The third (two?) Testimonials at the end of the volume
Volume 2 - Counting the division of the starting point system, the previous first volume was split into the first and second volumes, so this volume is divided into the third volume in the serial number.
(This is a chapter of testimonials after returning home from the train.) )
Let's start with my thoughts.
When I wrote this volume, it really brought me a lot of challenges and fun, but now that I think about it, the biggest problem with this volume is that the map switching is too stiff, and there are many places where there is a lack of foreshadowing.
For example, the plot of going to the southern continent after going to sea, and then the plot of directly transferring to the archipelago. I'm not very satisfied with this paragraph, because I still lack consideration for the plot here, and when I wrote about the Southern Continent, I realized that there was not enough content to be written.
The reason for this is that I didn't have enough control over the plot, and I hurriedly transferred to the past without paving enough groundwork for the Southern Continent in the early stage. And the setting of the "main god space" set in the first volume makes the Southern Continent lack a sense of urgency.
For me, this paragraph is not interesting enough. I'm going to feel pain myself when I'm writing this paragraph, and I don't think the reader will be satisfied.
So after that, I let Xiao Ke leave the Southern Continent and go to Grossell's Travels.,And then the plot basically began to be interlocking in the design.,I don't know what everyone's perception is.,But the later chapters say more.,Make me happier.。
However, at this time, another problem was exposed, Xiao Ke's team was a little too redundant, for a "secret puppet master", whether it was a "one-man show" or a "group drama", it was the director of the secret puppet master alone, and Xiao Ke obviously would not calculate his partner and let his partner become his own pawn.
So, I'll pay attention to this in the next volume.
Another problem is that Lao Gao's strength is too strong, coupled with the omniscient ability that "True Traverser" comes with, Lao Gao can't play when he lifts the table, so Lao Gao went offline for a while.
However, I made some amends and completely gave up my previous plan. That is, the plan to let Lao Gao be promoted a little bit - well, this is a bit too insulting for an old man, I would rather let Lao Gao have no way to make a move because of the barrier and his own humanity, and I don't want the old people to be so aggrieved.
- But when I write later, it's much cooler than the first one (in a good mood).
Again, when I wrote this paragraph, I didn't have the pain of tormenting each other with me before, and basically every chapter was able to be completed in 3 hours, which also gave me a little more free time to read some other books.
Then let's talk about the plot of this volume.
"Narrow Gate" - uh, how to say it, the ending of the plot of this volume is quite different from what I envisioned at the beginning, but fortunately I haven't written down the outline of the next volume yet, otherwise I guess it will be a reversal.
In my initial vision, at the end of the "narrow gate", Mr. Gate would make a move, sacrificing a part of himself for the sake of people. But the last one is that I can't bear to do it, and the other reason is that Mr. Men has always been by Lao Gao's side, and he has been suppressed a little ruthlessly.
However, it turned out that Klein had now killed himself and became a demigod. This ending is not bad, after all, there are really not many deep hatreds between Xiao Ke and Ince Zangwill in this world, and the Blood Emperor can't toss anymore and catch up in a short period of time.
So, I'm quite satisfied with this ending.
That's pretty much the end of the flaws and emotions of this volume—well, it can be used for the next time. Now I'm going to talk about the next volume, of course, don't worry, no spoilers.
By the time I wrote about George III's renunciation of his ego, the tone for the next volume was basically set. Let's start with the title, the next volume is called "Justice".
I've already highlighted a few of the main characters in the next volume by the end of this volume - yes, like the title, Miss "Justice" will have a lot of scenes, of course, most likely not the kind of love. However, these will depend on later developments.
And for the people of the Tarot Club, there will be more appearances in Beckland, and Alger, well, Alger will also have a chance to transform in this volume, as for the specific opportunity, I won't disclose, in fact, I feel that in addition to Xiao Ke, Lao Gao, and Audrey, Alger's growth should also fit the title of this volume.
In this volume, I will try to depict it in depth, to give the stage of Beckland a closer to the real atmosphere, and it is also inevitable that the perspective will probably be locked on these "protagonists", and it will not be like the previous volume to write too many group portraits and change too many maps.
For me, this unwritten genre is a challenge, and I'm looking forward to what kind of sparks will be generated by a few people who uphold their own righteousness in their hearts on stage.
The book's current average order is relatively stable, about 1,002, and it seems that it is not a problem to land smoothly. For me, I prefer to try more ways to write and improve my level, for me, writing is not a job, but a hobby and a kind of creation.
Although it is said that there is a life of reluctance, but you also have to look at poetry and distance. I really had a lot of fun in the process of creating.
Tomorrow, because you have to think carefully about the opening, the update time is late. However, there are not many things on the National Day, and overall, there should be no less updates in the past few days.
Of course, because I don't like to take time off. Because I know the pain of the author suddenly taking a leave of absence when chasing the change, I haven't taken a leave of absence since I opened the book. One is to be diligent, and the other is not to disappoint everyone.
So, I want to take advantage of the rare vacation of these few days to save a few more chapters, as you can see, I don't have a single word of manuscript right now.
Of course, there will be no less updates. Because I have to consider the plot, I may not be able to double change tomorrow, but as long as I'm okay later, I should be able to double change every day, and there will be more saved manuscripts after I have them.
Well, I've written almost 2,000 words of testimonials, so let's stop here.
Tomorrow, the third volume of "Justice" will begin to be updated~ Yuehu is here to ask for all kinds of tickets, hoping to get a recommendation next month.
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Volume 3: Justice
"In yourself, overcome an era."
(End of chapter)