After Lu Anzhi went home, it didn't take long for Xu Changqing to send the manuscript.

Lu Anzhi read Xu Changqing's manuscript and knew why Xu Changqing asked him for advice.

Xu Changqing's manuscript has improved a lot compared to before, at least in terms of upgrading and rhythm, there has been obvious progress, step by step upgrade, fighting, steady and steady, it can still be watched.

This is the growth brought to him by writing "Breaking the Sky" for so long.

The biggest advantage of "Breaking the Sky" is the rhythm.

But the problem is that Xu Changqing still has not broken away from the barrier of writing martial arts before, even if it is an imitation of "Dou Po", what is written is still a martial arts flavor, compared to other online articles that are slowly developing on the Xinfeng Chinese Internet today, the meaning is still much worse.

In this manuscript, Xu Changqing changed the old man he carried with him to the soul of an ancient beast, and then on the upgrade route, just like the strange fire of "Dou Po", he brought the ability of the beast to the protagonist. But the beginning of the story is still a very traditional revenge, but on top of this, the protagonist is added to the routine of being looked down upon, so that the protagonist's rise can shock others.

But that's all, in the final analysis, it's just a combination of "Dou Po" and various martial arts.

So Lu Anzhi chatted with Xu Changqing in Qiuqiu: I think you still haven't opened your mind and let go of your imagination.

Xu Changqing agrees with this sentence: Yes, Mr. Lu. In addition to "Dou Po", I have also specifically referred to other websites in the website. Nowadays, there are a lot of whimsical writings on the website, citing ancient mythology, Greek mythology, Norse mythology, etc. But by the time I wrote it myself, I couldn't learn anything.

Lu Anzhi: They haven't let go of their thinking yet, they just quote it, or use the worldview of those myths to unfold the story. That's another way of writing, and I don't think you're trying to write it.

In fact, now Xinfeng Chinese online is also quite whimsical, all kinds of types, even urban outfit forced text has appeared. Lu Anzhi even saw the shadow of "The Best Child" on a list of works. But there is a problem, that is, these online texts from the obscurant period have not yet formed their own systems, so unless they are directly "borrowed", it is difficult to imitate them in a skin-like manner.

Xu Changqing saw Lu Anzhi say this, and sure enough, he replied: Well.

Lu Anzhi: So you can think freely. There are a lot of interesting things in this world, and I can give you a few examples for your reference. Would you like to take a look?

In the Sanwei Bookstore store, Xu Changqing was stunned when he saw this sentence from Lu Anzhi. Is Mr. Lu going to show himself all kinds of magnificent imagination? This made him a little surprised, and he couldn't help but sit upright, and posted on Qiuqiu: Okay, thank you, Mr. Lu.

Then after a while, he saw a micro-chat from Lu Anzhi: You love to write oriental stories, and the writing is destined to be more suitable for oriental themes, and i won't give you examples of western fantasy stories. In the case of the Oriental story system, there are many themes that can be explored.

Lu Anzhi: For example, the contention of a hundred schools of thought during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period can be used to set up a system. Confucianism, Taoism, Taoism, Mohist techniques, etc., can be written in detail. So many poems and articles in ancient times, can they all be counted in the Confucian supernatural powers? The Great Confucian came out of the chapter, and came with the sentence "Black clouds overwhelm the city and want to destroy it", which is the change of the sky and the like. Then the cultivation realm can also be extracted from the development of Confucianism, such as scholars, saints, and the most holy. If you think about the rest, I don't need to say more.

"Hiss......"

Xu Changqing gasped.

A small idea from above Lu An gave him a big shock. Now, with the rise of Xinfeng Chinese Network, online literature has just begun to develop, and although all kinds of whimsical ideas have emerged, they have not yet matured. At least Lu Anzhi's line of thought, he has never seen it.

Lu Anzhi: Another example is the cultivation realm, you still have a martial arts flavor at this glance, or you can see it at a glance, it is borrowed from "Dou Po". In fact, this can also jump out and engage in some systems. For example, there is a saying of yang god in Taoist practice terminology, can you refine it and make a system for cultivating yang god?

Lu Anzhi: There is also the Taoist "Participation in the Deed" of Nedan said, which can also be used. According to this, a set of cultivation realms, what kind of Qi refining period, foundation building period, Jindan period, Yuan infant stage and the like, isn't it also good?

