For students who are trying to complete their graduation project for the first time, the script often has many flaws.

Issues such as the logic of the plot, the speed of development, etc., all need to be revised several times or even dozens of times before they can be barely watched.

Of course, there are students like those who are so gifted that they hardly need to be revised.

But for the first time, he handed over a thick book that could be used as a commercial film script......

Yui Koike is indeed the first time I have seen it.

No, to be precise, I'm afraid it's the first time in the entire Qiyu University of the Arts, right?

"That'...... Is this script okay? ”

Kimura asked hesitantly.

He was more concerned about whether the script would pass or not.

"It's too good." Yui Koike sighed softly, her slender fingers tapping lightly on the desk.

"Two hours is too long, after all, this is a school, not a theater. This script is more suitable for commercial shooting. ”

Too long?

Hayabusa Kimura pondered for a moment and said, "If you compress the duration to less than forty minutes, isn't it okay?" ”

"It can be, but it's not easy to ......compress so much content," Koike frowned, "It's not easy. ”

"No problem."

A smile rose on Hayabusa Kimura's face.

Two hours becomes forty minutes, and this operation ......

Isn't it just editing?

"Huh?" Yui Koike was puzzled.

"Mr. Koike, lend me the computer."

"Ah, okay."

Yui Koike got up blankly and watched as Hayaya Kimura took off the backpack behind his back and took out a USB flash drive from it.

Plugging in the USB flash drive,Hayabusa Kimura opens the backup saved in it "Tonight、世界からこの恋が消えても" script document。

The script is full of text and appears on the computer screen.

Hayaya Kimura pulls out the keyboard, the mouse keeps switching positions on the screen, and the delete button is pressed frantically.

Seeing one scene after another and shots disappear from the document, Yui Koike wanted to say something.

But seeing Kimura's too focused appearance, he still chose to remain silent.

Always look at what he does before making an evaluation......

I don't know how long it has been, but the documentation has bottomed out.

Hayabusa Kimura stopped pressing his finger on the delete button.

More than half of the original text document was deleted at this time.

Hayabusa Kimura took a quick look at the document from the beginning.

"That should be fine." Hayabusa Kimura looked up at Yui Koike, "The current script can be controlled within forty minutes. ”

Yui Koike nodded a little woodenly.

The two swap places.

Hayabusa Kimura stood quietly on the sidelines, and Yui Koike flipped through the script documents on the computer screen.

A two-hour script is just a little bit of effort, cut to forty minutes?

Yui Koike is very skeptical that Hayabusa Kimura will not affect the plot line and rationality of the film by doing this.

But......

As her mouse wheel kept rolling.

Yui Koike's eyes widened.

After a long time, her gaze was withdrawn from the last punctuation mark in the document.

Wonderful.

It was only that word left in her mind.

originally thought that such a major deletion and change would definitely destroy the original storyline of the script, and may even greatly reduce the watchability of the entire script.

But Hayabusa Kimura was very bold to delete all the kinship lines of all the main characters in the original script.

Only the plot of the male protagonist Kamiya Toru , the female protagonist Shinori Hino and the female protagonist's best friend Koizumi are retained.

If the original script is interspersed with the stories behind each character, like a gradual ice cube, gradually getting better.

The deleted script seems to be short-lived.

tells the story of the beautiful love affair between Toru Kamiya and Shinori Hino, and at the moment when the relationship reached its peak, the footage of Toru Kamiya's death was accessed.

There are no exquisite details of the original script, and there is a little more turbulence of emotional ups and downs.

And if you calculate carefully, the main line that the script wants to tell can not only be clear and clear, but the most important thing is that the time can be controlled within forty minutes.

Or even less......

Yui Koike's eyes when he looked at Hayata Kimura again completely changed.

Isn't this guy good, he's an amazing genius?!

"If it's the current script, it can really be controlled within the time limit." Yui Koike said.

"Then, Mr. Koike, is this script ready to be filmed?"

"However, there are some things that I think Hayabusa-kun could have modified better."

Yui Koike paused for a moment, then moved the mouse and began to comment on the shortcomings in the process of reading the script.

"Like the very beginning, maybe you can use the initial flashback footage to insert the shot of Koizumi flipping through Maori's diary......"

"The clip of Hayabusa-kun's first date with Toru Kamiya and Maori has been cut too much, if only the footage of the two of them together before the date could be kept...... That way, it might be a little better......"

Hayabusa Kimura listened too carefully.

I have to say, compared to my own movie clip-style deletion.

Yui Koike's suggestion seems to add a touch of soul to this edit-style script, so that the rhythm of the script is more reasonable.

Sure enough, the distance is true to the professionals.

I still have a long way to go.

"There are probably only so many questions that can be thought of, but overall, the script is pretty good now."

Hayabusa Kimura nodded.

"Speaking of which, if Hayabusa-kun really shoots a two-hour movie, the funds are far from enough, right?" Yui Koike asked the question I've been wanting to ask since yesterday.

Originally, she thought that Hayabusa Kimura chose such a pure love theme, just to keep the cost low.

But now it seems that what Hayabusa Kimura said about the low cost is actually compared to other types of commercial film investment.

Even if the original script were to be made into a movie, it would definitely be a huge amount of money for Hayaya Kimura.

Hayabusa Kimura frowned, and then said embarrassedly: "If I say that I will attract investment, will Mr. Koike believe it......"

"Faith."

Yui Koike barely hesitated.

"Huh?" Hayabusa Kimura wondered.

"A script that can see commercial value, and if you smoke it tomorrow, it is also very possible to get investment." An inexplicable smile appeared on Yui Koike's face.

Hayabusa Kimura's body stiffened.

"You know ......"

"It looks like my younger brother is going to be taken care of by Hayabusa Taijun for a few days."

Yui Koike said in a flat voice, not hearing a lot of emotions.

"Hey."

Hayabusa Kimura hurriedly bent down and said.

"Let's leave if nothing else."

"Huh?" Hayabusa Kimura looked up in surprise.

That's it?

As if guessing what Hayabusa Kimura was thinking, Koike Yui added:

"The end result and the score can be played however you want, and nothing will change because of others."

“……”

Seeing Hayabusa Kimura leave, Yui Koike couldn't help but hold his forehead.

The thought of her uncompetitive brother, who was full of excitement when she went back last night, and that worthless appearance, made her feel angry.

If it had been yesterday, perhaps she might have firmly rejected it.

Asked you to borrow photography equipment, what's the matter with you requisitioning my brother? Don't you understand?

But for now......

Maybe Koichi is not necessarily a bad thing to be by his side.