"Thunder Split-Hoof Ox Blood Essence?, how can such a rudimentary thing be embarrassed to be judged?" Magdra scoffed, but in the spirit of professional ethics as a judge, she had to roughly scan the first few pages.

However, she soon realized that the overall structure of the paper was very good, with clear structure, rigorous argumentation, detailed and accurate steps, and a very comfortable reading feeling.

"Well, the foundation of writing the paper is good, but there are no highlights in the content. Magdra shook her head with some regret.

The knowledge of the primary bloodline essence was indeed too pediatric for her as an intermediate magister. And because of the importance and preciousness of the bloodline essence, it has already been studied countless times by countless alchemists, and it is basically impossible to find a breakthrough.

The paper in front of me is such a situation. Although it is a complete introduction to the process of making the blood essence of the Thunder Cracked Hoof Ox, if you operate according to its content, you will definitely be able to succeed, but in terms of groundbreaking and exploratory, there is no breakthrough, and it can only be regarded as a work that follows the rules, even if you barely pass the review, you will not be able to get academic points at all.

After patiently reading a few more pages, Magdra finally lost interest completely, closed the paper in his hand, which was more than ten pages thick, and prepared to throw it into the pile that was not approved by Guò, and then left the office to take a good rest.

Just as the paper was about to get out of hand, Magdra felt that it was a pity. Although there are no highlights in the paper, people with a very good level of writing are still worth cultivating. After all, after so many years of paper review, she is very concerned about this aspect. Because of the quality of the writing structure, it can directly express a person's literacy and attitude.

"Perhaps, all this guy needs is inspiration. After saying a word, Magdra moved her gaze to the name of the author on the cover of the paper, "?"

The senior mage felt that the name was somewhat familiar, but he couldn't remember it for a while.

Thought about it. Still unable to get any clues, Magdra muttered, "People are old, and their memory is declining. He took out the list and looked it up.

"Huh, freshman?" the gray-haired woman frowned, a little surprised in her heart. If it weren't for the fact that the list was about to be in front of her, she really couldn't believe that a freshman who had just entered the school could have this kind of ability to write papers.

After a little thought, Magdra finally made a decision, first noting on Leo's thesis that "the alchemy faction is transferred to Mr. Epniris". It was then placed in a pile of preliminary examinations, awaiting further review to determine the final value.

............

The next day, in another room in the review department, the junior magister, the level 7 mage, the senior alchemist Epniris, and three other colleagues were busy reviewing the papers that had been submitted. The annual meeting is approaching, the papers are squeezing, and they have to get all the work done before today.

And this time. His Excellency the Dean also gave an additional task, which is to extract the papers mentioned by the students individually, and then publish the results of the review, and then vote on them by all students. The top five will be selected to participate in the annual meeting.

As the most prestigious alchemist of the Ravington School of Magic, Epnyris is responsible for coordinating the overall situation, and therefore every paper that is submitted. He needs to be the first to see it.

At the moment, he has been working for hours on end, albeit with a drop in energy. The degree of reviewing papers is also slowing down rapidly.

Most of the papers that can pass the preliminary review will not be too bad, but the paper in front of him made him frown.

"How did Magdra manage to make a paper of this level even through the preliminary examination?" the senior alchemist thought very unhappily and opened the paper at the same time.

A few minutes later, after reading the whole paper, he thought for a moment and wrote a comment: "The first half of the paper is well-structured, the regulations are clear, and the process of making the essence of the bloodline of the Thunder Cracked Hoof Ox is completely expounded; ”

After washing, Epnyris raised his head and said, "Dwelan, you come and check it." ”

"Yes, sir. The middle-aged man named De Weilan hurriedly got up and took the paper from the other party's hand.

Double review is a consistent tradition of paper review, and the purpose is naturally to avoid the subjective thinking of a single person.

After a few more minutes, Dwelan also read Leo's paper and came to a similar conclusion to Epniris.

How can a substance extracted from an organism affect the release of energy from the human body? It is simply ridiculous. The Necromancy has long proven through a series of reals that the fluctuations of the soul are the only factor affecting the body.

"But these are real...... Did he make it all up randomly?" "De Willan didn't believe that anyone would do this, and after all, he was much younger, his thinking had not yet been completely solidified, and deep down he also had some ideas to challenge authority, and before he knew it, he had the idea of trying it himself.

But now was the busiest time for work, so he quickly put aside his thoughts and found a list of authors.

"Hey, this is a paper submitted by a student?" With this, De Weilan, who originally planned to return the paper for review, hesitated again.

In reality, he is not an employee of the Ravington Academy of Magic, but a member of an organization called "Alchemy Void". Since this organization also came to attend the annual meeting of Ravinton, it was sent to the audit department to serve as a reviewer to ensure that the audit work was fair and impartial, and would not be completely controlled by the people of Raviington.

Glancing at Epniris, who was still immersed in reviewing the paper, D'Willand became more and more undecided, if it was a paper from another organization, then according to Epniris's comments, there would definitely be no problem in returning it directly for review.

But now that I am in the Revington School of Magic after all, and this annual meeting, there is a special link for students to submit papers, which obviously has some special significance, so it is likely to cause some unnecessary trouble if I return the students' papers.

"It's already good for the students' papers to be written like this, and they have to vote on their own, so why should I be a bad person?" Thinking of this, Dwelan quickly made a decision, and wrote his own comments on the paper: although the conclusion is wrong, he dares to make bold guesses, and it is worth encouraging and reviewing.

............

In the evening, in front of the bulletin board in the center of the academy, the inner and outer three floors were full of students, and Leo and Sanders were among them, carefully checking the content on it.

"Below, for the papers and comments submitted by the students of this annual meeting, all students are requested to fill out the voting form and send it to the student union within three days to select the five papers you most hope to appear in the annual meeting. ”

The signing is the student council of the Ravington School of Magic, and here are the lines of essay titles and corresponding comments. A cursory count shows that there are as many as forty or fifty.

Leo didn't have to think about it to guess that this must be another famous name made by Lea. However, it is also necessary to do so, after all, the time for the annual meeting is limited, and it is already a great success to be able to get five students on the stage.

At this time, the little fat man suddenly exclaimed excitedly: "Leo, it's gone!

Leo followed his finger and quickly found the title of his paper, but after reading the comment, he couldn't help but smile wryly.

In his opinion, his "present" is definitely of great significance in exploring the way living things work, and can even become another theory on a par with the soul theory in one fell swoop, bringing a new exhibition to the school of necromancy.

But judging from the comments, the reviewer obviously didn't think so, but because he wrote his paper well and dared to ask questions, he barely passed the review.

"The situation is not optimistic, and if it goes on like this, it seems that it will be difficult to pass the voting link and enter the annual meeting. Leo listened to the voices around him, and the more he affirmed his thoughts. Because almost everyone is discussing the best papers, no one pays attention to their papers, so it is naturally impossible to get any votes. (To be continued!)

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