The revisions have improved the details

I'm sorry, but I thought Snape's emotional foreshadowing in Chapter 28 was smooth when I wrote it, and there was nothing wrong with it.

But when I first reread it, I felt that something was wrong, a little abrupt.

After pondering for a while, I still perfected the details and laid the groundwork.

It's uncomfortable to read it yourself, let alone readers.

Now it's been modified.,Trouble everyone who has subscribed to refresh it.,If you think it's still a little abrupt, I'll continue to change it.,Strive to write well.。

By the way, the single chapter has been posted, and the end of the month!! Don't hide your big tickets, give you a split, and ask for a monthly ticket by the way.......

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