“……”

Lin Jianian stood in front of the outer workbench and listened carefully to Xu Nian's singing inside.

I already have a pen in my hand, and I will record one or two from time to time.

Occasionally, a frown is furrowed.

You may even fall into deep thought.

Then it was pulled back to reality by the singing that came out.

And so on until ...... Xu Nian finished singing it in one go.

Lin Jianian just wanted to sort out his thoughts, and Xu Nian suddenly began to think to himself and read a monologue:

"I thought of a way to forget about you who was gentle

I don't think of you anymore, I don't love you anymore

I won't talk about it again

I have never had you in my life. ”

Every word fell into Lin Jianian's ears so lightly and floating, dropping stones in her calm heart.

Swing, swing, ripple.

In an instant, many thoughts came to her, and she thought of many, many of them.

'Yes...... What kind of scene does it have an impression? ’

Or is it a random creation? ’

'...... in his life'

Seeing that the war was about to be in chaos, Xu Nian opened the door and walked out of the room, and asked confidently: "How is it, it feels very good!" ”

Lin Jianian: "......"

Looking at Xu Nian, who was proud, reserved and confident, and looked like a boast, she only felt ......

Blame me, blame me, just think about it!

Retracting his gaze, Lin Jianian said bluntly: "I'm pretty sure that you are very crooked this time...... How to say it, crooked far away. ”

Immediately, Lin Jianian pointed out the elements one by one: "First of all, it can be said that the song you sing has nothing to do with the score. ”

"Secondly, there are some lyrics that you play randomly on the spot."

"Finally, it's a little different from the tone you first hummed, and it basically doesn't matter what you said about the blues style."

After saying this, Lin Jiannian looked up at Xu Nian: "What you sing is probably a lyrical micro-rock style?" ”

"Rock is rock, why is it still micro-rock?" Xu Nian was puzzled.

Not only did he not get praise, but he was also singled out for a lot of problems.

In this sunny spring, I really don't know how Lin Jianian's 36.2-degree mouth can say such cold words!

Lin Jianian: "......"

Wipe!

Looking at Xu Nian, Lin Jiannian couldn't help but clench his fists: "You don't listen to the point at all, right?" ”

Seeing this, Xu Nian shook his head quickly: "No, no, I heard it." ”

Then I had to say honestly: "If everything is wrong, then you can only take me mouth-to-mouth first." ”

"Waiting"!

Lin Jianian glanced at Xu Nian and nodded silently after half a minute.

I don't really want to talk for a while.

Of course, she was mentally prepared, knowing that she would definitely need to be pointed.

It's just that she overestimated Xu's ability to learn crookedly.

She doesn't even have the heart to think more deeply about the emotions of Xu Nian's version and so on.

It's really a comparison score, and it's been crooked to the country of Java.

Picking up the scratch paper that had just been recorded, Lin Jianian said: "I memorized some of the lyrics you played randomly just now, you can take a look first, you should need to revise the lyrics." ”

"The biggest change is that you add a monologue to the last paragraph."

Xu Nian immediately said: "This section has to stay, it feels very good!" ”

"Yes, it's more felt than you sing." Lin Jianian expressed his agreement, and secretly poked yin and yang by the way.

In the process of singing casually just now, Xu Nian really remembered a little bit of the essence of "Ronin Love Song".

The monologue at the end of the song is a bit of a feeling the more you listen to it.

So he read it out according to the special intuition and spirit that he had when he sang.

Unfortunately, he was immersed in emotions at that time and failed to notice the change in Lin Jiannian's expression.

Missed out on many ...... in daily life Detail.

………

Subsequently, the two had a round of full discussion on the lyrics.

Lin Jiannian has put forward many professional opinions with his own literary literacy and experience in lyric rhyme.

Xu Nian relied on the memory fragments of the earth's time and space to try some corrections.

"This place doesn't rhyme, it's a bit abrupt."

"But I always feel that I don't feel that way anymore!"

"You can tell me how it feels."

"Feeling...... It's just a feeling......"

“……”

The discussion was very enthusiastic, and I don't know when I left the studio and went to the gym, and then I started to get started.

"What are you trying to do?"

"I'm not tough, I just stick to my own opinions, and I have enough confidence in art, which you taught me."

"The old lady is to keep you confident, not to let you raise the bar!"

"I'm not ETC, what kind of lever do I raise."

"Rub! Beat you to death! ”

"Come on, come on, I'll give you a hand, if you can walk in front of me, I'll count you as a win!"

Lin Jianian suddenly became annoyed and angry, shouted wow, and rushed directly: "Xu Nian, you have done all the bad things, and you deserve it if you fall into my hands!" ”

Xu Nian stretched out a hand to block the embroidered leg of the flower fist, and disagreed: "You are the most evil crime, I don't bother to do anything with you at all." ”

"I'm going to beat you so much that I don't even know the king of heaven!"

"Who won't say big words, let's see who is suppressed first."

The two of them use their consistent 'sanda' fighting skills to go back and forth, and the one that fights is called a falling flower.

In view of the past panda eye 'case record', the two respectively 'awakened' the skill of beating people without slapping their faces.

