"Oh, good."

Xu Changqing nodded and took out a laptop from a backpack. This is a cheap computer that he bought himself and I don't know how many hands he has poured, it looks thick and old, very old, and it hums and chirps when it is turned on, and makes a painful moan. But fortunately, it still works. Xu Changqing has no other needs, this computer can code words is enough.

He usually takes advantage of the fact that there are no customers in the Baicao Garden, sits behind the counter and knocks on something, hoping to make a profit by submitting articles again. Now under the maple tree, he has actually sent more than one manuscript. Although the income is not much, it is still enough when combined with the income of the bookstore.

It was only from the editor's painstaking learning that the maple tree was going to be revised, and the direction of the revision, and he was keenly aware that his text was not suitable for the new website, so he had the idea of giving up writing and looking for a new job.

- It's not that he didn't want to try it in other magazines, and he also voted for ancient and modern legends, but all of them were lost in the sea. In this case, the idea of giving up writing became more and more determined.

But I didn't expect that in this case, Ku Bitter would suddenly make such a suggestion to him. He felt as if a big hand was fishing himself out of the quagmire.

"Buzz Buzz ......"

The old laptop groaned for a long time before the boot screen was displayed. I was impatient to wait, and asked a little incredulously, "Do you usually write this?" ”

Xu Changqing nodded and said, "Yes." ”

I couldn't help but sigh: "Then you are really amazing." "If this was for her, she would have smashed the laptop.

The computer is completely booted up, the desktop is displayed, the USB flash drive is inserted, the USB flash drive is read, the USB flash drive is opened, and the files are opened, all of which take a lot of time. I regretted it a little, if I knew that this was the case, she should have brought a computer.

——There was a computer in the store behind the counter, but Xu Changqing didn't mean to use it, and he didn't ask for advice to use the computer.

The open file was blank, the icon on the taskbar was spinning in circles, Xu Changqing looked at the file name of "Breaking the Sky", and wondered what kind of story this would be.

He guessed in his heart that Mr. Lu Anzhi was going to write a plot with a mythological theme? The title of the book reminded him of The Legend of Wukong. The tragedy of rebellion against heaven written with the help of the background of "Journey to the West" is very suitable for this name.

Is it that Mr. Lu still has a follow-up to this, but he doesn't have time to write it, so it's up to himself? If it were you, would you be able to write the sequel to "The Legend of Wukong"?

His style of writing is too martial arts, and it is not suitable for "The Legend of Wukong". There are few people in this world who have the ability of Lu Anzhi, who can switch the writing style at will according to different themes and different story themes, and no matter what kind of writing style, they can use it so skillfully.

It's not easy to write this story well......

Xu Changqing thought about it, hesitated, and then gritted his teeth and made up his mind to give it a try. Life didn't leave him much to retreat, and he had to seize every opportunity to give it a try. Otherwise, how could a person who still has a little residual dream of words bow his head and write someone else's story?

The document open on the computer screen seems to refresh itself, flickering and jumping. Finally, after a flicker, the neat black text on the blank page jumped out.

Xu Changqing first saw the title of the book "Breaking the Sky", and there is also a synopsis:

This is a world that belongs to the Dou Qi, there is no fancy magic, there is no so-called internal force, and there is just the Dou Qi that has multiplied to the peak! Do you want to know what kind of situation the fighting spirit of another time and space is like after it develops to its peak? Hierarchy: Fighter, Fighter, Great Fighter, Fightling, Fighter, Fighter.

Vindictive?

Xu Changqing frowned.

What is the difference between it and the internal force in the traditional martial arts routine?

"How do you feel after reading this profile?"

Ku asked suddenly.

