Closing remarks
It took one year and fifteen days, 1.5 million words... The book is finally finished, and if it's a perfect score of 100, let me rate the book, I can only give a maximum of 70 points.
Writing to now, I have also found too many deficiencies in myself, plus I did not have yang in the first round, since the first yang in May last year, my body has been sick repeatedly, all kinds of fever, constipation, stomach pain, anyway, it is a whole body of illness, which has caused my state to drop a lot.
Especially in the later stages of the book, I wanted to write a lot of things, but my heart was strong but not strong, and my body would be very uncomfortable if I sat for too long. At the end of this time, I was ready to run and get some exercise.
Thank you to the readers and fathers who have accompanied me all the way here, I know that I have a lot of bad writing, but I really have to do my best, but you have to understand, when it comes to the back, my body is indeed a little irresistible, since the yang, the body is getting worse and worse, I don't know if you are like this.
The topic returns to the novel itself, the book itself does have some flaws, mainly written by Douyi, I can't shape Tang San into a very smart person at all, because I really think he is very mentally retarded a lot of the time, I think everyone reads this book for fun, some places are indeed a bit of a reduction in intelligence, but seeing Tang San being abused, everyone can be happy.
By the way, there are still some holes in this book that have not been filled, and I will fill it in the form of extras in the future.
But then again, I'm really satisfied with the results of this book, and it can be said that since I wrote the novel, the results have taken a big step, and the highest time was more than 7,000, and now it's about to finish, and there are 6900.
I don't know if this book will be able to rise to 10,000 orders in the future, I think it's probably not possible, after all, what I wrote in the later period was really not very good.
It's been almost two and a half years since I wrote a book, that's right, two and a half years, a kun year, I have gained a lot, not only have a job I like, but also know a girl I like very much. Seriously, writing a book really gives me a sense of fulfillment, because I think people can get joy from me for just two cents a day, and that's what I write about!
I'm going to take a month off and exercise first, and then start writing a new book, speaking of which, let's talk about the new book, which is also a Douluo fan, and the protagonist is also Xiao Yan, and the title of the book is "Douluo: Xiao Yan crosses into Huo Yuhao"
Why did you write about Huo Yuhao?
After watching Dou Er, the biggest impression for me was that Huo Yuhao had never lived a day for himself from beginning to end, like a dog of Tang San.
Why? He was born in the White Tiger Duke's Mansion, and he almost never lived for himself, only when he walked out of the Duke's Mansion to meet the Heavenly Dream Ice Silkworm, he only lived for himself during this time.
Since he accepted the gift of the million-year soul ring, he has entered the god-making plan set for him by the Heavenly Dream Ice Remnant, although this plan is not a bad thing for him, even if he continues according to this result, he can even push this world in a better direction.
But apparently what happened to him later?
Since he met the three melons and two dates of the Tang Sect, he has an additional identity, a disciple of the Tang Sect. From this moment on, he was already the prey of Tang San's cobweb.
Not to mention that after entering Shrek, he met that person, and then obviously had Electrolux, a pioneer who dared to go to war with the world, as a mentor, and finally chose to be a dog, but there was indeed an element of Tang San's calculations here, otherwise, if Electrolux did not die, the ending might change.
And he was brought back from the dead by his master, because the old lady was willing to change her surname back to the resurrection, and all the efforts he had made before that were all jokes. Seeing this, I'm thinking, if the protagonist is Xiao Yan, what will he do?
The moment I saw him change his surname, I felt that his own personality had completely dissipated, and the boy who once wanted to avenge his mother had long since died.
In the book, he is honored because his eyes have regained different pupils, but does he know that the half-brother who ignores his father and killed his mother has ever treated him as a human being?
Don't talk about the people who have helped him along the way, Sister Xiao Tao, Bei Bei Tang Ya, Tangerine and Wang Qiu'er, Shrek Ontology Sect Tang Sect Spirit Tower, even if there is no bullshit Tang God King hindering him, he can also mechanically ascend to the self-created god position like Rong Nian Bing.
But will he live for himself one day? No!
I still remember the kid who came out of the big victory and went to Shrek. Because for him, the future he longs for is not easy, but it is bright. He can fulfill his mother's last wish to make him a soul master, and he also believes that he can wash away his mother's grievances with a pair of eyes.
In the end, I made a little puppet for a little doll and was just a poor child.
The process of recognizing it is very similar to a child who was not cherished by his parents when he was a child and desperately needed recognition, and there were many people who were really good to him along the way, and many people were taking advantage of him.
The saddest thing is that he was also brought to the chastity ring, if that was Xiao Yan, with his character, what would he do? How will you choose? Will you join the Tang Gate? Will you join Shrek? Will he become Tang San's house slave?
I don't think so!
Well, that's all I have to say, I wish you all good health, good work, and all the best.
Before opening a new book, I plan to take care of my body for a while, and I will write a new book before the end of April.
Thanks!
Finally, I will end with a sentence from Mr. Jin Yong's article: You see these white clouds gather and disperse, scatter and gather, and life is also the same!
See you next month for new books!