Testimonials
It's finished, thank you all the book friends who chased all the way to the end.
can chase all the way to the end, and it is estimated that everyone is also a little exhausted from chasing more.
After all, the later I go to the later stage of this book, the more depressing the pace of the story becomes, and the protagonist doesn't have too much cool pretense, and I always feel a little boring and tired of chasing.
To be honest, the ending of the book is a bit inconsistent with what I had envisioned at the beginning, but by the end of the book, it feels a little out of the author's control.
The world in my pen seems to have life and spirituality, and in which direction I go, I always feel that everything is predestined.
In the follow-up, especially when it comes to the chapter of competing with the mastermind behind the scenes, it feels a little uncontrollable when it is written, especially when it comes to the final battle with the saints, it always feels like there is not much capital to win on the side of the Yahai Realm.
Even if it comes to the protagonist, it's like generation after generation of baton to cultivate the protagonist as a person who should be robbed, but it still doesn't feel enough.
Even if it's all working together, I still don't feel enough.
After all, the world personality is there, and there are no giant whales in the pond, this has always been my opinion.
As a result, there is a difficult victory that this book has never seen before.
It's not that the victory is stronger than the saints, but that the victory is that the saints themselves have a problem, and the protagonist is essentially dragged to victory!
Originally, I was going to write about all the people as one, and then defeat the saints together through a bloody battle, but for some reason I don't seem to be able to write the blood of the Moe King's book at the end.
Probably smoothed out the edges?
The ending of this book is a bit abrupt, but I still like the feeling that the most common sunshine, wind, thunder, rain and dew are the avenue itself.
That's how I think about what the ultimate form of power looks like.
I think that individuals in living beings are sometimes a little contemptuous in front of the true Heavenly Dao (nature), like a storm, a tsunami, or a landslide.
And the original gods of mankind were essentially all kinds of nature worship.
The sun has the god of the sun, the god of frost and snow, and the god of the ocean and the ocean.
And the gods are the embodiment of all kinds of natural powers!
This is very different from my previous protagonists, the final battle is all emitting how brilliant fairy light, how many stars and how many universes are destroyed under one blow.
The greatest power I understand is the primordial power of nature.
It looks like the simplest snow, but if it takes a little longer, the whole world will be frozen, and all living things will be reduced to nothingness.
Of course.
This is also related to my lack of knowledge and imagination, maybe I have not been able to imagine what the real destruction of heaven and earth under the laws of the fantasy universe is.
Therefore, the final battlefield I have given is that there is no light, no wind, no sound, and everything is reduced to nothingness.
Well, with that said, I will also summarize the gains and losses of my book.
The biggest feeling I have when I write this book is that the sense of expectation at the beginning is misplaced and the follow-up is missing.
The sense of expectation is misplaced, the core is reflected in the fact that the protagonist started from a small person, and suffered all kinds of injustices and tribulations.
But I turned around and wrote about entering the family, and then it seemed that I had betrayed my class.
This is very unflattering in nature in the early stages!
In the middle of the game, the battle between the real dragon and the unicorn, I wanted to create an opponent with a relatively high level and only a battle of position with the protagonist himself.
When He Qilin appeared relatively rarely, this feeling could still be maintained, but as soon as He Qilin appeared, I mistakenly made him fall off the grid, and this character completely collapsed.
After arriving at He Qilin, the protagonist is directly involved in the dispute between the north and the south.
The strength of the protagonist here seems to be a little insufficient, and it has not reached the point of completely turning the tide, so it is still somewhat lacking in the cool point.
In the last part, the enemies are stubble after stubble, but in essence, they are not completely established, and the cool point is still seriously missing.
In essence, I don't have enough pen power, I don't know how to open copies, and my ability to set up characters is also lacking, so the story is never three-dimensional enough.
For example, the "Four Worlds and Three Heroes" and other heroes I mentioned at the beginning appeared too much at once, resulting in everyone having fewer roles, and then they couldn't stand up.
The Nine Kings is also a good group, and it feels okay to write, but there is a bit of an imbalance in the control of combat power, which leads to all the Nine Kings playing soy sauce.
This is something I regret very much!
Because it's still very depressing, the perception and experience are somewhat lacking.
Now that I think about it, my book still seems to be a little deficient in terms of shortcomings, such as the cultivation system and the golden finger are designed to be a bit too complicated and seriously drag their feet, and in general, they have become too much up and down.
In the future, writing still needs to overcome these shortcomings and write the story more solidly, especially for the control of combat power, you need to do a good job of addition and subtraction, and you can't destroy the world at every turn, which is very easy to lead to the collapse of the worldview.
In terms of characters, I feel that we also need to make good trade-offs, either directly do subtraction and direct template, or focus on it, and then make them more concrete.
In short, I am very grateful to all the book friends who have been able to follow up all the way to the present, thank you for your support and tolerance.
As for the new book, it will probably take a while to prepare, but it probably won't be too long.
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