Chapter 152: In the monthly exam and full score (Thank you Xiaotong for breaking the silver alliance!) )
This topic is very simple, and the essence of getting a high score lies in the entry point.
Different from topical essays, it is very playable.
Chen Yuan still remembers that there used to be a very classic topic essay on 'grades and slaps and kisses', the comic talks about 100 points and then 98 will get a slap, and 55 and then 61 can get a kiss.
Topics like this are basically dead in the direction.
In fact, it is directly oriented to family education, and its core is a critique of the Chinese education method.
This kind of question is difficult to get a high score.
Because there is no angle to find another way.
Chen Yuan remembered that after Liu Fang told them some cookie-cutter high-scoring essays, he gave another wrong example, that is, written by a certain classmate - if you fall behind, you will be beaten!
It can only be said that it is very novel, and there is a beauty of brain stem atrophy.
Like this question, it is a semi-propositional essay, not a full proposition, and it can be written in a reasonable way. Even like an elementary school student, I want to do XXX in the future.
If it's a novel, how do you write it?
Think about what those writers would do.
To complete a work with a starting and ending in a limited 800 words, then there is a need for conflict and sublimation.
The fact that online essays need to be just right means that they are not suitable for exam essays, because essays need to be short and concise.
Also, you can't write about puppy love.
This is a slide that can't be touched, so be absolutely careful.
So after thinking about it, Chen Yuan put pen to paper.
In fifty minutes, he finished the novel. And at the end, the theme is tightly buttoned!
After all, the grading teacher is not the starting point editor, and he can't write too highly, let alone write cool points in the Chinese composition.
There are now twenty-five minutes left until the end of the exam.
Chinese is like this, you don't even know what to do after the question is done. Because the answer sheets are all filled, you can't go to the drawing to revise them. As for the multiple-choice questions, I felt that I had done everything right from the beginning, and I could have done it all wrong, so how could I correct it?
Completely over-blind.
If you change the correct answer incorrectly, you will have to pick your own mouth afterwards.
This is also why every time there is a college entrance examination, the first one is especially hot. On the one hand, it is because Chinese composition is a topic that can be participated by the whole people, and unlike other subjects, the threshold is too high. And again, the time for the language to be submitted in advance can be particularly long, and many students are vying for the benefit of being the first to appear in the interview, so as to make it clear to the designer that the knife girl still has to be cut.
But seriously, it's really nothing to submit the paper in advance, after all, the language is a thing, and if you don't finish it, you don't finish it.
If you encounter Ge Jun's math test paper and can still hand in it in advance, then you are really a cow.
However, even if Chen Yuan finished it in advance, he didn't dare to slack off. When Liu Fang was about to walk to his side, he hurriedly flipped over the test paper and the answer sheet, making the appearance of checking the ancient poems.
Composition is a thing that can't be seen by her.
Liu Fang actually likes a variety of compositions, but the premise is the diversity of honor students.
She often showed some special essays from Class 15 to everyone, such as narratives, novels, and even essays. Because there is a writer in their class, the prose they write is particularly wonderful, even if it is put in Yu Qiuyu's "Cultural Journey", it is not out of harmony. And that one's composition, as long as it plays normally, often scores more than 55 points.
By the way, the highest score for the essay in Eleven is 56. But this kind of essay is placed in the college entrance examination, and it is a full score reserve.
The reason why it is so strict is also to prevent students from having the idea of speculation.
Try to write argumentative essays as much as possible.
Especially those who are in the poor class.
I, Liu Fang, can be regarded as begging for a good job, argumentative essay, three-stage style, old eight shares, your level can't support such a show-off skill.
Therefore, Chen Yuan is still a little afraid of criticism.
Of course, he is not worried that the teachers will give low marks to all novels because of their subjective will, after all, the only mandatory requirement in the exam is 'except poetry', so even if the theme of fiction is used, the teachers will be fair in grading.
After Liu Fang passed by her, she wandered to Zhou Fu's position. Standing next to her, with her hands behind her back, she looked at her exam paper and, after reading it for a while, smiled lightly.
You can see that she is very happy with our Fubo.
In other words, she has a natural liking for good students.
It's not like Lao Mo, although he is also hierarchical, but he is a bit of a bad student, and he is actually quite pleasing to the eye.
After all, the class teacher is the easiest to have feelings for the students...... Of course, I don't mean teacher-student love!
- "Lao Mo's Youth Love Story".
Finally, the exam is over.
After Liu Fang finished collecting the test papers, the students in the examination room left the classroom one after another.
