Chapter 17: Hearty emotional outbursts
Cleaning up his mood, he cleared his throat, rolled up the paper in his hand, held it in his hand as a sword, and heard Li Defu say: "Start!" ”
Chen Shuo's brows froze, his face sank, his eyes stared at Li Defu deadly, and he pointed his sword at him fiercely, and said, "Vulture, I'm going to kill you......"
After he finished his lines, Li Defu was noncommittal, turned his head to Wu Qi and asked, "What do you think?" ”
Chen Shuo also turned his head to look.
Wu Qi frowned and thought about it, and said, "I don't know if I feel it right, but I feel it, but it's too full, and it seems a little empty."
It's as if you didn't hate him because of Lian Chengjin, you just hated him for the sake of hating. ”
After speaking, he looked at Li Defu with Chen Shuo again, after all, he was a professional.
Looking at the doubts in Chen Shuo's eyes, Li Defu said: "Do you feel that you have thought a lot in your heart, and your feelings have been expressed."
Why does Brother Qi say that it looks thin? ”
Chen Shuo nodded and said, "Yes, Teacher Li, please give me some advice." ”
"It's normal, you haven't been exposed to acting, you don't know it's normal.
First of all, I should praise you, your performance is still good.
At least you think about it seriously and act it. Li Defu nodded the table and said, "However, you have to remember."
Although acting is an expression of emotion, it is also skillful.
And you, what you lack is skill. ”
His voice changed, and he suddenly asked, "Have you ever seen a shrew scolding the street?" ”
"Yes."
"Do you think the feelings of shrews are strong when they scold the street?"
"Strongly."
"Yes, it's intense, so intense that you only focus on her anger and don't have the heart to understand what she's angry about."
Li Defu pointed at Chen Shuo and said: "The characters are diverse, the emotions are ups and downs, and the tone is also fast and slow, light and heavy, and urgent.
And your performance just now is like a shrew scolding the street, venting it all at once.
Make people only pay attention to your emotions and ignore what your lines are trying to convey.
In this way, according to your own ideas, you split this paragraph into paragraphs. ”
Chen Shuo picked up the pen, drew a diagonal line in the place where he thought it needed to be segmented, and showed it to Li Defu.
Vulture, I'm going to kill you, / What does it matter to me whether Xiao Shiyi Lang is dead or alive? You are the one who took my wife! / No matter who Cheng Jin suffers, it's because of you. / If you are powerless to protect her, why should you take her away from my wedding? / Vulture, if I am to blame, the first thing I want to kill is you.
Li Defu looked at it and said, "Come, mark each paragraph with the emotion you want to express." ”
At this point, combined with the parable of the shrew, Chen Shuo had a faint understanding in his heart, and began to mark his thoughts on it.
The first paragraph should have the resentment that the murder could not be achieved, the second paragraph is a negation of the apparent purpose of the trip, and then point out one's real goal, and the third paragraph is to strengthen the second paragraph.
The fourth paragraph should be the most tangled, both the shame of being robbed of his wife and his wife not wanting to marry him.
There is also chagrin at Liancheng Jin's death, and finally blames this sin on the vulture.
The last paragraph is a summary of all emotions, and it is also catharsis.
Li Defu looked at Chen Shuo's marking, listened to his explanation, and asked, "Have you ever been in love and experienced such a thing?" ”
Chen Shuo was stunned, shook his head and said, "No, I haven't talked about it, and I haven't experienced it." ”
Li Defu glanced at him again, did not continue the topic, and said: "According to your marking, let's play it again." ”
When Chen Shuo said a paragraph with an emotion, and after performing it again, he looked at Wu Qi again.
Bang Bang Bang ~
Wu Qi applauded and said, "Great progress has been made. ”
Li Defu also nodded and said, "There is progress."
However, I let you segment it so that you can understand it better, not for you to perform segmentation.
This passage is spoken continuously, and the emotions are advanced and incremental.
Instead of being like you, just dry a sentence and an emotion.
Ponder and connect emotions. ”
"Okay, it's kind of connected, but the emotions are still too scattered......"
"Pay attention to the connection between emotions and mellow ...... when you change"
"There's a sense of wholeness, superimposing emotions, increasing sentence by sentence, and then bursting out in the last sentence......"
"Let you break out, not let you roar, you have to press, you can suppress it to call it an explosion, you can't suppress it called a flower ......"
“……”
said the lines over and over again, and was corrected by Li Defu over and over again, from emotions to broken sentences, from tone to expressions and actions......
In the end, Chen Shuo's mind was confused, and he felt that he was the Sima Xiang.
More and more emotions are accumulated in my heart, tormenting myself over and over again, and when I want to vomit quickly, I am suppressed by others.
At a certain moment, the accumulated emotion could no longer be suppressed, and it burst out violently, like a firecracker, from beginning to end.
Every paragraph, every sentence, every word, is so hearty to say.
When Chen Shuo finished the last sentence, "The first person I want to kill is you!" ”
There was silence in the room, save for his strong gasps.
After waiting for a while, without waiting for the guidance he was accustomed to, Chen Shuo slowly came back to his senses and looked at Li Defu.
Li Defu said with a smile: "It's okay, at least this scene, in terms of lines, in my place, it's okay." ”
Sigh~~~
Chen Shuo let out a long sigh of relief, and his body, which had always been energetic, actually felt a little tired.
He lifted his breath suddenly, and then slowly pressed down with his hands, his breath sank into the dantian, and there was a snoring sound between his chest and abdomen, conditioning his body.
Li Defu was surprised to see it this time, but he was not distracted, but waited for him to finish his conditioning and said, "But ......"
When Chen Shuo heard this, he subconsciously straightened up and said respectfully: "You say!" ”
After this guidance, he already regarded Li Defu as a teacher and master in his heart.
"Lines are only part of the performance, there are also expressions, shapes, manners, movements, etc.
The performance pays attention to the shape of the stage, which is what it means, and only when these are combined with each other is a complete performance.
However, these things are too broad, and they cannot be said clearly and taught in a while.
Even most people can't do all four in their lifetime.
Based on your performance just now, I can't say that you will definitely be able to get the role, but for tomorrow's interview, you are definitely qualified.
The rest depends on your on-the-spot performance tomorrow, your brother's ability, and the director's choice. ”
"Thank you for your advice." Chen Shuo got up and bowed respectfully.
Then he lifted the pot and refilled his cup with some water, held it up with both hands and handed it to him and said, "Teacher Li has worked hard, please drink tea." ”
Li Defu took the water cup, took a sip, paused, and said: "You are talented, after I point out some places, you can immediately understand and correct them, which is rare."
I don't think you're very old, if you really want to develop in the film and television industry, I suggest you take the school entrance examination and learn acting formally.
In school, as long as you study and practice seriously according to what the teacher teaches.
Not to mention how much you will achieve in the future, but it will definitely be able to raise your lower limit.
If you study seriously for four years, like this scene just now, you will definitely be able to easily achieve this point, or even better. ”
"He's acting now, just thinking about saving money to go to college." Wu Qi said with a smile.
"It's a good thing to be self-motivated, if I had your awareness, I wouldn't have been able to play a supporting role until now." Li Defu also smiled.