Let's talk
Let's talk about the results first.,The first order is close to 1200.,According to the collection ratio,It's not ideal.,But what's less ideal is actually to follow-up.。
Basically, it's declining at a rate of about 100 per day......
Let's be honest.
I actually had a lot of expectations for this book, especially the supplementary design of the elven hierarchy...... The starting point is to make every truly powerful trainer have a signature power that stands out from the rest.
In this way, each Heavenly King Champion will have their own characteristics, rather than being able to distinguish them only by elves.
This was actually intentional when I wrote my first elf......
The topic is a little far away, maybe there is still an unwilling desire to talk......
Let's get back to the existing chapters of the book.
Probably many readers have felt it.
The book begins with the recovery of Kira, and the original strong sense of forward rhythm has slowed down a lot...... I'll admit it here, because I did deliberately soothe the process, add to the routine, and bury some foreshadowing.
My original idea was to enrich the plot so that the world view could unfold later.
It doesn't make the book too monotonous.
But obviously.
This destroys the simple and crisp cycle of [Secret Exploration (Sense of Harvest)], [Digesting Resources (Sense of Growth)], and [Manifestation in Front of People (Cool Point Explosion)] that I designed at the beginning.
But the structure of the plot has already been designed, and it is difficult for me to directly overturn and complete the plot jump.
So much so that on the one hand, I wanted to speed up the accumulation of the protagonist's strength, and on the other hand, I had to go through the planned stage plot step by step, and I was in a dilemma, so that I wrote it even more uncomfortable......
It can be as I originally envisioned.
The [Academy] stage is actually the construction process of the protagonist system and the elf team.
This stage is complete.
In the subsequent stages of [Secret Exploration], [Conflict of Kingdoms], [Divine Beast Advent], and my initial [Truth Meeting], the protagonist can have the strength to intervene and take the initiative.
In general, at this stage, it is actually a protagonist's [saving] process.
But it seems that this process has failed to retain people......
Or am I writing too slowly?
Or is the plot a little boring?
But I personally feel that the biggest problem should be that the protagonist failed to play a key role, in short, he failed to put it up...... It's a matter of my rhythm, and I'm cautionary.
said a lot, in fact, it was because of unwilling self-talk and summary reflection.
The first book written at the starting point had a good start, and the author was really unwilling to give up so much of his efforts...... Let me think about it, and think about how I can save it.