Excuse me for adjustment.,By the way, it's important to say something about the plot.,Please take a look.
Take a day off and sort out the plot.
In addition, what is currently written in this volume actually takes place simultaneously in the timeline. For example, the Battle of Cowes and the events of Eastfan probably happened at the same time.
Just because some of the characters aren't there right now doesn't mean I've forgotten about them, it's just because I haven't written about them yet...... It's a very deadly thing.
Before I wrote about the Great Rebellion, I actually considered whether or not to focus on Koz and Carlil from the perspective of this story, but it was boring to write like this.
In my personal mind, the Great Rebellion is a grand story of many forces fighting together. Personally, I may not be able to write that flavor, but I wanted it to fit as closely as possible, and I wanted to make every change of character seem at least plausible and reasonable.
It's not that I have to play grimdark or switch back and forth to write war scenes in line with the original Black Library, but I just want to make the story and characters as 'live' as possible, so I have to temporarily shift the perspective away from Carlil and Coz in this volume.
...... Of course, in this volume, I write that whoever is going to be unlucky, that's for sure.
As for the cool point, rest assured, it is indispensable. The Battle of Terra would be the center of the volume, and that's what I had in mind from the beginning.
Back to the point, let the protagonist go offline, this is quite an anti-online writing technique.
Because online texts pay attention to 'sense of expectation', to do this, it is especially necessary to put the perspective on the protagonist. Having the protagonist offline for a long time like me is actually quite dead in the online article, so I'm grateful to all of you who have been able to see it all the time.
Thank you very much (bow)
But some people may ask, why do you have to write this way when you know this?
All I can say is that no one is going to have trouble with money.
If I had written a little more lightly, the book would have consistently done well. Of course I need money, but I can't keep it up when I write. I'm not a Warhammer Brahmin, and I don't think Hammer has to be serious, but I personally write things that are more serious.
So I'm writing and writing, and it's going to be like this. It's also a kind of shackle, there is no way.
Anyway, that's it. In addition, thanks to the reader of this book, Mr. Mashiro, it is really amazing to make the military book setting of the Night Blade Regiment by himself......
The specific post is in the book friend circle, if you haven't read it yet, please read it quickly. I'll be keeping around 10,000 words updated every day for the next week to celebrate this.
What? Why, you ask? Because I'm going to copy the setting (music)