Chapter 412: Zhai Xiao's dissatisfaction with the plot of "Dragon Ball".
Tang Liping was suddenly hugged by Xu Ranran, and when she heard Xu Ranran call "Mom", she was stunned.
Not only her, but Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin were also stunned. But Xian Xian didn't look a little surprised, she didn't know that this kind of thing needed to be surprised.
The little guy turned into a little cheer at this moment, clapping his two little hands together and clapping "popping".
Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin both glanced at Xian Xian, then looked at each other, and immediately understood what the other party meant. Neither husband nor wife stopped Slim, making the little guy the only atmosphere group at this time.
Anyway, it's just a little guy, even if this scene can't be held, it won't be embarrassing.
At this time, Lu Anzhi suddenly felt that the statement "she is still just a child" is very useful.
Tang Liping squatted down, looked at Xu Ranran's little face, and said with some distress: "What's the matter?" Why do you seem to have cried? ”
Before Xu Ranran could say anything, Xian Xian hurriedly replied, "Sister Ranran misses her mother!" ”
Lu Anzhi: "......"
Zhang Suxin: "......"
Xu Changqing: "......"
Xu Ranran was embarrassed by what Xian Xian said, and she was too shy to look at Tang Liping.
Tang Liping also seemed a little embarrassed, glanced at Xu Changqing, and did not speak.
And Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi felt that the toes in his shoes were already picking the floor.
Lu Anzhi hugged Xian Xian and said, "It's not too early, we should go back too." You talk slowly. ”
Xu Changqing and Tang Liping were busy leaving Lu An's family of three to eat, and let Lu An's family of three finish dinner before leaving. At this time, the two of them had a tacit understanding and were really like two people. Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin pushed back and left with Xian Xian.
The little guy sat in the car and commented: "Sister Ran Ran's first mother is not good, and the second mother is good." ”
Zhang Suxin smiled speechlessly, stretched out her finger and tapped lightly on the slender little head, and said, "You're smart!" Also the first mother, the second mother! You can tell. Which mother is better? ”
Xian Xian smiled "hehe" and said, "Xian Xian only has one mother, and Xian Xian's mother is fine!" ”
Zhang Suxin rubbed her slender face dotingly, and said, "Little man! ”
The later plot development of Xu Changqing's family was told to them by Wang Ping.
Tang Liping is also married, has a son, and is now in elementary school. His husband died of a heart attack when he used to work part-time, so he is now single.
Because of Xu Ranran's words, Xu Changqing and Tang Liping broke through the relationship paper, and they both made clear their ideas for further development.
Later, Xu Changqing went to see Tang Liping's son a few times, and captured Tang Liping's son with sugar-coated cannonballs, and what happened after that was a logical thing.
Both of them are married for the second time, and they didn't plan to make a big deal, so they went to the Civil Affairs Bureau to get a certificate, and then invited relatives and friends from both sides to have a meal together, and this matter was done.
As for Lu An's family of three, Xu Changqing and Tang Liping were invited to another banquet. Wang Ping's family was naturally invited.
Lu Anzhi saw Wang Ping's grandson Yan Junjie for the first time, and always felt that Yan Junjie looked at him with some resentment.
He asked Yan Shun'an what was going on, Yan Shun'an thought for a while before he reacted and said to Lu Anzhi: "Boss, I have shown my children the "Doraemon Short Fairy Tale Collection" and "The Little Prince" you wrote. There is a story called "Snow Child" in "Doraemon's Short Fairy Tale Collection", and my child is a little impressed by that story. He knew that "Snow Child" was written by you, the boss. ”
“……”
Lu Anzhi was speechless for a while, "How long did I come out of that collection of short fairy tales?" ”
Yan Shunan thought for a while and said, "It's been a long time." You have published so many books and songs...... "Doraemon's Short Fairy Tales" and "Snow Child", it really seems that they came out a long time ago. Time flies so fast......"
Lu Anzhi nodded, sighed, and said, "Your son really holds a grudge......
Yan Shun'an: "......"
But these are all trivial things, Yan Junjie soon stopped holding grudges and played with Tang Liping's son.
- Now it should be the son of Xu Changqing and Tang Liping.
It's also strange to say, Tang Liping's ex-husband also happens to be surnamed Xu, and now Xu Changqing and Tang Liping have become a family, Xu Changqing and Tang Liping's son have the same surname, and when others hear it, they look like their biological father and son.
