At seven o'clock in the evening, Lu Li took one last look at the data that was still rising, turned off the computer, and walked out of the office.

Although it was past the end of work, the light in the living room was still on, and Lin Xuan was tidying up, looking like she was going to get off work; Xu Jinquan looked at the computer intently, and the mouse kept moving.

"Boss, I'll get off work first." Lin Xuan put on her beige schoolbag and waved her hand and said.

"Okay, stay safe." Lu Li smiled and nodded, and then his eyes unconsciously glanced at Xu Jinquan's computer screen.

Maybe it's because of the power of LSP hidden in the bloodline, Lu Li can always find some astringent content in life; It's like some book lovers, obviously the author writes very normal articles, but they can find all kinds of carts in it......

With just a casual glance, Lu Li found something wrong on Xu Jinquan's screen.

Although she was just a beautiful young lady on the screen, through her abnormal red face and empty eyes, Lu Li, who had read countless books, was automatically retrieved in her mind at once......

This style of painting ......

As a man, where could Lu Li hold back the curiosity in his heart and tiptoe up.

Lin Xuan, who had already arranged her things and was about to leave, looked at the appearance of the boss, and naturally realized that something was wrong, stopped her steps, and pricked up her ears to listen quietly.

can only be said to be worthy of being an art boss, Lu Lidu has already come so close, Xu Jinquan still has no reaction, and the whole person is immersed in his own world.

At the same time, in order to check the completeness of the plot, he was browsing page by page, which was just convenient for Lu Li behind him.

Looking at the composition of the comics, Lu Li still had a look of surprise on his face at first, but the more he saw it, the more distorted the expression on his face became.

What kind of cake is this......

If this is written, the plot can be rotten like this, and it is estimated that the author will be sprayed by readers......

After checking this sentence, Xu Jinquan nodded with satisfaction, and moved the mouse towards the upload place.

Seeing that he was about to press upload, a voice suddenly sounded in Xu Jinquan's ears.

"Stop."

The sudden sound startled Xu Jinquan, and the whole person shook, almost falling down with the chair.

Lu Li's eyes were still quick, and at the last moment, he held down the chair with one hand and Xu Jinquan with the other.

"Boss." After seeing who it was, Xu Jinquan was stunned for a moment, looked at Lu Li, then looked at his computer screen, hesitated for a moment and said, "Boss, you said that I can draw comics in my off-duty time." ”

"I didn't say I wouldn't let you draw." Lu Li said with some sadness: "But you ...... It's really well drawn, but this plot ......"

"What's wrong with the plot?" Although it was questioned, instead of being dissatisfied, the right to enter the permit was somewhat expected...... As a true manga person, he only wants to draw the best work, and if there is really a good suggestion, he will not hesitate to take it.

"First of all, this is the plot." Lu Li, who has read countless books, can't bear to be dusted by a pearl, and unreservedly shares his experience in building a plot when he writes, "Your plot is too flat, and the later refreshment is not enough." ”

After writing too much, Lu Li's ability to control the plot naturally has nothing to say, and he does a pretty good job of controlling the reader's emotions.

"You see, although the male protagonist and the professor are mutual bullbearers here, the male protagonist didn't make any money, and it can even be said to be a small loss." Lu Li pointed to the country and said: "The male protagonist's aunt and cousin are all all by that, and the male protagonist is only the professor's wife, 2 for 1 is obviously a loss, you think this is a small climax, but the reader can't feel the cool point at all." ”

"You can change this paragraph like this." Lu Li thought about it, re-conceived the plot, and said: "You can write that the professor was going to do it, but in the end it was delayed because of some things, and when I went home, I found that my wife had been poured into a puff by the male protagonist." And the male protagonist learned about the professor's plan through this incident, and made corresponding counterattacks, such as launching an attack on the professor's daughter......"

Because I'm used to writing it, these plots can be said to blurt out......

Heo Jung-kwan didn't understand it at first, but then he thought about it a little as a reader, and his eyes gradually lit up.

It seems to be a little better than the original plot......

"And then?" Xu Jinquan said with some excitement, his eyes full of excitement.

"And then it's your own arrangement." Lu Li said casually: "You only need to add that sense of tension and oppression to the comics through the existence of yellow hair, but don't really do anything, otherwise you will lose readers, and then increase the coolness through the male protagonist's anti-bull head and yellow hair, just keep going like this......"

Xu Jinquan was silent for a while, and then the whole person almost threw himself on the computer, and modified it little by little.

Seeing that Xu Jinquan listened, Lu Xuan inexplicably felt a sense of accomplishment, just as he was about to stretch and go to the gym to exercise, he suddenly saw Lin Xuan standing on the other side, looking at him with a complicated expression.

Hey, didn't she say she was going back, why is she still here...... Lu Li was silent for a moment, and suddenly felt a little embarrassed.

Brothers, what should I do if I forgot that there was a girl next to me when I was chatting about astringent content? Waiting online, it's urgent......

"Aren't you leaving?" Lu Li's face was thicker, and after being silent for a while, he immediately recovered, and looked at Lin Xuan to take the initiative.

"Ah...... Ah me. Lin Xuan was a little confused, and she didn't know what to say.

Originally, I was thinking of working a little overtime and leaving directly after completing today's task, but I didn't expect to hear the handsome junior talking to another artist in the studio when I left.

Lin Xuan's personality is a bit gossipy, so he pricked up his ears and listened to a few words quietly, who knew that he heard these things......

Although she is a girl, she is not an ignorant little white flower, she can still understand what Lu Li says.

When it's over, I'm not going to be puffed...... After thinking that he had heard something that he shouldn't have heard, Lin Xuan was a little nervous, and looked at Lu Li timidly like a frightened little white rabbit.

"Alright, I'll send you back." Lu Li, who felt that his evening was not guaranteed, sighed lightly, pushed open the door and said to Lin Xuan.

"Oooh oh...... Good. Lin Xuan nodded and walked out of the door, her face full of expressions of wanting to cry without tears.

It's over, it looks like I'm really going to be stuffed into a puff...... Wait, I don't think I'm at a loss...... Don't lose a hammer, Lin Xuan, what's the matter with you......

Before Lin Xuan could sort out his thoughts, Lu Li had already walked out and strode towards the parking lot.

(End of chapter)