Chen Shuo shook his head and smiled: "I'm not the same, you wrote the script from a complete creative point of view.

There's a fundamental difference between me just providing an idea and then letting someone else help refine it. ”

"Alas!" Shu Yan couldn't help sighing, she naturally understood what Chen Shuo meant.

There is an essential difference between her script creation and Chen Shuo's script creation.

She wants to become a real screenwriter who can create independently by completing a script.

And Chen Shuo just wants a complete script, whether he can become a qualified screenwriter or not is not so important to him.

One is to learn the Fa, and the other is to use the technique.

As long as he learns the method of script writing and has a successful experience, Shu Hui will have confidence when he wants to create in the future.

As for Chen Shuo, his success greatly depends on the help of other orthodox screenwriters.

Of course, this is just what she thinks.

In fact, Chen Shuo's background and ability are far beyond her imagination.

Chen Rui asked curiously, "Brother, how is your script written?" Can you show us? ”

She doesn't care much about whether Chen Shuo can become a qualified screenwriter, but she is very curious about the stories written by Chen Shuo.

Shu Shu also turned her head to look at Chen Shuo, when she went to visit the class before, she had only listened to Chen Shuo talk about this, and she didn't see what he wrote.

At this time, I was also a little curious.

"Let's go and see it later after dinner." Chen Shuo said and urged: "Hurry up and eat." ”

"Good!"

When a few people heard this, they immediately ate seriously, and soon handed over the kitchen to Zhao Guifang and Li Ping to clean up, and several people went to the game room next door together.

Chen Shuo inserted a USB flash drive into the computer, opened the two documents and said, "This is the first draft of the script written by me and Master Jiang's ideas. ”

Shu Shu leaned over to Chen Shuo's side, took the mouse and swiped it, and hastily flipped through the contents.

Chen Rui also came to her side, looked at the short content, and asked, "Why is your script so orderly?" ”

"What do you think of the movie script?" Chen Shuo said disapprerovingly: "I'm already good, when I first got the script of "Ambush on All Sides", it was only less than twenty pages. ”

Shu Xuan explained to her: "A movie is only more than 100 minutes, and the scenes are about 70 to 140 or 50, and there are not too many. ”

Chen Rui doesn't know anything about the script, it's just that every time she sees everyone reading the script, it's a thick pile.

At first glance, when I saw these two "barren" scripts, I felt that there was a big gap for a while.

Chen Shuo got up and gave up his seat to Shu Hui and Chen Rui, and said, "Okay, you two can read it together, what about your script?" ”

"In that computer." Shu Xuan pointed to the computer where she usually sits and said, "There is a script folder in the D drive, open it." ”

Chen Shuo and Liu Yifei came to the computer, turned on the computer, and saw that there was more than one document in the D drive, in addition to an overall script, there were also six documents marked with names such as "Hong'er" and "Qing'er".

There is also a folder with information written on it.

When you open it, you can see all kinds of materials, including textbooks, well-known script analysis, and various legends.

Each type of information is put away in different categories, and it seems that she has put a lot of effort into preparing this script.

Chen Shuo just flipped through it hastily, and then opened the script to take a look.

"You go that way." After reading two pages, Liu Yifei got up and squeezed around Chen Shuo and said, "It's uncomfortable to look far away." ”

Chen Shuo moved his ass to make room for her.

The seats in the game room are relatively large in size for comfort, and the two seats are a little far away from each other.

Fortunately, the seat space is also relatively large, and although it is a bit cramped for two people to sit in one chair, it is not uncomfortable.

Shu Hui and Chen Rui are small in size, so it is more comfortable to sit on a chair.

Chen Shuo hugged Liu Yifei and roughly looked at the script written by Shu Hui.

This story is based on the story of Dong Yong and the Seven Fairies, and a lot of self-created plots have been added.

In addition to Dong Yong and the Seven Fairies, the other six fairies also found Ruyi Langjun respectively.

At the end of the story, the Queen Mother also recognized the seven sons-in-law with satisfaction, and modified the rules of heaven instead of the Jade Emperor, so that the immortals could continue their relationship.

Overall, the disruption is still very large.

Taking advantage of Chen Shuo's thinking, Liu Yifei opened the file of "Qing'er".

This is the fifth sister of the Seven Fairies, and it was created based on her story.

Chen Shuo also watched it, and the content was quite different from his and Liu Yifei's own personalities, and their previous roles.

In the setting, Qing'er inherited the appearance of the queen mother, the most beautiful of the seven sisters.

The character is simple and lively, but at the same time there are many shortcomings.

Naïve and stubborn, and a little conceited, just for a gambling contract, he jokes with his life.