Xu Ranran and Xian Xian played behind the buttocks of the two older children, and the four children soon played together. The adults ate and drank, and the attention quickly fell on the children.
Seeing the children having fun, the adults couldn't help but laugh.
The place where they each know each other is in Lu Anzhi's bookstore. The biggest correlation between each other is also today's Sanwei Bookstore. Therefore, after eating, everyone went to the Sanwei Study.
The four children lingered in the children's book area, and when Lu Anzhi saw this, he gave each of the four children a book. Xu Ranran and Xian Xian got two of the latest picture books. And the sons of Yan Junjie and Tang Liping got the latest comic books.
When Lu Anzhi delivered the books, he joked with others: "I actually want to give them exercise books or composition books, but unfortunately I only sell idle books here, not those teaching aids." ”
Yan Junjie and Tang Liping's sons heard Lu Anzhi's words, and their faces turned white. Fortunately, there was still the second half of what Lu Anzhi said, which made them breathe a sigh of relief.
Then Wang Ping suddenly said: "I'll just say, boss, I still make money by teaching auxiliary books." When I was in Jinju, I mainly sold books as supplementary books. Let's not talk about the shop in Baicaotang, there are no schools nearby, but there are some here in the Sanwei Book House. It's a little far from here, but it's okay, not too far. Let's buy some teaching aids to sell, which can increase a lot of income, and can also be used by children, saving them from buying outside. ”
Yan Junjie and Tang Liping's son's face turned white again.
Fortunately, Lu Anzhi shook his head again and said, "Forget it." Sister Wang, you also know that my original intention in opening a bookstore was not to sell supplementary books. There are other bookstores to sell teaching aids, so we won't steal this business from others. ”
Yan Junjie and Tang Liping's sons were relieved again, but Wang Ping sighed a little incomprehensibly and said, "How can there be such a store open!" ”
After eating a meal, they sat down in the Sanwei Study House, and the combination of Xu Changqing and Tang Liping's two families was officially known.
Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin took Xian Xian back home, and Wang Ping's family also left. Tang Liping took her son to live on the second floor of the bookstore, which is more convenient for Xu Changqing to see the store.
And Tang Liping also knew about Xu Changqing's income and was taken aback. She never expected that Xu Changqing stayed in the bookstore, looking at the store every day, typing and writing on the keyboard, and there was so much income in a month.
That's something she can't even think of.
However, when Xu Changqing wanted to pay for her to open a shop and ask her not to get up early every day to make that early shop, she refused. Although she married Xu Changqing, she still didn't want to spend Xu Changqing's money so easily.
She sold her old house and rented a shop next to the Three Flavors Book House. With support, she dared to do this only after she had no worries.
The family's life was thus put on a new track.
Lu Anzhi and Zhang Suxin occasionally bring Xianxian here to let Xianxian play with Xu Ranran. But most of the time, Lu Anzhi can't take care of it.
Time passed day by day, February passed, March passed, and the date of Zhang Suxin's birth was getting closer and closer. Lu Anzhi was afraid that after Zhang Suxin gave birth, he would be busy taking care of his wife and children, and he couldn't take care of other things, so he was busy saving manuscripts every day during this time.
He didn't open any new books, but just finished writing the third part of "The Three-Body Problem", "Death and Eternal".
In addition to "Three-Body Three: Death and Eternal Life", it is the outline of "Breaking the Sky". As for the script of "Dragon Ball", there is no need to write it for the time being. Anyway, the serialization of comics is a very long time, and he has given Zhai Xiao enough scripts so far, and the content has almost reached the point where he has completely finished playing the Piccolo Demon King, which is enough for Zhai Xiao to serialize for a long time.
However, Zhai Xiao was a little dissatisfied with the content of the last part of the script of "Dragon Ball".
In that part of the script, it was the last martial arts meeting that Sun Wukong participated in before the Saiyans invaded the earth. At that time, Sun Wukong had grown up and changed his image, and then he met Qiqi to come to him, and came to a scene of "Xia Yuhe on the shore of Daming Lake", and then married Sun Wukong.
Zhai Xiao's dissatisfaction lies here. She has seen all the previous scenes, and the scenes about Kiki have already been drawn.
