There was a reader's comment some time ago:

"I doubt that the author has an outline?"

At the time, I didn't feel good about reading this comment, because I really didn't have an outline. (Refers to the fourth volume of the Honkai III pre-civilization stage)

Because it was the first time I wrote it, I didn't keep any of the manuscripts, all of them were written by pushing.

There is something about the fourth volume of Honkai Impact III, and I think it's really out of the picture, so I decided to ...... in order to live up to the current readers.

Rewrite the plot about the second world, the pre-Honkai civilization, (from chapter 75 to the latest chapter).

There is no need to resubscribe, just refresh it.

I'll pick a few of my own questions first.

1. Combat power collapses

On the one hand, Yao Luo, as a memory envoy, is actually quite strong, and it stands to reason that he can brush everyone except for the individual lawgivers (such as restraint and erosion) and the final lawgiver in the meta-plot.

Personally, I'm actually more concerned about logic.,If the protagonist has this ability (referring to the confrontation with Honkai) but doesn't do these things,I feel that there is a problem with the character design.,So now in the plot, Yaoluo has been running around.,Almost all the tasks of the opponent lawyer.,So that other people basically have no room to appear.,Let the plot basically become some kind of plot similar to Shuangwen.,My personal senses are not very good.,Through data and subscriptions.,And the reduction of comments.,It can be seen that this part of the plot is unsuccessful.。 (The protagonist beat all the lawyers, why do you need a pre-civilization?) ）

2. Personality problems

Although I am also a level 85 captain in Honkai Impact 3, the plot is all over, but I still don't have a deep understanding of the Elysian Land of the Past (I haven't unlocked all the entries and articles), if the plot continues to develop like this, according to the current logic, the thirteen heroes will chase the fire, and this situation (referring to the fact that all the fusion warriors are basically wiped out) is not possible at all.

Of course, I like the plot of 13 Heroes very much, so I will write this aspect, because the Star Dome Railway has too few plots now, and I have to intersperse a few mihoyo other worlds to buffer, but if it continues like this, not to mention the readers, I can't watch it myself, and the daily updates are very tormenting.

For a charismatic character like 13 Yingji, I still need to polish it. (I feel that I am writing too white now, which is a bit insulting to a certain extent.) ）

3. Update the problem

Originally, as a new writer, and it was the first time I put it on the shelves, I actually wanted to be full attendance (1500 yuan!). After all, in this current market, who doesn't like to make a little money? (The author has no income now, one college student) But I still decided to stop for the time being, and I will rewrite the content of the fourth volume in the next seven days or so, and think about the outline, about 30 chapters.

4. Style issues

In the fourth volume of the remastered version, I still plan to maintain the previous style, retain the original plot's human resistance style under the apocalypse, and show the brilliance of human nature.

Because I think that the Paradise of the Past Past, which happened in the past, is a kind of regrettable beauty, and we are able to witness the bravery, struggle, love and beauty of the human race of the past under the most severe circumstances.

For example, Elysia, I don't think there will be anyone who doesn't like her (Aimen!). ）

5. Aspects of change.

The combat effectiveness of the protagonist must be cut, but it is justified and reasonably weakened, and it will not abuse the master.

There are certain modifications to be made to the ability of the protagonist "door",(Some readers reported that this ability is too buggy) only retain the function of traversing.,It's a patch.。

There is also a book including the previous chapters, any suggestions for revision, any dissatisfaction, and slots, you can put forward, I will accept it with humility.

Please write in this paragraph: Suggested amendments.

In the end, the promise that the author can make is that he will not be a eunuch.

After all, it's the first book, and no matter how badly written, there must be an ending after all.

The next world should be a return to the Overworld.

Xianzhou Alliance.

Finally, I wish everyone who sees this place that you can have a better life than you can have.

Love you little authors.