Xu Changqing knew that the editor was working hard, which was to guide him and teach him. He thought for a moment and said, "This hierarchy ...... I've never seen a martial arts book that distinguishes the realm of power so clearly, from fighter to fighting emperor, it feels like a title obtained after upgrading in the game. If you can make this clear and write it according to this level, the plot will be very clear, and the strength of the characters will have a very clear contrast, and the character promotion will make people feel more comfortable. Is that so? ”

He nodded bitterly and said, "Yes, I feel that Mr. Lu also got inspiration from the game, he may have been playing games recently, and it is really amazing to be able to bring the ideas of the game into it." But I haven't had time to ask him yet, so I'll ask him when I get back. ”

She felt that Xu Changqing could understand this, and the problem was not big. She read all the outlines that Lu Anzhi gave her, and thought about it, and she had the same idea as Xu Changqing. If Xu Changqing can straighten out his thinking and always follow the theme of this fighter to the Doudi upgrade when writing articles, he should be able to write well.

Xu Changqing said again: "It's just why it's called vindictiveness, and what is the difference between it and internal force, I don't understand it yet." We'll have to look again. ”

Ku opened his mouth and did not speak. In fact, she didn't understand this very well. The vindictiveness shown in the feeling is not much different from the internal force. According to the outline of this book, the fighting spirit in the back should be very strong, but now there is no kind of martial arts bells and whistles on the market, what jumps several feet high, and punches people several feet away. Why make a distinction?

She thought to herself that she would have to ask Boss B when she went back.

He said bitterly: "You read the outline first, and then we will discuss it after reading it." By the way, Mr. Lu's request is that you first write out the plot of chapters 1 to 9, and show it to him after you finish writing, and after he passes, he will give you a price, between 50 and 200 per 1,000 words. If you're okay, sign the contract and keep writing. ”

"Fifty words?"

Xu Changqing frowned slightly, a little entangled. He has found a lot of jobs, and he used to have a good business, and he knows the doorway, the range of salaries, and the last one he gives is usually the lowest.

And the bottom line of the previous serialization in the magazine under the maple tree was 200 words per thousand. Now to write down to 50 words per 1,000, he was a little hesitant for a while. At this price, it seems to be difficult to maintain a living.

After looking at Xu Changqing's appearance, he immediately understood Xu Changqing's entanglement, and said immediately: "This thousand-word fifty is not the same as the magazine. This is to keep the daily serialization, how much you write every day, how much you earn, we editors will not chase after it every day, everything depends on the data to speak. It's different in magazines, where we have to review the manuscripts from beginning to end, and we have to make various revisions. Think about your previous draft, how many times you changed it, and how many words did you send in a month? ”

When Xu Changqing heard what he said, he understood and nodded. His novellas published under the maple tree are all at a base price of 200 words per 1,000 words, but it does take a lot of time to revise and revise each article, and the other one is at most 20,000 words, and he published two articles in two months, adding up to more than 30,000 articles, and earning more than 7,000 in two months.

And if you write this "Breaking the Sky", if you can write a little more every day and insist on changing every day, then in a month, maybe you can exceed the income of writing for two months.

"Does Mr. Lu have any requirements for the number of words that can be updated every day?"

Xu Changqing asked again.

Kuang said: "There is no requirement. Teacher Lu said, you can write as much as you want, upload as much as you want. If you want to have grades, you can actually write more every day. The serialization mode of the new website is destined to be more serialized and can attract more readers. A large amount of tube satiety is effective in this website. If you get good grades, you can earn a share. Divided into three ...... But I'm afraid it's not easy, we are under the maple tree with the teacher of the road to divide higher than the ordinary, it is also three seven, seventy percent of this score and then with you three seven points, you take seventy percent of thirty percent, to be able to exceed your guarantee, even if the results are very good. ”

Xu Changqing nodded and said, "Thank you, editor." ”

He didn't dare to think about it, and he was already very satisfied if he could win the guarantee.

He said bitterly: "Let's read the outline first." ”

Xu Changqing nodded again and buried his head in looking at the outline. During this period, a customer came in to buy books, and Xu Changqing had to pause.

He didn't go to entertain the customer, Wang Ping told him that the customers who came to the bookstore didn't need to be entertained, and if they needed to find a specific book, they would come and ask for it themselves when they couldn't find it. Book buyers usually don't like to be followed by people babbling about sales.