However, after losing her immortal skills and proud beauty, she slowly experienced the warmth and coldness of the world and gradually became mature.

And in the process, he met Ma Tianlong, a prisoner who had escaped.

Ma Tianlong was originally a talented man with a prominent family background, and he was a talent, and he often used his literary talents to attract girls.

Later, because his father was raided because of the law, he lived a life of exile, and when he saw Qing'er who was ridiculed, he stepped forward to save him.

The two encouraged each other in the midst of adversity, and their feelings gradually grew, and finally Qing'er regained her strength and recovered her appearance, and the two were together successfully.

The two characters are reversed before and after, and they still look quite distinctive.

Liu Yifei lay in Chen Shuo's arms, poked him with her elbow and said, "How do these two characters look?" ”

"Good." Chen Shuo smiled: "Is the plot all what you think?" ”

"Qing'er's turning point is what I want." Liu Yifei grinned and said: "Whether it is the story of the Seven Fairies, the Heavenly Immortals, or the Tianluo Girl."

It is said that after a fairy with immortal skills marries into a mortal family, she uses her own strength to help each other live a good life.

When I asked me, I wondered what would happen to a fairy if she came to the mortal world and lost everything she was proud of.

then wrote this twist, and the plots before and after were all chatted with Sister Sunshine and them.

The specific story is compiled in a hurry. ”

Chen Shuo touched her head and praised: "That's pretty good, the highlight of this character is in this turn."

But my role is a little less, huh? ”

"It's a little bit less, indeed." Liu Yifei nodded and said, "However, we are not the protagonists, it is normal to have few scenes." ”

"If you want to have more scenes, you can also shoot a legend of Qing'er and Ma Chenglong's fairy falling into the world." Shu Hui's voice sounded from behind the two of them.

The two turned their heads and saw that she and Chen Rui were already standing behind them.

"Your work already has the prototype of a good drama, wait until you finish filming this drama and see the effect."

Chen Shuo turned the chair, and brought the chair next to him over by the way, let the two of them sit down, and asked, "Isn't the name up yet?" ”

Shu Hui sat down with Chen Rui and said, "If you get up, it's okay to call it "The Legend of the Seven Fairies", or "The Seven Fairies of Joy." ”

Chen Shuo said: "The characteristics of "The Legend of the Seven Fairies" are not obvious, but "The Seven Fairies of Joy" is more topical, which makes people subconsciously think about how to be happy. ”

Shu Xuan clapped his hands and said: "Then it's called "Seven Fairies of Joy". ”

Liu Yifei asked: "Have you finished reading Chen Shuo's script?" How do you feel, which one do you like? ”

Chen Rui preemptively said: "I like the magician's one, if I can present all kinds of magic in a movie, I think it should be very attractive."

And the setting of the twins, I think it should be very interesting. ”

Shu Yan shook his head and said, "I feel that the setting of the twins makes the script seem too complicated, and there is not much time to show the characteristics of magic."

And, probably because I wrote about ancient costumes during this time, I feel that another book is better to write about the rivers and lakes. ”

Chen Shuo nodded and said, "You're on the point, the reason why I have a disagreement with Master Jiang is because the original setting is too complicated.

Originally, I wanted to tell a story about the rivers and lakes as the main character as the actor who made a living by juggling.

Later, when I wrote and wrote, I felt that with the actor as the protagonist, it was a little too niche.

I thought about shifting my perspective and starting with another female swordsman who was originally a supporting role.

It's just that Master Jiang is unwilling to give up this role, and even wants to strengthen the elements of magic tricks, so the two of us began to write our own things.

But now, he's gone back to the same path I used to do, adding too many elements and making the setting too bloated.

It does look attractive, but it is a bit unrealistic to want to present the characteristics of all the elements in more than 100 minutes.

After that, he will have to make a trade-off. ”

Chen Rui said as a matter of course: "Since there are too many elements, let's continue to split."

One focuses on magic, the other on twins, and then write two scripts?

You've done this once before, anyway. ”

Liu Yifei smiled: "How can it be so simple? From an idea to a qualified script, it takes a lot of effort to perfect.

In this way, the scripts that are made may not be able to make money when they are filmed.

Now the strength of Zhou Yi's film production is still very weak, and he can't withstand such a toss. ”

"That's a sale." Chen Rui said: "I heard that there are often screenwriters who can't shoot the script after writing it, so they sell the script.

There are also people who specialize in writing scripts and selling them, so you can do the same.

Write the story first, pick out the best one to do yourself, and use the others to work with others.

If someone pays to share the risk, they will do it, and if no one else will seal it up first, and then do it when they have the strength. ”

(End of chapter)