Whew!

It's September!

Originally, it was supposed to be written at the beginning of the month, but because I owed too much, I took advantage of the current debt to pay off, and quickly wrote the thank you list, so as not to owe it later.

First of all, a little off-topic.

A friend talked to me about his thoughts on the new book and a little bit of what he thought about my book.

Tell me what he thinks.

First of all.

He thinks that my book is crooked, and that there is no need to write about the food captive, or focus on the world of the spirit of the halberd......

And then.

The pace is too fast!

Of course.

It's okay if the pace is too fast, after all, it can't be changed now.

Follow the routine he gave me.

Finding the ingredients - the original character encounters difficulties - asking for help from the protagonist - solving the problem (the ingredients appear in front of the people) - other miscellaneous fish exclaim that the protagonist is awesome.

And so on and so forth.

Here's an example.

Get an ingredient such as a whitening ingredient such as a sky cucumber, and then arrange a halberd and ask them to come to Kanda for help......

And then.

He was silent for a moment in the middle of speaking, because I still couldn't change it.

And then.

I said that it is better for you to open a book and I will support you.

A little modification of that routine will do the trick.

Encounter difficulties (food halberd) - Food Captive Adventure (find ingredients) - Solve difficulties - Original characters exclaim - Original characters use ingredients to solve ......

He refused, saying that he still wanted to open an original one.

Really.

Every fandom has an original heart.

It's a pity.

That's why a person who doesn't read reviews, after all, people who haven't written a book and who have written a book are completely two mindsets......

Let's talk about a few friends in the group who almost collapsed because of reader comments.

The first is a writing dragon text.

Reader: You haven't been a dragon before, how do you know that dragons are like this?

Bang bang bang.

It is recommended to be included in the canon, a universal template.

And then it's a friend of entertainment.

Premise: The golden finger of his protagonist is proficiency, that is, he can have proficiency in doing anything, a common golden finger.

Reader: With this kind of golden finger, don't engage in scientific research, be a show? casually researched some black technologies are no more profitable than being a play.

I don't know how to evaluate it.

Ask why you don't write a science and technology article in the entertainment article, what is the difference between this and going to KFC to buy McDonald's.

Historical text.

He was even worse.

I won't say too much about the specifics!

It can only be said.

Everyone is a historian.

Thank you for your monthly passes, collections, follow-ups, and recommended tickets.

Finally, there is the list of tips and thanks.

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