It's finally over.

In the past few days, I have taken a cursory look at it while cultivating.

Don't talk nonsense, review first.

1. There is a serious lack of detail

The characters are not clear, the supporting roles are too few, and the environmental description is superficial.

2. Daily, branch, basically none

Although the story is not very good in the later stage, it is basically the main line of advancement, all dry goods, and it is tiring and boring to read.

Looking back, there are a lot of places where you can actually stretch it out and add a few small events to make the story look fuller.

For example, Xu Chong is an official in Canglong County, it can be said that he did not write about his experience of becoming an official at all, and he was only pulling and entangled with the villain from beginning to end, so that the protagonist image of 'fake dog official Zhenqingtian' lacked a lot of strong support.

3. Emotional line failure

As the only emotional line in this book, the acquaintance and union between Xu Chong and Hua Langyue can be said to be without foreshadowing and no brewing, which is the most criticized and the biggest poison.

However, this is also the author's first attempt to write an emotional drama, which is really incompetent and irrefutable.

Of course, if the sensual drama is written well, it is a big plus for a book, and the author can't give up rashly, he can only learn more and supplement himself more, and at the same time ensure that the next book will not let the female character become the heroine without being sure.

4. The issue of worldview

I'm not afraid of everyone's jokes, in fact, when the book was issued, the outline only achieved the step of leaning over the Tianxuan Realm, and the plot of the big ruin behind it was a continuation of the original outline after the author found that the Tianxuan Realm was almost finished.

And there is no problem with the setting of Daxu in nature, what is really problematic is that the performance of the setting of truth + nothingness is too poor.

Not only can it not make the reader form a distinct image in his mind, but also because all kinds of new words pop up in his head, making the plot extremely chaotic and extremely boring.

If you think about it now, it's really better to use a simple fairy + demon to show it more appropriately.

Fortunately, in the end, I made a detour and filled the pit, even if it was not exciting......#苦笑

5. Writing problems

When I was studying, the author always felt that although his writing was not good, it was enough, but when he actually wrote a book, he found that there was a big problem in it.

Some readers may have noticed that in the early and middle stages of this book, there has always been a comparison of logic, and I wish to be clear about everything and all the reasons for everyone.

Although there are reasons for the suspenseful elements, it really affects the reading experience.

The most important thing about online articles should be to make it easy for readers to read.

In the case of this book, it is equivalent to the kind of T_T that is a little cool and not refreshing enough, and it is laborious to read

The above are a few of the relatively big questions that the author has reflected.

If there are any other shortcomings found by the discerning Yanzu, please comment on this paragraph, the author will think deeply and dare not slack off.

Of course, if you have emotions that need to be vented, please do so in this paragraph.

At last......

I wish you all a happy Mid-Autumn Festival and a happy National Day in advance!

Thanks!!

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