Originally, I didn't want to ask for leave today, but after the foodie planned to spend two hours at noon to sort out the rhythm of the plot from the beginning, it has been delayed until now.

Forgive the foodie for drilling today.

In the past, it may have been because the foodie's mentality was not smooth enough, but today it's really because the foodie wants to refresh it, so let's take care of the plot rhythm of our book.

There is a problem that foodies overlook.

A big question.

There must be a twist in the plot, but after moving from Real Madrid to Chelsea, foodies want to write more plots about their new teammates, just like the teammates who wrote about Real Madrid before.

But foodies have forgotten that compared to Real Madrid's stars, some of Chelsea's stars are really what most book lovers want to know and be interested in?

I've been reading a lot of suggestions from book friends lately, so I'm honestly reading this book from the beginning.

That's where I found out.

In the first six or seven hundred thousand words, I wanted to write more about the team and the growth of the main character, and that's fine.

Because of the failure of Mu-style Real Madrid to climb the peak of honor in that era, it was the regret of countless fans.

Or, to take a step back, the fans who don't like that Real Madrid team are at least more familiar with the stars of Mourinho, Cristiano Ronaldo, Ramos and Casillas, and are more interested in their stories.

At that time, I used the writing method I was good at to spread out the story, and the development of the plot was no problem, everyone loved it.

But now, when the little lion moved to Chelsea, and I still write like this, many book friends and bigwigs will find it a little unbearable.

This is my problem, foodies must admit that in the description of pen and ink, the halo on the protagonist should be overwritten, and foodies must apologize to most of their book friends.

So today, foodies have to drill this bull's horn, not to go to the end for a dead end, but to seriously re-examine it, where to start the plot problems, and I didn't change the way of writing when it was time to change it.

That's important to me.

Thankfully, I was persuaded to re-read the first thirty chapters, and then, all I can say... My day! How can I write so well in front of me!

Haha, just kidding, don't scold the big guys first!

Before and after, well... Foodies also feel a little miserable, so, if there is a mistake, we have to change, during this period of time, I actually always feel that the writing is not very good, the state is very problematic, to this day, I have to do a major operation on my own thinking!

In the last two chapters, I don't know if the big guys have seen it, but foodies have been slowly adjusting their writing style and focusing on the objects they describe.

The details of the game had to be written back first.

The protagonist is now the pillar of Chelsea, but I have to write about how this pillar is played, how to defend, how to seize the opportunity to switch between attack and defense, how to shoulder the responsibility to lead the attack, how to reassure my teammates......

These things were ignored before foodies, and they really should be hit! I still thank you very much for mentioning it by a book friend, thank you very much!

There is also the design of the plot, it can't be too curved, it can't be too straight, what I wrote after all is, the bigwigs can't watch it aggrieved and bored.

So there has to be foreshadowing, there has to be a twist, and more importantly, it's cool!

Although our book is not about being very cool, it's cool to have a hat trick every other chapter, but there must be a reasonable coolness.

In this regard, foodies have been doing poorly recently, but fortunately, they can still be changed, and they still have to be changed, and it's not too late to make amends.

Foodies have read a lot of suggestions from book friends on the road to the screen, and the bigwigs can rest assured, foodies are in their eyes, and if they are wrong, they will change, our main focus is to listen to persuasion!

It's that today's update has fallen, and foodies will knock one to the bigwigs first!

Bang bang bang!

I'll continue to write a detailed outline, change the plot, and we'll make up for it tomorrow!

This will be inspired to bubble out, really, foodies will not be able to say that they will code words all night again~

Thank you very much to all the bigwigs who support foodies, and patiently give suggestions when foodies obviously have status problems, really, foodies are in mind!

Thanks again, foodies!