Anyway, the sons and daughters of the rivers and lakes don't pay attention to anything that bumps into it.

Besides...... Lin Jianian suddenly discovered that she was actually transgender last year.

She considers herself male, transvestite, wears only women's clothes, and is also gay and likes men.

So it's normal for two men to get into a fight, and there's a little bit of physical friction.

For example, right now, Lin Jiannian accidentally rode on Xu Nian's shoulder, just because of the competitiveness in her bones......

Finally, both of them collapsed on the ground, staring at the ceiling in a daze.

Beads of sweat leached from every corner of their bodies.

After a long time, Lin Jianian said softly: "The easternmost bedroom on the third floor is vacated for you, go wash up first." ”

Then the two of them got up separately, Xu Nian climbed directly to the third floor, and Lin Jiannian took the elevator to the top 5th floor.

…………

Half an hour later, Xu Nian and Lin Jiannian met again in the recording studio on the first floor.

After the fight...... The in-depth communication was completed through physical contact, and the two were very emotionally stable at the moment.

The discussion began again, and a consensus was reached in less than ten minutes.

Immediately, Lin Jiannian and Xu Nian walked into the recording area together.

first cleared his throat, and then Lin Jianian said bluntly: "I will sing it again, you pay careful attention to the changes in my tongue." ”

"Okay." Xu Nian nodded violently.

Lin Jianian soon began to sing.

Her voice is not very suitable for songs like "Ronin Love Song".

But her professional skills are there, and the exemplary teaching is in place.

The tone shift of each sentence and so on are very well placed.

It doesn't seem to be much different from the original "Ronin Love Song" in Xu Nian's memory.

Xu Nian felt a little touched.

He has also been instructed by Lin Jiannian to show the changes in the mouth and tongue many times, and Xu Nian has paid full attention to the details of the changes.

Even, he noticed the subtle mistaste of some words and phrases, and directly recorded them.

After Lin Jianian finished singing demonstratively, Xu Nian expressed his views and some thoughts.

The lyrics are fine-tuned again.

Xu Nian has 9 into 9 confidence, which is the same as the original version, and it belongs to the successful review of the lyrics.

Next......

It's time to witness the miracle.

After repeated research, perception, experience, and substitution, he Xu has complete confidence.

"You sing it again."

"Uh-huh."

Xu Nian cleared his throat and stood in front of the microphone, Lin Jiannian walked to the outside console to prepare to cooperate with the operation equipment.

Then Xu Nian began to sing.

As soon as the tone came out, Lin Jianian's brows immediately frowned: "...... How is this more crooked than not learned? ”

However, she didn't rush to interrupt Xu Nian this time, because she had a different feeling when she listened to it this time.

Be......

Sentiment!

And the transmission of emotions!

And......

Lin Jianian continued to listen intently.

Smacking in my heart: "This time the direction is crooked...... It seems to be a little interesting, but there is a little bit of a unique personal style?! ”

"Huh? ...... to the monologue part"

Lin Jianian held his breath and listened carefully to the last monologue that ended with elevating the emotional delivery of flavor.

A clean and clear young man seemed to appear in his mind, whispering that he let go of a relationship and didn't want to miss it.

"This taste ......"

Lin Jianian raised his head and gestured, and said through the intercom microphone: "Sing it again, and try to substitute as much as possible for your understanding and feelings of the song." ”

In the middle, Xu Nian gestured OK.

He didn't rush to sing right away, but was silent for a moment, emptying his mind, and then going through the song again.

It was a full three or four minutes before he began to sing it a second time.

Lin Jianian waited with bated breath, she didn't know what she was expecting when she was crooked like this.

At......

When Xu Nian's voice came out, Lin Jiannian's eyes suddenly lit up: "I really have a little personal style!" ”

If it is said that every time Xu Nian recorded a song before...... Recorded the song twelve times, and there were 'thousands of autumns' over and over again.

Then, except for the first time, Xu Nian's singing voice and style are almost the same these two times.

It's a kind of light rock lyric that is not all blues, not all like rock, not all like pop.

Listening carefully, it seems as if there is a story unfolding in front of you.

At the end of this time, Lin Jianian, who was not 'dead', said again: "This time has a bit of a taste, do it again." ”

"A little more input, a little immersion."

She needed to make sure again.

At the beginning of the third time, Lin Jianian's expression was much soothed, and then he began to cooperate on the console and directly carried out the initial recording.

Four minutes and thirty-one seconds later, Lin Jianian spoke again: "Come out." ”

Looking at Xu Nian, who walked up to him, he was already a little confused, Lin Jianian smiled lightly: "Congratulations." ”

"You sang a whole new version of this song......"

Xu Nian's heart suddenly turned to ashes.

Then I heard Lin Jianian say calmly: "After the first version was recorded, I asked the studio to work overtime, and then the official recording was carried out." ”

Xu Nian: "? ”

Seeing this, Lin Jianian was not surprised, and spread his hands helplessly: "Although you are crooked, you can't find a problem at the professional level when you sing, and you have sung the same style three times in a row." ”

After listening, Xu Nian immediately raised his eyebrows and rolled his eyes: "So...... Is the kidnapping over? ”

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