It's not very well written today.

After I finished writing, I didn't feel very satisfied, so I deleted it all.

I always feel that what I wrote today is not very well connected with the plot.

The plot is handled a bit stiffly.

In addition, my knowledge of Chinese medicine is a bit stretched, and it is very uncomfortable to write.

I want to be fast, but I can't really be fast.

And looking back at what I wrote, there are really too many shortcomings.

I did not explain the problem of milk production in the third chapter of the opening chapter, so that I dissuaded many readers.

In fact, I want to say that milk production, after the scale is expanded, the factory must maintain its lactation period, so that the cows can maximize their conception and milk production.

But if you are pregnant all the time, it is absolutely impossible for the cow to be in a healthy state, but this state cannot be detected.

Just like the pork we eat now, the reason why it is not as delicious as the domestic pork we raised when we were children is because the piglets have never been out of the pig pen from birth to adulthood, have not been exposed to the sun, and eat all feed.

And chickens too, maybe the chickens you and I eat, from birth to death, have not taken two steps.

However, in the past, the local chickens raised in the countryside could fly.

The meat is still the same meat, the ingredients haven't changed, but the taste has completely changed.

Many animals, in today's scientific breeding, are actually not much healthier, so the things it produces must be empty and nutritious, without energy.

But a mistake is a mistake, and the unclear expression is still my problem, I admit it!

The second problem is the "Fight the Ring" chapter after it is released.

Because I have seen a lot of doctor's texts, and there are a lot of slap plots in the face, so I always want to add a little bit of this stuff to it.

Maybe because the pen is not enough, the writing is a little unsatisfactory.

Coupled with the style of my initial content construction, it doesn't match this kind of face-slapping plot, it looks inconsistent.

So, after this place was written, I didn't dare to write a similar plot again.

The third issue is the construction of the hospital system.

I know this thing is too idealistic, and many readers have complained about it more than once.

At first, I thought that Fat Donglai had a supermarket in Zhengzhou, and it could be used through this idealized model, why couldn't a Chinese medicine hospital?

When I was writing this, I was actually not convinced when I saw someone say that I was not convinced.

But I don't dare to say.

Seeing that the subscription was dropped, I could only write it head-on, of course, I don't regret it.

I just feel that this plot may have been written too early, and Lu Jiu should be allowed to continue to stay in the hospital for a while, and then slowly develop into a hospital.

The fourth problem is that I have too much personal opinion.

This is my long-standing problem.,If you write high, you won't be able to stop the car.,Especially the chapter that strongly opposes pre-made dishes.,The rhetoric is too radical and causes many readers to abandon the pit.。

I am still strongly opposed to pre-made dishes, and this position will not change.

However, this view should not affect the perception of the book.

I don't have a clear distinction here, the author is not allowed to bring personal emotions, but I am writing about traditional Chinese medicine, and it is a wrong way of writing to output too often in details.

In this case, it is indeed a mistake to make the reader uncomfortable reading the book.

The fifth problem is that the plot direction is too simple.

For me, there are two difficulties in professional writing.

One is the professional limitations, I don't have a personal experience, so I can't make the content of the article have more sense of substitution.

The second is the plot limitations, I don't dare to have too much room to play, always struggling back and forth between fantasy and reality, sometimes I think of a plot, I will always rehearse it in the background of reality, to see if it is reasonable, if it is unreasonable, I will not write, but it is often too reasonable, it will seem very boring.

How to say it.

Even if I write it until now, I am still a novice in the field of Chinese medicine.

At present, the book is set at 4400, and some will drop every day, and the above problems have also greatly affected the growth space of this book.

Of course, the most important thing to do is the update.

This is also my biggest problem.

Under this kind of scum, there are still seven or eight hundred people who have been chasing after it, and the monthly pass is hundreds more than the books with the same score, so I really thank you.

I'll rewrite it tomorrow, and if it goes well, I should be able to pay off the updates I owe in the past two days!

Sorry guys! o(╥﹏╥)o

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