there is one arm missing, but everyone thinks it doesn't matter.

Another example is Ji Xiaofu in "Heaven and Dragon Slayer", except for empathy and falling in love with Yang Xiao, there are no shortcomings. was disgusted by readers for a while, and some even thought she was a green tea. But Zhang Wuji, seeing that one loves the other, and wants to marry the four together, but no one thinks there is a problem.

With so many examples, everyone understands. The reader's tolerance for the flaws of female characters is extremely low, so it is also a helpless move for Gogarin to portray female characters as flawless.

Gao Jialinwen was like a spring, the tip of the pen was brushing on the manuscript paper, and when his stomach was growling, he was so hungry that he couldn't stand it, and when he raised his head, he found that it was already late at night, and Liu Qiaozhen was sitting with his head on the side, dozing off in a daze, and his head was up and down.

Liu Qiaozhen was in a haze, and suddenly noticed that Gao Jialin raised his head from the eyelids that were about to close. She immediately came to her senses, "Gallinger, are you done writing?" You must be hungry, I'll get you something to eat!" After saying that, she hurriedly got up and ran to the kitchen, and soon her voice came from the kitchen, "Oops, the rice is cold, you have to wait, I'll give you hot heat!" ”

Gao Jialin got up and walked to the kitchen, looking at Liu Qiaozhen's busy figure, he felt warm, "Qiaozhen, you go to sleep, I'll make it myself!" ”

"Don't talk nonsense, I'll just make it for a few minutes, if you want to do it, it will be a mess, and I will have to clean it up for half an hour." Liu Qiaozhen's hands were skillfully busy, and in a blink of an eye, the steamed buns and vegetables were on the steamer, steaming.

Gao Jialin smiled, leaned his back against the door frame, and said with deep emotion: "Qiaozhen, it's good to have you, I can marry you is the greatest happiness in my life!" ”

From this day on, Gogarin began to write "Orchid Flower" wholeheartedly. This time he was no longer as fully engaged as he was last time, and he forgot to sleep and eat day and night. In this way, the article is indeed full of enthusiasm, but it often gushes out superfluous things, making the writing look verbose and distorted. This time, Gogarin wrote a part of the plot every day, and the rest of the time was spent recalling it in his head and polishing it in advance. Each part of the plot and structure is pre-modified. Therefore, although this novel is only 50,000 words, it took Gao Garin more than half a month, which is much longer than the last time.

Of course, this also has the advantage of presenting a first draft that is quite complete, and there are very few parts that can be revised.

In this way, it only took five or six days to revise the draft, which is quite fast. When the draft was revised, Gao Jialin was a killer again, and the description of Wang Manyin's petty business was reduced and refined a lot, striving to highlight Liu Lanhua's leading role.

Of course, these first drafts were not useless, and Gogarin felt that sooner or later he would have to write novels about the self-made business of young people, and these were ready-made contents. Why not write it now? Or is it because the time has not yet come, and the overall environment has not been untied to private enterprises, and it is too sensitive to write this part now.

Gogarin's novella "Orchid Flower" is finally completed, with a total of about 45,000 words, which is much shorter than the last time.

After Gao Jialin finished the novel, he took Liu Qiaozhen's hand for the first time and asked her to sit beside her, this novel is based on Liu Qiaozhen, and Gao Jialin plans to use it for Liu Qiaozhen to read first.

"Garlingo, what do you need me for?" Liu Qiaozhen was a little nervous when she encountered such a solemn thing for the first time.

"Qiaozhen, this is the novel I just finished. It was based on you, and now you're the first reader. You can take a good look at it, and when you look at it, imagine that you are Liu Lanhua, that is, you have experienced these things. I would like to know what is inappropriate, inaccurate, or omitted in the detailed description of Liu Lanhua. ”

When Liu Qiaozhen heard that she was the first reader and took herself as the prototype, she was immediately happy and nervous, as if she was carrying a heavy burden on her body, opened the manuscript with a serious face, and began to read it seriously.

Liu Qiaozhen has recognized more than 2,000 words, and most of the words in this novel can be recognized and understood. When encountering words she doesn't know or words and idioms she doesn't understand, Gao Jialin will patiently explain them to her.

Liu Qiaozhen watched very carefully and slowly. The 45,000-word novel took her three days to read. In the past three days, Liu Qiaozhen has devoted herself to the scenes depicted in this novel, with the happiness of the characters and the sadness of the characters, she almost feels that she is Liu Lanhua.

Gao Jialin's method is still very effective, Liu Qiaozhen put herself into the role of Liu Lanhua, for those subtle twists and turns in the daughter's mentality, Gao Jialin's description of the details is slightly unsmooth, she will notice and express it. Under Gao Jialin's guidance, Liu Qiaozhen can say what she means, maybe she can't express it accurately, but the two have the same heart to mind, and they can make Gao Jialin understand.

Gao Jialin was very happy, after Liu Qiaozhen's immersive experience, he found out more than a dozen subtle bugs, and after modifying them one by one, it was finally completed.

From the beginning of the novel "Orchid Flower" to the completion of the final manuscript, it took Gao Jialin nearly two months before and after, when he sent the manuscript and called the editor-in-chief Zhu of "Contemporary". In addition to the post and telecommunications bureau, when I felt relaxed, I couldn't open my eyes by the bright sun, only to find that it was already an April day when the willows were green and the grass was growing and the warblers were flying!

After completing such a big project, Gao Jialin plans to give himself a vacation, not writing or doing anything in the past few days, taking Liu Qiaozhen to take a good look and appreciate it, so as to live up to the spring.

The must-see attractions in the city are: Hukou Waterfall of the Yellow River, Baota Mountain Scenic Area, Revolutionary Memorial Hall, Yellow Emperor Mausoleum Scenic Area, Zaoyuan Revolutionary Site, Baota Mountain and Python Mountain Forest Park.

Some of these attractions are in the city, while others are in the counties below. Gogarin planned to take a look around the city first.

Liu Qiaozhen was also very happy to hear Gao Jialin say that she would go shopping for a few days. These days, she has been nesting at home, and the good spring outside has already made her itch in her heart.