But even so, he didn't lower his head to look at the outline and be distracted at such a time. He always remembered that his main job now was a clerk in a bookstore.

And he waited on the side with a lot of interest, and did not interfere with Xu Changqing, nor did he urge Xu Changqing to hurry up and read the outline.

waited until the customer slowly picked out a few books, and after paying the bill and leaving, Xu Changqing continued to look down at the book, and apologized to the bitter by the way: "I'm sorry for keeping you waiting." ”

He waved his hand and said, "It's okay, you rub it a little, I happen to be lazy for a while." You're done here, and I'm going to have to go back to work. ”

Xu Changqing couldn't help but smile. He continued to bury his head in reading the outline, and after reading it, he was confused.

After seeing the introduction, he understood that this story should have nothing to do with "The Legend of Wukong", and now that he has read the specific content, he is completely convinced.

"Any thoughts?"

Bitter was asking him again.

Xu Changqing said: "The characters in this don't seem to have grown, and the theme of the story is very simple, but I feel ...... It would be cool to write it. Teacher Lu...... He's really amazing.,Maybe the new website is suitable for this.,That's serialized every day.,Readers read every day.,It's so easy and simple and clear.,It's the best.。 ”

After listening to this, he smiled and said, "If you can see so clearly, then I am relieved." Hurry up and write out the first nine chapters and try it. Teacher Lu is waiting to see. ”

"Good!"

Xu Changqing nodded and agreed.

bitterly said again: "You remember, don't forget to write the part of divorce." This '30 years in Hedong and 30 years in Hexi, don't bully the poor youth', suddenly pulled up the sense of expectation. If you can write this part well, it's definitely fine. There is also the medicine old man in the back, which is also the top priority, and the divorce part is complementary. ”

"Hmm."

Xu Changqing was thinking.

Ku Ku was still a little uneasy, and instructed again: "Look at Mr. Lu's arrangement in this plot sequence, he wrote the protagonist's ring in advance, in fact, he is already pointing out the special features of the protagonist, plus the previous genius fall bridge, paving the way together, in the divorce here, so that the reader can guess that the protagonist has the confidence to turn the tables and complete the three-year period, and finally as soon as the divorce plot ends, the medicine in the ring is written in it, and this foreshadowing is led out, and the reader's expectations are directly raised." It's all very clever rhythmic choreography that you can't afford to ignore. ”

Xu Changqing nodded and said, "I know." Teacher Kuku, you taught me so much in the first two manuscripts, and I have grown now, and I can almost see it. You've told me so much now, if I hadn't paid attention myself, I wouldn't have been able to take the job. ”

Said bitterly: "Then come on, write it and send it to me as soon as possible." I'll go first. ”

Xu Changqing sent the hard work to the door, and then returned to the back of the counter, thought for a long time, opened the new folder, and prepared to start work.

As a result, just as he was about to start, a bitter voice sounded at the door again: "I'll give you a kind reminder, it's best for you not to play by yourself in this, just write according to Mr. Lu's outline." ”

Xu Changqing said: "I know, Mr. Kuku. Mr. Lu's syllabus is already very mature, and the rhythm is also very stable. If I play it myself, I won't be able to. ”

"If you understand, I'm leaving."

Said bitterly, and left again.

Xu Changqing took a deep breath and couldn't help muttering: "Teacher Lu is really amazing......"

He never thought he could write like that. is so clear and straightforward, all other trivial matters are abandoned, everything is in the service of the improvement of the character's strength, and even the storyline is simply to reflect the improvement of the character's strength.

This should be the best fit for a new website. I must write this book well, study hard in this one, master such skills, and maybe I will be able to gain a foothold on the new website in the future!

With that in mind, he typed on the keyboard and wrote the first line.

This first line of words has been made clear by Mr. Lu in the outline, and he feels that he only needs to copy it, and there is no need for a synopsis at all:

"The power of the fight, three stages."

(End of chapter)