Then, several students in the class gathered around and chatted with Liu Fang. Chen Yuan also followed, wanting to hear what he had heard.
Although the answer after the exam is absolutely stupid, after all, it is only a monthly exam, so Liu Fang is not too serious, so he is stingy with his comments.
"This essay is very simple, if you can still write off-topic, then I will really beat someone." Leaning on the podium, Liu Fang warned quite seriously.
"Teacher, I'm writing about the future me, is that okay?"
"Oops." Hearing this, Liu Fang sighed and said, "There are so many things to write, why do you want to write about me in the future?" ”
"So, is that a digression?"
"It's not off-topic, but it's too ordinary, just like writing essays in elementary school, I want to be a scientist and an artist in the future, there is no argument at all." Liu Fang said truthfully, "It's not bad to write like this, but no matter how good the writing is, it is difficult for the teacher to give more than 47 points." ”
"Teacher, what I wrote is hello, future."
"Where's the entry point?"
"The completion of socialist modernization talks about the rapid development of science and technology in China in recent years."
"Hmm... Yes, but you can't get a high score. Of course, there is still a chance that 48 is particularly well written. Liu Fang's pertinent comment.
Writing such an essay is actually very unstable. Because some students are very rigid and pull any proposition in this direction, they are often prone to deviate from the topic. Of course, if he really came across this kind of perfect gift essay topic, then he was really lucky.
"Zhou Fu, what did you write?"
Liu Fang only looked at the beginning, and felt satisfied.
Time is like a journey, and I am also a pedestrian.
After thinking about it, Zhou Fu said: "What I wrote is optimistic about facing the future, and I cited the example of the great writer Su Shi. After he experienced the Wutai poetry case, he was belittled all his life, and he couldn't see a bright future at all. However, he did not respond negatively, and during this period, he made famous stories such as "Water Tune Song Head", and actively enjoyed life, inventing delicacies such as Dongpo meat and Dongpo elbow......"
"Uh-huh." Liu Fang nodded lightly, very much approving with Zhou Fu's composition.
Composition is to dance with shackles.
But it's all about who can jump better.
When Su Shi said that, she felt right.
Just hold this poem and talk about Su Shi's life experience.
Is it that hard?
It's not hard.
Hearing Liu Fang's praise for Zhou Fu like this, several students next to him showed expressions of 'really amazing'.
However, Zhou Fu already has the strength of the top 200, but being assigned to the examination room of the top 900 is no less than putting a shark in the pond, a proper dimensionality reduction strike.
"Chen Yuan, how did you write it?" Liu Fang saw that Chen Yuan was also on the side, so he took the initiative to ask.
Then, everyone looked at him together. In the face of these gazes, Chen Yuan said quite calmly: "I am writing about the relationship between the future and the present......"
"Oh, yes."
Without waiting for Chen Yuan to finish speaking, Liu Fang directly said these words in a long tone. Then, I explained to everyone: "Such a simple topic, does the teacher want to see that my dream is to be a scientist?" No. The corresponding word for the future is the present, or the past. So it's best to plug in from this entry point. ”
"Huh? That's right...... Hey, isn't everything else left behind? One student asked.
"The one that Zhou Fu wrote, it's not as good as this?"
"Just the entry point." The teacher explained, "Chen Yuan's entry point is good, and it has set a good tone. And Zhou Fu's is also right because of good writing, good writing and accumulation to write well from an ordinary angle. ”
In short, it's much better than something like 'my future is not a dream'.
"How did you write that?" Liu Fang asked again.
Chen Yuan said: "What I wrote is that the future is the result of the continuous accumulation of the present, and it is right to look forward to the future, but we should grasp the ...... of the present."
"Fifty."
Liu Fang raised her finger and nodded, agreeing very much with this argument.
She has always thought that Chen Yuan, a child, is very thoughtful and has strong comprehension skills, and every time he writes essays, he can just grasp the teacher's pain points.
But what she was a little uncomfortable about was that Chen Yuan's reading comprehension was very ...... It's not that it's bad, it's just weird.
She vividly remembered that there was a question before, what did the rain outside the window represent at this time, and why did the author write like this.
Chen Yuan: It may be that it was raining outside the window when the author wrote this paragraph.
It can only be said that the exam-oriented education choked Chen Yuan enough.
"Niu, fifty essays." Yu Jiacheng exclaimed, "Then Chen Yuan's total score can exceed 100 again." ”
"No, you."
