Listing Testimonial: Growing in Writing

Stream-saving: On the shelves at 12 o'clock in the evening, 5 more than 30,000 words, and 2 more at 12 o'clock. After it is put on the shelves, it will be updated 2 times a day with 12,000 words.

Last night, I updated a chapter, and I discussed with my parents about my sister's college entrance examination.

Henan candidates, in the case of low scores, it is difficult to choose a school.

I discussed it with my parents and sister at ten o'clock in the evening and didn't get a result.,When I got up in the morning, I looked at it and found that the latest chapter was sprayed wildly.。

Chapter 62 writes that Da Sima is an analyst and teaching assistant, and the original intention is to improve Ming Kai's map control ability as soon as possible, so that Ming Kai can quickly reach his peak.

As a result, everyone was sprayed numb.

I found some LOL authors to discuss this matter, and then went to the editor to ask about learning, and finally came to a conclusion that controversial characters should not be written without affecting the plot.

The rookie author was taught a lesson.

I revised my manuscript overnight and rewrote the 62 chapters (knock on the blackboard, you can re-read the 62 chapters).

Good news: Manuscripts are being revised quickly.

Bad news:_____________.

Bow, kowtow, bow again, kowtow again.

Before I wrote the book, I thought it would be enough to have hands.

After writing the book, I realized that I was still far behind.

Lack of pen power.

The character portrayal is a little dull.

The tension of the plot is not well grasped.

There is a slight lack of detail.

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There are a lot of problems, and I write down every problem I can find in a small notebook and read books with them in order to find ways to grow.

When I was writing, I also found some problems in the plot, and I wrote them out to discuss with you.

For example, when I was writing about the fish and the net was broken, I kept reflecting after I finished writing it, if the plot of the fish and the net was not Lu Yiming being hidden, but Lu Yiming was on the road and assisted in acting, resulting in losing the game and leaving tonight with Ming Kai in a rage, and then suppressing PE, would it be more cool.

For example, when writing the All-Star Game, if you don't write so impatiently, add some dialogues and psychological activities of the Korean All-Star Team, such as An Zhangmen questioning why it was Ruofeng instead of Lu Yiming, for example, the head coach of the Korean All-Star team questioning why the LPL All-Star came to these people, and did not see Ming Kai, Lu Yiming, etc., will it be more expected or refreshing to add some details in this way.

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In addition to the problem of the direction of the plot, I was a little too impatient when it came to writing.

My idea at the time was to write about the World Finals when it was released, but it was half a month earlier than I expected, and no matter how fast I was, I couldn't write about the World Finals.

Once the plot is impatient to catch up with the schedule, there will indeed be a lot of details, such as the "Founder" series of videos, what is the impact, whether the Korean side has watched it, what is their evaluation after watching it, and whether the operation has improved.

I think it would be better to read it if you had calmed down and slowly completed the details.

Slowly experiencing the scenery of the wild era of the S3 season may also be a good way to write.

What is the correct answer, I don't know, maybe the grades will be better or it will be worse.

But the wood is already in the boat, and what I can do now is to write in the follow-up plot not so impatiently, and write with a more peaceful mind.

Of course, water doesn't know water, and I don't usually write meaningless plots.

Have you found that the heroine hasn't appeared in many chapters.

Who is Hibiscus? I don't know!

Ming Kai is the heroine, and Sima Lao Thief is the female supporting role (laughs).

Unconsciously chatted so much.

Regarding the follow-up plot, the summer tournament will not be written, there is nothing to write about, although it failed to enter the global finals before it was put on the shelves, but it is not too close.

Regarding this book, the core of this book will not change, and no matter how the plot of this book is written, it is written around the core.

The core is the foundation of a book.

Finally, the first decision.

Kneel down for all the food and clothing parents: ▄█▀█●