Chapter 250: Bai Tong's draft has passed
It can be seen that Ye Yunhua is also a very thoughtful and energetic person.
Bai Tong was on the writing desk, working hard to conceive the manuscript.
In the past, it was all small short stories, but it could be easily done in one go.
But now, I want to write a medium-length story.
Although it is not like the kind of online articles in later generations, which are filled with water and bragging at every turn to get millions of words, these more than 100,000 or 200,000 words still need to be conceived well.
She had already thought about writing a woman struggle.
Who made the drama "Desire" popular all over the country, and in everyone's consciousness, they have identified Liu Huifang, a woman with a great sense of dedication.
It seems that only such a hard-working and silently paid woman is a good woman in the traditional sense.
It is good for a woman to have traditional virtues, but it is extremely bad to have no self at all.
Bai Tong wanted to write the story of a poor woman who was abandoned by her husband, became the CEO with her own efforts, embarked on the peak of life, and finally married Gao Fushuai and became a winner in life.
Although it sounds very old-fashioned, Bai Tong firmly believes that he can use new stalks to write a different story.
Moreover, she is ready to write in a lighthearted, hilarious penmanship.
For example, someone's comedy movie looks like a nonsensical exaggeration, but after being ridiculous, there is always something worth recalling.
This weekend, Bai Tong completely tossed this matter.
She handed over the first few thousand words to her grandfather, and asked him to help take them to the newspaper office and hand them over to Ye Yunhua, and she went to school with her schoolbag on her back.
This reading is her main task.
Bai Peide took the manuscript of thousands of words written by Bai Tong and found the newspaper where Ye Yunhua was.
The newspaper is still in an old office building, and a group of reporters and editors are busy going in and out.
"Oh, old man Bai, are you here? Please take a seat, please take a seat. Ye Yunhua saw Bai Peide coming, and immediately enthusiastically let the seat make tea.
Bai Peide said politely, sat down on the sofa in the office, and handed over Bai Tong's manuscript, "This is the beginning of the article that Tong Tong rushed out yesterday, let me show it to you, see if there is anything inappropriate, and then make revisions." ”
"So fast?" Ye Yunhua was a little surprised.
He is a person who pursues efficiency in doing things, but he didn't expect that Bai Tong, a girl, was also so efficient.
"Well, let's see, if you have any opinions, I can write them down, and tell her when the time comes, and let her revise them." Bai Peide said sincerely.
In fact, this kind of thing, let the editor-in-chief communicate with the author himself, is the best way, but unfortunately, at this time, the telephone is not very popular, and Bai Tong is also busy going to school, only Bai Peide is the messenger in the middle.
"Okay." Ye Yunhua answered, took the manuscript paper, sat at the desk, and looked at it seriously.
Bai Tong did not have a typewriter, and this manuscript was completely handwritten.
But Ye Yunhua was convinced.
Even if there are so many reporters below, the manuscript written, the handwriting is sloppy, Ye Yunhua, the editor-in-chief, can't bear to look at it directly, but one by one the reporters still have a heartfelt word: "I'm in a hurry, I want to rush the progress, this word, of course, is scribbled." ”
Now, looking at Bai Tong's words, of course, it is particularly pleasing to the eye.
Originally, looking at this manuscript, Ye Yunhua didn't have a lot of confidence, after all, this was driven out by Bai Tong, and now he looked at it in front of Bai Peide, which also meant that he was very eager to be talented, rather than throwing other people's manuscript papers aside.
Thousands of words, after reading the whole article, it won't take long, Ye Yunhua just skimmed it roughly, and he was a little surprised.
It seems that it is an ordinary female inspirational story, but Bai Tong wrote it in a different tone, and there are not too many bitter scenes, and even, between the lines, there is a sense of humor.
Then, Ye Yunhua reversed and looked at it carefully.
If he was more concerned about Bai Tong's handwriting, the story of Bai Tong's structure, Bai Tong's penmanship, etc., then this time, Ye Yunhua really dissolved into Bai Tong's story.
He was really attracted to this story, and when he saw the end, Bai Tong made a good suspense, in today's parlance, called Kavin.
She was stuck in a critical position.
Ye Yunhua immediately stretched out his hand to Bai Peide, "Old man Bai, what about the manuscript in the back?" Give it all to me. ”
He really wanted to see what happened next.
He wanted to see this unusual and novel story.
Bai Peide spread his hands, "No...... Bai Tong rushed and rushed yesterday, so he drove these out. ”
Ye Yunhua supported his forehead, but there was no more, there was no more.
He really wanted to see the results later.
"Bai Tong said, this is a long story, it is impossible to write it in a day or two, only write it and publish it at the same time." Bai Peide conveyed Bai Tong's meaning.
Saying this, Ye Yunhua came back to his senses.
That's right, this is a newspaper, not a magazine or a book, if he really gets this manuscript paper to be serialized, in the way that Bai Tong ends with this kind of cardin, it is estimated that there will be countless people, all looking forward to waiting for the next chapter of the story to come out.
"Okay, write it like this, here, see if you want to change it." Ye Yunhua pointed to the manuscript paper and put forward the requirements according to the eyes of his editor-in-chief.
"Okay, you say, I'll take a note, and when Bai Tong comes back next week, I'll tell her about your revisions." Bai Peide took out paper and pen from his bag, and carefully prepared to memorize the advice given by Ye Yunhua.
Ye Yunhua was stunned for a moment.
Only then did he understand that Bai Tong was still a reading baby, and people wanted to read.
Wait for her to come back next week, and then revise it, no matter what, how much time has been delayed.
What's more, Bai Tong's questions are not a big problem, and Ye Yunhua just asked this out of duty and habits.
"Say it." Bai Peide held a pen and paper, so magnificent, as if waiting for the secretary to report.
Ye Yunhua was convinced.
He took the manuscript paper and said to Bai Peide, "No need, I accepted this manuscript paper, I will let the people below be responsible for correcting the typesetting now, you go back and tell her that this manuscript at the beginning has been drafted, let her follow, maintain this level, and continue to write." This week, let her stay up late, work overtime, and it is best to get all the manuscripts out. ”
"Nope." Bai Peide's righteous refusal "This writing is just another hobby of Bai Tong, and her main business is reading." How can you ignore your studies and stay up all night to finish these manuscripts, isn't this a reversal of priorities? ”
Ye Yunhua touched his head, this is also what he didn't think about, he regarded Bai Tong as a newspaper employee like him, and it was normal for them to work overtime and catch up with the manuscript all night, and Bai Tong was obviously impossible to come to catch up with the manuscript all night.