If Liu Fang hadn't been here, Chen Yuan would have already launched a husky command against Yu Jiacheng.
Why don't you open which pot and which pot you mention?
"Hey." But Liu Fang was reminded by Yu Jiacheng's words, and sighed, which is really a pity.
yes, what do I have to surprise about?
His score will always be so much, if he plays well, he can reach 111, and if he doesn't play well, he will be in his early 100s.
Hey, Fangzi, you have to see the progress of people, haven't I written all the ancient poems correctly today......
"So, you're writing an argumentative essay, right?"
Chen Yuan will not let himself down, and since he has said so, it must be an argumentative essay. The reason why Liu Fang asked was also to let the students next to her know that as long as the argumentative essay finds the right angle of entry, it is impossible to overturn.
"......" Chen Yuan said after a short silence, "Ang." ”
Hearing this, Liu Fang was also relieved. However, Zhou Fu on the side saw the problem and instantly understood.
Chen Yuan generally does not lie, but when he wants to lie, he chooses to be silent. At this time, if you ask him, he will most likely answer with 'Ang'.
His ang stands for - you understand it yourself.
"Let's go eat, there's an exam in the afternoon." Liu Fang reminded everyone not to answer correctly, and not to take the monthly exam too seriously.
She has always disliked the kind of students who really look for themselves to change their scores after the exam, this is not the college entrance examination, why bother?
It's just a monthly exam, and what you need to master is how to do the questions.
Then, everyone left the examination room, picked up the school bags on the desks outside, and prepared to go to the cafeteria.
"How's the language going this time?" Zhou Fu asked, "Do you think it's difficult?" ”
“…… Not bad. ”
Chen Yuan felt that the most helpless thing in the subject of Chinese was that no matter what the topic, he couldn't tell the difficulty.
Therefore, he can only pray that the language is as difficult as possible during the college entrance examination, so that the score line will be pressed down. And himself, it's always a hundred and a few broken points.
"I have a hunch." Zhou Fu looked at Chen Yuan and said with trust, "In this exam, you will improve in every subject." ”
"Why?" Chen Yuan was puzzled.
You really trust me just like my mother.
But my mom isn't as blindly confident as you.
"Because ......" Zhou Fule covered his mouth with his hand and whispered in his ear, "504 + 121 = 625." ”
“…… No, how could she tell you all this? ”
Chen Yuan is red, and he is very serious.
Xinbao, can't we secretly hide and talk?
Also, where are you talking about it?
I'm not going to talk about the things that I want to establish a relationship with in a hurry, right?
Xia Xinyu is a big fool!
"I think it's good." Zhou Fu grinned and hurriedly comforted, "She told me that she also wanted me to supervise your study a little." ”
"That being said, ...... Ay. ”
Chen Yuan actually has some nature, and before he has no results, he doesn't want everyone to feel that he is working too hard. Moreover, it's because of the reason that he wants to chase her to the same school, it's too innocent and virgin.
It doesn't fit his personality.
"I also have a level of 120 in Chinese, and I can help you a little bit with some questions." Zhou Fu took the initiative to say, "In addition to the essay, if you ask seven or eight points for other topics, you can pass one hundred and eleven." If you can break through one hundred and one with my help, you two will treat me to dinner. ”
Then, let's talk about the university chapter during dinner.
But can they really be in the same school, the difference is one hundred and twenty points......
Chen Yuan is more realistic with his own score.
No, wouldn't that be a university again and we were in a school, and then the heart was in the good university next door in the same city?
No, in that case, I might be tempted to make a mistake......
No, no, absolutely not!
"But. If you can surpass me, I'll treat you to dinner. After some deep thought, Zhou Fu decided to encourage Chen Yuan and let him move higher and farther.
Chen Yuan is okay with herself, after all, she has a certain sense of morality.
But if it's anything else that is too proactive for girls...... This boy, the possibility of cheating is not impossible.
"Okay, okay."
Chen Yuan nodded and agreed to the bet: "Super, I'll try my best to surpass you." ”
………
When the students began to take the math test, the teachers of the Chinese group also rushed to mark the papers, in order to save their weekends, so as not to have to work overtime to revise the papers on weekends.
Each person has their own part of the story.
And in order to be able to alternately mark the papers, without wasting time, the grading of the essay is also carried out at the same time.
The way to change the composition is really what everyone complains about, and each teacher can watch it for two minutes at most.
Whether the beginning is on topic, whether the end is sublimated, and whether it is appropriate to take a glance at the case in the middle. Then, the score can be basically determined. And this. It didn't even take two minutes.