Lu Anzhi: Anyway, your mind is still not open. The same goes for the battle scenes. You can let go of your imagination, like a myth, you can split mountains and seas with one move, and you can write that you can smash a planet with one punch later. If you have the strength, you can also make some nonsense such as dictating the eternal, suppressing all enemies in the world, holding the sun, moon, and picking stars, and time without me.

Xu Changqing looked at this sentence from Lu Anzhi, his eyes widened, and he was speechless in shock.

At this time, Tang Liping's shop next to him was almost busy, so Tang Liping took the time to come over to see the child. As soon as I entered the door, I saw Xu Changqing sitting behind the counter in a daze, and couldn't help asking, "What's wrong with you?" ”

Xu Changqing shook his head and said, "Not much." Mr. Lu is instructing me to write. I was just blown away by him. He is so powerful, he has so many whimsical ideas, imagination, and so many people on the website combined, I am afraid that he can't compare to him. ”

Tang Liping said indifferently: "That's for sure, you don't want to think about who he is." ”

Xu Changqing nodded and said, "Yes." After all, it is the person who can write so many classics, from "The Legend of Wukong" to "Dragon Family", and then to "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Three-Body Problem", "Harry Potter" and "The Little Prince". His ideas kept coming up one after another. Like the subject matter of online articles, he is afraid that he can come up with hundreds or thousands of ideas with his brain, but he just disdains to write them. ”

However, Tang Liping felt that this sentence was a bit exaggerated: "This is not enough, right?" Or hundreds, thousands? How can it be so exaggerated? ”

Xu Changqing felt that what he said was also a bit exaggerated. I don't know if it was influenced by Mr. Lu's guidance just now, if so, maybe it's a good thing?

At this moment, he saw a message from Lu Anzhi again: If you want, I can provide you with a story background setting, you can write a story according to this setting, and your mind is open to thinking and thinking boldly.

Xu Changqing was excited, and hurriedly agreed: Okay, thank you, Mr. Lu.

He is not averse to this. He has already written "Breaking the Sky". Originally, he wanted to wait until he finished writing "Breaking the Sky", he would no longer rely on Mr. Lu, and rely on what he learned from "Breaking the Sky" to write a new story, but now after accepting Lu Anzhi's guidance, he suddenly found that he was still far from it, and he still needed to learn.

Mr. Lu provides the background and fills in the story by himself, which may also be a new tempering.

After Xu Changqing finished sending this message, he quickly received a new message from Lu Anzhi: Okay, wait for me to send it to you tomorrow.

……

After ending the chat with Xu Changqing, Lu Anzhi immediately created a new text document and wrote the settings.

Setting Xu Changqing's background and letting Xu Changqing fill in the content by himself is also an idea that Lu Anzhi just came up with. When he told Xu Changqing about Xiuzhen, this idea suddenly popped into his mind.

The theme of Xiuzhen, it is difficult not to remind Lu Anzhi of "Ethereal Journey" in his previous life. He still remembers the shock he had when he first read this book in his previous life, because of his unbridled imagination. The realm of cultivation, the unpredictable cultivation planet in the starry sky, and all kinds of different magic weapons made his eyes shine at that time.

But now that he thinks about it, if he hadn't had the book "Ethereal Journey" still lying in his head, that's all he could recall, right? Compared to the background that created the genre, the story of "Ethereal Journey" itself is not too impressive.

Therefore, Lu Anzhi wanted to refine the background setting of this story, and then hand over the specific storyline to Xu Changqing to improve. Let's see if the author in this world collides with the classic setting from another world, and can collide with a wonderful spark.

Qi training, foundation building, Jindan, Yuan Infant, Out of the body, Transformation of the gods, Integration, Refining Void, Crossing Tribulation, Mahayana ......

One realm after another, not only from "Ethereal Journey", but also from the refinement and completion of various cultivations later. Lu Anzhi wrote according to the system that was later perfected, and gave a detailed explanation of each realm.

After that, there were all kinds of different planets and magical and diverse magic weapons, and he didn't carry all the backstories of "Ethereal Journey", but just classified and described them on each planet according to the type. Such a larger framework is more convenient for Xu Changqing to fill in the content.