This character doesn't take up much space in the overall story of Dragon Ball in the early stage, and the image is not as vivid as Bulmalai. Seeing the picture of Sun Wukong's image changing many years later, Zhai Xiao was already making up the drama of Sun Wukong and Bulma in his mind, but he didn't expect a Qiqi to suddenly pop up and insert a bar.
This was really unexpected.
So after Zhai Xiao saw this part of the script, he asked Lu Anzhi in Qiuqiu: Teacher Lu, don't you think that the plot is a bit inexplicable when drawn like this?
Lu Anzhi: What's so inexplicable?
Zhai Xiao: Anyway, if I were a reader, I would have seen Bulma's Monkey King, who had changed a lot after seeing him for the first time, and I was already expecting something to happen to these two characters who spent their childhood together. As a result, you suddenly made a character that I had almost forgotten about, and asked her to marry Sun Wukong. I can't take it.
Lu Anzhi: No way, that's how the plot is arranged.
Zhai Xiao: But it's unreasonable.
Lu Anzhi: Why is it unreasonable?
Zhai Xiao: It's unreasonable anyway. It was so sudden that I didn't understand. Teacher Lu, why don't you let Sun Wukong and Bulma get married? I felt like it was green.
Lu Anzhi: ......
Lu Anzhi: So you're replacing Bulma?
Zhai Xiao: Occasionally, I will substitute for Bulma.
Lu Anzhi: ......
Zhai Xiao: So why did you arrange Teacher Lu like this? Can you give me a reason?
Lu Anzhi: Mainly in the later plot, there are many characters who are now arranged. There will be a Saiyan in the back - that is, the character of an alien, who will marry Bulma and give birth to a child named Trunks, Son Gohan and Kiki's offspring, and there will be a lot of plot space in the future.
He posted this paragraph first, and was about to post it again: If you change it casually, you won't be able to expand it later. Then before the words came out, Zhai Xiao sent Qiuqiu a message to ask him: Then why don't you let Sun Wukong marry Bulma, and let the new character you said marry Qiqi when the time comes.
Zhai Xiao: You can make the children of Monkey King and Bulma call Son Gohan, and let Kiki and the children of the new characters be called Trunks.
Lu Anzhi: ......
Lu Anzhi: But there is a plot later, it is Sun Wukong and Bulma who went to Namek - that is, the planet of the Piccolo race, and after having an encounter there, the new character has a connection with Bulma, and after returning to Earth, he temporarily lives in Bulma's house and has children, so the plot is logical.
Zhai Xiao: Then let the new characters live in the Flaming Mountain temporarily.
Lu Anzhi: ......
How do you think about it, according to Zhai Xiao's change, it really makes people feel a little excited?!
In fact, when he saw the reunion between Bulma and Sun Wukong, the world's first martial arts club, he thought about what kind of relationship would develop between Bulma and Sun Wukong.
And later short videos became popular, and he was also influenced by short video comments, and felt that the relationship between Kakarot and Kiki was really almost meaningful, and Kiki became a yellow-faced woman who annoyed Kakarot.
- Although from another point of view, he also knows that all of Kiki's attitudes and behaviors are reasonable in the face of a husband who is bent on fighting and doesn't care about the family, but he just can't change his perception of Kiki.
He thought about it for a while and said: Anyway, you're just dissatisfied with this plot, aren't you?
Zhai Xiao: Yes. And I feel like it's not just me who is dissatisfied, but other readers as well. Unless Mr. Lu, you modify the previous story and increase the length of Kiki a lot, so that Kiki's plot volume can be comparable to that of Bulma and Monkey King.
Lu Anzhi: I can't do this anymore.
According to Zhai Xiao, "Dragon Ball" is afraid to change from a bloody battle to a love story.
He thought about it seriously for a while, and said in Qiuqiu: Then do you think this will work? I'll write according to my original script first, and you keep drawing. Anyway, the back is still long, and the plot will have to be drawn for a long time until the marriage.
Lu Anzhi: I'm here, I'll write a script according to the original plot and write it to you when Trunks appears. Then you modify it according to my plot. If you can do it without affecting the direction of the plot, and change the emotional relationship and character positioning of the characters, I will promise you to follow your ideas.
Zhai Xiao was pleasantly surprised, and said to Qiuqiu: Okay! Thank you, Mr. Lu, for trusting me so much! I'm going to definitely change this plot for the better!
Lu Anzhi: No thanks.
Actually, I'm looking forward to it, what will the revised Dragon Ball look like?
(End of chapter)