It's over.

I thought I could write 1.5 million words.

But I overestimated myself.

This kind of realistic theme, in particular, must also have a professional professional essay.

It's really hard to write.

At the same time, it also exposed a lot of my shortcomings.

For example, there is too much output of personal opinions, and I bring my emotions into it when I write and write.

But for a reader, reading a book is not to look at the author's emotions, but to read a wonderful story.

This story can be called a good story if it can arouse the reader's emotions, rather than simply relying on the author's emotional output to drive the reader.

This approach is low-level and somewhat deliberate.

There is no essential difference from the kind of "family, who understands" on the Internet.

Ever since I came into contact with Chinese medicine, I have indeed been extremely disgusted with Western medicine for a while.

Even if I try my best to be objective enough, in fact, I will still reveal between the lines that I am dissatisfied with Western medicine.

I'll admit it's my fault.

But to be honest, it's really hard to be objective enough.

The so-called objectivity is nothing more than my opinion is consistent with yours, so you will think that I am objective, and when we are not consistent, my opinion will become subjective.

This direct way of outputting emotions will be corrected in the next book.

Another disadvantage is that the story is not very strong.

It didn't take me long to conceive this book, just over an hour, just like writing a certain eggplant.

Open Word is dry.

That's why the setting of the gold finger is so sloppy.

It should be clear to everyone after reading it.,I basically didn't write the system in the later stage.,I didn't even write much about the dialogues of the five viscera.。

It's not that I don't want to write, it's that the system was hard in my original design, and I can't write anymore.

The dialogue of the five organs must rely on some more complex diseases, otherwise it will be repetitive.

Because most of the diseases are caused by the five of them, it is not interesting to write about it later.

Pure water word count.

It was also in the process of writing that I discovered that the dialogue between Chinese medicine and the five internal organs, although this brain hole is more compatible, it has a fatal shortcoming.

Every time you change a patient, you have to start over.

For the shaping of the characteristics of the five organs, there will be a sense of separation.

Even if I specifically set the personality and language for the five organs, this sense of separation still exists, and I don't know if everyone will feel this way.

Personally, I don't like to write an outline, and before writing a book, I always thought about the beginning and the end, set up a few major events in the middle, and roughly describe the direction of the main character.

And then I wrote and conceived as I copied.

When writing TCM texts, I basically use treatment to promote the plot, and I also tried to write group portraits in the middle to bring the stories of patients into it.

But then I took a fork in the road, and I was in too much of a hurry.

did not make good use of the story to shape the characters, but took the road of changing the pattern of traditional Chinese medicine.

The direction certainly can't be miscalculated, but it's too fast.

This can be regarded as a disadvantage of not writing an outline, and the book is too sloppy.

By the way, I probably won't touch this thing again.

Because it's true that I can't write.

The reason why I have to add it is also because I don't have enough pen power, so I can only use the system to add some interest and upgrade, and reduce the difficulty of writing.

The end of this book is 4,600 yuan, as the first book of 800 Chinese medicine texts, I am very satisfied with this result.

There are regrets, but more than that, there is satisfaction.

Because I've said everything I want to say.

I hope that everyone will be able to go to bed early and get up early in the future, pay attention to diet and emotions, learn some self-help health methods before getting sick, and don't be afraid when you get sick, at the same time, whether it is Chinese medicine or Western medicine, they are not as powerful as we imagined, because any medicine depends on people, people can't do it, no matter how good medicine is, it is useless, so it is better to seek others than to seek yourself, and maintain a good living habit is to help yourself.

Lu Jiu Traditional Chinese Medicine Hospital is just one of the Chinese medicine dreams I created, which belongs to me, and I don't know if everyone is satisfied.

I hope there is such a hospital, which can be like Lu Jiu Traditional Chinese Medicine Hospital.

It is people-oriented, regards life as priceless, and returns medical treatment to its original intention, so that it can truly help the world.

The above is the final testimonial of the book "I Can Talk to the Five Organs".

Here's what my new book is about.

The new book follows the brain hole of the dialogue of the five organs.

There is no system though.

This new book, the theme is longevity, and the golden finger is the protagonist's dialogue with his five organs.

In the course of the dialogue, the five organs teach the protagonist how to live forever step by step.

There will be a lot of TCM knowledge involved, and readers who have read it can review it, and those who have not seen it can learn it again, and there is no harm.

Since the theme is immortality, the background must be mysterious.

In fact, at the beginning, I also wanted to talk about the mayor of the city, and abandon all other elements, just like the style that I had no intention of becoming an immortal, combined with my own theme, to describe the protagonist like an ascetic to pursue the road to immortality.

But it's a pity that the level is not enough, and I can't write that kind of delicate words and gripping stories, as well as a memorable character in just a few words.

After weighing it again and again, I finally chose to follow the crowd.

The background of the story is also very simple, after the development of science and technology, gene editing technology has made breakthroughs, and humans have discovered the mysterious "essentia", which can be made into genetic potions, which can allow humans to awaken the power of the elements, which people call arcane.

Arcane abilities have gone beyond the scope of human beings, but due to the need for drugs, and not everyone can awaken successfully, so being spurned by those who practice physical arts is a sideshow, but with the continuous development of arcane, there are more and more strong people, and physical skills are gradually declining, so arcane and physical arts have been competing for hundreds of years, and finally won with arcane arts.

The protagonist Zou Yi, after being admitted to Xuanhuo University after failing to fuse genes, unexpectedly had the ability to communicate with the five organs, and with the help of the five organs, he began to embark on the initial path of physical arts, immortality.

This is a general content, because the golden finger is to communicate with the five organs, so my discussion of the theme of immortality may be different from many immortal texts.

Because based on this golden finger, it is bound to be impossible to bypass the Yellow Emperor's internal scriptures, and the Yellow Emperor's internal scriptures talk about increasing lifespan, not against the sky.

The whole article is talking about what kind of disease people will get if they go against the sky, and when you go against the sky and have not cultivated to a certain level, you may directly fall ill and die.

Therefore, true immortality should be to follow the sky.

But the final result of going with the sky is definitely death, which is also the rule of heaven.

Therefore, after determining this path, I have to solve the final topic of death, at least logically consistent in terms of content.

The theme of this time can make me wild, the plot is no longer constrained, and I will find it interesting to write.

But this time it was a new challenge for me.

Because I haven't written much about fights, and I'm best at everyday writing, and I haven't written particularly intense conflicts.

The battle between arcane and physical arts, in fact, is also a reference to the other side of Chendong's deep space, but if you want to write to Chendong's level, I can't do it.

After all, I have also passed the new stage of killing five whites in seconds with a pen.

Therefore, I only pursue one point in the new book, the writing should be smooth, and try not to have too many poisonous points.

This is also the basic skill of many great gods.

I'm also learning at the moment.

As for the explosion, I did what I could.

If the book is published, it will definitely be sent before the end of the month, and the manuscript is currently being deposited, and the editor will help review the manuscript, I hope this book will not disappoint everyone.

The last is the update problem.,This Chinese medicine text update is very stretched.,So I've always been self-aware.,Never ask for rewards and monthly passes.,For the alliance leader of this book, I'm grateful again.,There are many readers' subscriptions.、Tips and monthly passes.,Thank you really for your continued support.。

Finally, I hope you all must be in good health!