And in this way, it is also more convenient for Lu Anzhi to save trouble. Otherwise, just writing the setting will take him a lot of time.

He still has to write "Fate Stay Night" now, but he doesn't have the time to write so many settings.

"Why did you open another one?"

When Zhang Suxin got up at night and passed behind Lu Anzhi, she saw Lu Anzhi build a new document and couldn't help asking. She was afraid that Lu Anzhi would be tired.

Lu Anzhi explained to Zhang Suxin: "I'll write a setting and give Xu Changqing some pointers." Xu Changqing wants to write a new book. ”

"That's right."

Zhang Suxin nodded, then looked at what Lu Anzhi wrote, and felt that she was not too interested. As for the whimsical and quoting scriptures set in it, she saw it. But she has long been used to it, and she only thinks that her husband has the ability to write such things, so she is not surprised.

In comparison, it was "Fate Stay Night" that interested her more.

"Can you show me first after you've written that Fate?"

She asked.

Lu Anzhi nodded and said, "Of course it's no problem." ”

But this night, Lu Anzhi only finished writing the setting of "Ethereal Journey" and went to sleep. Of course, he didn't give this new setting a name, and the name of "Ethereal Journey" was only known to him. Only giving the setting is more helpful to open up Xu Changqing's thinking.

It was still a lonely night. Xian Xian still loves to sleep with her grandmother, Zhang Suxin accompanies Xiao Qianqian, and Aunt Gu is watching.

After waking up the next day, he sent Xian Xian to the kindergarten, and after going home for breakfast, Lu Anzhi sent the settings to Xu Changqing.

Xu Changqing received the complete outline, and looked at the complete system setting that started from Qi training, as well as those various homogeneous but different cultivation planets, and was immediately shocked.

"Mr. Lu really deserves to be Mr. Lu."

He couldn't help but sigh to his wife.

And Lu Anzhi continued to write the follow-up to "Fate Stay Night".

This, Ku Bitter has already begun to urge him to draft. Before chatting with Xu Changqing last night, Lu Anzhi saw a message sent bitterly: Boss B, what's the back?

After opening the laptop this morning, he saw a bitter new message: Boss B, what about the back?

The prompting editor began to reread his own words on his own.

I don't know if she is in a hurry to urge the maple tree, or if she is in a hurry to see the follow-up?

In the second chapter, King Arthur's identity is still not revealed, but the complete worldview of this story has been revealed, and Hercules, the son of Zeus, who is Berserker, appears with Illya and gives Emiya Shirou an education, so that Emiya Shirou begins to understand the Holy Grail War. Readers also learn about the setting with the help of this battle.

After Lu Anzhi finished writing, he first showed the manuscript to his wife. Zhang Suxin had just finished breastfeeding Xiao Qianqian, came over and sat down to take a look, and then became interested in guessing the rank of a servant. However, she guessed for a long time who the spearman and the knight were, but she couldn't guess it.

After that, Lu Anzhi sent the manuscript to Kuku, and Kuku was really caught in it. And she was not passed by Luan's drama, and Saber's identity also needs to be guessed. Until everything is revealed, these things are very attractive to her.

But in the future, when these are revealed, their focus is afraid that it will change, such as the stupid hair of the dumb hair king, the lucky E of the spearman and so on.

The dull hair of the dumb hair king, Lu Anzhi emphasized it, this feature is the main body of Artoria, and he can't ignore it.

After having the manuscript of the two chapters, I confirmed the quality of Lu Anzhi's new and the fit with the maple tree, and I was relieved and handed in the manuscript.

Of course, she didn't believe in Lu Anzhi's quality, but she was afraid that the new draft would not meet the needs of Mapletree. Now that there is no problem with confirming the new manuscript, it is natural to let this new manuscript enter the next publication process.

So Lu Anzhi quickly received the contract from Maplewood, which is still his usual template. He looked at it and signed his name on the contract.

After the contract was sent back, the serialization was quickly arranged. When the next issue of "Under the Maple Tree" is officially revised back to the e-magazine, it will be published.

And Lu Anzhi also wrote the third and fourth chapters of "Fate Stay Night" and sent them to Kuku.

(End of chapter)