However, there are also test papers that take three or four minutes to read completely, and that is a good essay.
"This time, the questions are very simple, and basically they will not deviate from the topic, so everyone will try to press the score as much as possible. Also, those who deviate from the topic, don't be unbearable and give low marks ruthlessly. When the paper was being revised, Wu Wensen, the head of the Chinese grade group, gave the Chinese teachers such instructions.
Then, according to this standard, everyone also changed the essay, which is generally around 45 points, and the better ones are 47 and 48. And the kind that is obviously off-topic, but has 800 words written, will be disposed of as 30.
The language is said to be insignificant, but the good ones are worse than the poor, and there can be a difference of 17 or 18 points just in the composition.
I don't understand why students don't pay attention to this kind of subject.
There are several students in class 15 who scored 130 points, aren't they quite competitive?
"This is the little writer in your class, right? Mr. Liu. When a male teacher was revising his composition, he suddenly turned around with a smile and said to Liu Fang at the workstation behind him.
"This test paper is airtight, it means nothing to him." Liu Fang sighed.
"It's so well written, I can't even reach this literary talent. While writing prose, it is not the theme of the rotten street of 'taking dreams as horses and living up to the time'. The teacher sighed.
"What's the entry point?" Liu Fang asked.
After thinking about it, the teacher said, "If you let go of the past, you have the present: if you have the present, you will also meet the future." ”
"Okay!" Hearing this, Wu Wensen came over, took the test paper, and nodded while reading, "This kid is really stable, the theme is so accurate, and he can write prose." I remember him, and the overall ranking is also in the top 30, right? ”
"Last time I was 29, in the first examination room of liberal arts." Liu Fang said.
"Yes, really." Wu Wensen nodded and said, "If he really doesn't want to write an argumentative essay, if he can have this kind of performance every time, maybe he can really get a perfect score in the college entrance examination." And he already has a level of 985, if he has such a strong performance in composition, maybe he will be specially recruited to a higher level of prestigious schools. ”
For example, Haidong University, which already has some support for local students.
"Like the author of "The Death of the Red Rabbit", was he admitted to the Southern Normal School exceptionally?" A teacher accosted.
"It's not impossible." Wu Wensen really thinks so.
The definition of literature is too broad, and pure literature majors generally like this kind of spiritual child.
Of course, there are times when the car rolls over.
That is, Jijing University recruited a candidate who wrote essays in oracle bone script, and then came in and found out that he was a fool......
Now it's really not much of a different way, and I'm admitted with this method.
However, he already had such a good overall score. Coupled with a good literary talent, it is not impossible to be favored by the highest literary institutions.
"How many points?" The teacher asked.
Wu Wensen thought about it and said, "55 points, one point less than the full score." ”
The perfect score in Eleven is 56, which is basically only given to the top masterpieces.
The score of 55 is equivalent to 58 in the college entrance examination scoring scale.
I even said that I would be lucky enough to become a perfect score essay.
"Then the group you changed is from the first examination room of liberal arts."
After a female teacher finished speaking enviously, she pinched her temples with her hands, and said in a subtle mood: "I seem to have changed to the composition of the science class......"
Then, the torture began.
Prompt marking of exam papers, 44, 45, 44, 46......
But in the wild grass, there is Ganoderma lucidum.
Life is like a reverse journey, and I am also a pedestrian.
Citing Su Shi's example, each paragraph tightly ties the theme. Moreover, the words are written by a girl at first glance, which is particularly beautiful.
51 bar.
After the overall pressure score, it is already considered a high score.
It is surprising that there are such candidates in the science class.
However, Lingzhi is Ganoderma lucidum, and if it can be seen everywhere, it is not precious.
It's more about the wild grass, and the particularly insidious poop hidden in the wild grass.
"My future is up to me"
You're not writing about the future.
What kind of brain, it's like this......
36。
43,47,44,46。
On average, it takes an average of one and a half minutes to complete a test paper, and the female teacher hopes to end this wave soon.
However, in front of a test paper, it was stuck for a long time.
It's a full five minutes.
In the end, she was really unsure, and said to the head of the language group: "Teacher Wu, come here." ”
"What, isn't it hard to judge?" Wu Wensen asked.
Generally speaking, the theme should be very clear.
"No, it's easy to judge, I subjectively think it's a masterpiece."
After the female teacher handed over the test paper, she said, "But I'm not sure, should this test paper also be judged according to the standard of 56 as a full score?" ”