"I haven't watched Douyin, I heard that this year's essay is terrible, and many students are crying on the Internet."

When Lao Mo was watching TV on the sofa with Xiao Doudou, Che Shujun walked over with the fruit, put it on the coffee table, and replied to him with a smile.

"How scary can an essay be? No, isn't that the same score? "Lao Mo disagreed.

And Che Shujun used to be a Chinese teacher, so she was a little unconvinced when she heard this, so she directly handed him the question: "You also took the college entrance examination, come, you can see how to write this." ”

Lao Mo thought that he was also an honor student, so he didn't think about it, and took his mobile phone directly, but when he saw the essay title, his brows furrowed suddenly......

Then, he defended himself with a sinking face: "I haven't watched "Dream of Red Mansions". ”

"What does this have to do with "Dream of Red Mansions"." Teacher Che Shujun 'laughed' and said, "Look, if it were you, I guess you would also write a deviation." ”

"How many years have I graduated, I forgot it......"

Although he said this, Lao Mo had to admit that he didn't understand.

As a purebred science student, he really doesn't have any place to start with this topic.

So, he clicked on the comment area.

Xinluo: When I saw this essay topic, my hands started to shake, and my heartbeat accelerated, damn it, fortunately, I'm already a freshman

"Hehe, it's funny." This comment made Lao Mo laugh.

Then, keep looking down.

Zixi SaMa: No, what the hell is this? Not everyone has watched "Dream of Red Mansions", what is in the mind of the questioner

Oh, the same rhetoric as myself.

Eh, hey, grunt: I don't know how to write it after reading "Dream of Red Mansions", I have to reread this Cao Xueqin when she comes

Let's see if I can fly: Jia Baoyu never thought in his life that he would be scolded by the candidates for this matter hundreds of years later

Turning the Stars: Hey, this forced exam for me, a child from the mountains, to be successfully sent into the mountains

"I feel like the children in this year's college entrance examination are going to collapse." The more Lao Mo looked at it, the funnier it became.

"If this is the same time, you won't be able to laugh." Che Shujun said.

"Indeed, I already have a hunch of what the little cubs are going to do to make excuses." Lao Mo looked at Che Shujun and asked curiously, "Then how should I write it?" ”

"Well...... Che Shujun thought about it and said, "It's very simple, it's to learn and innovate, and then criticize the borrowing that is not based on reality, and promote the meaning of innovation." ”

"Is there only one direction?"

"Well, that's actually pretty bad."

Talking about this, Che Shujun commented with a personal understanding: "It seems to be very cultural, and it also combines traditional literature, but in fact, the use is quite superficial. Moreover, there is actually no place to think, just cover the front directly, just look at the last sentence. ”

"If you don't write in this direction, it's all off topic?"

"Uh-huh." Che Shujun smiled a little embarrassedly, "Actually, anyone who has read the original book knows that what I want to say in that paragraph is 'human feelings'." Therefore, children who have watched "Dream of Red Mansions" will be interfered with in their judgment. ”

"That's okay, the students in our class definitely don't look at it."

Lao Mo was relieved at once.

"Do you want to talk to Chen Yuan about the college entrance examination language?" Cha Shujun suggested.

"I'm a math teacher, how can I talk to him about Chinese?"

"Just ask him what he thinks?" Che Shujun was curious, after all, she had never taught such a good student, and wanted to know how a good child did the questions.

"This ......"

Just when Lao Mo was hesitating, a message was sent.

After he clicked on it, he found that it was Chen Yuan.

Chen Yuan: Teacher, after the topic came out, I wrote an essay and wrote a heartfelt word, and I wanted our school's Chinese teacher to judge the paper

"Oh my god, didn't you just come out?" Che Shujun was a little surprised, "Are all smart children like this?" Didn't eat and started writing essays? ”

"Only Chen Yuan would be like this."

The corners of Lao Mo's mouth hooked up a satisfied smile.

So I replied: Then you send it to me, and I will ask the school teachers to judge it

Chen Yuan: I'm sorry for you

Then, a few photos were sent.

After Lao Mo explained it clearly to Liu Fang, he asked her to judge the papers, and asked her to let other teachers in the language group also take a look.

And after sending it, Che Shujun also took the mobile phone, and nodded while eating cherries: "Well, the roll call is concise." ”

"Not off topic?" Lao Mo asked concernedly.

"For such a student, it's basic that he doesn't go off-topic." Che Shujun said with a smile, "Moreover, the sublimation is also very good, and I found a very good angle." It's really good, the pattern is so big all of a sudden, it's really rare to be a science student. ”

"After all, it's Chen Yuan, if he can't write well, then no one in the eleventh middle school can write well." Lao Mo smiled a little proudly.

"Don't get too complacent."

At this time, Che Shujun also pressed it a little and said: "It's good that the content and relevance are good, and the writing is also good, but the distance is very high, and there is still a certain gap." I would only give 52 points. ”

"Huh?" Because Chen Yuan has been praised all the time, now that there is a turning point, Lao Mo is a little uncomfortable, "But isn't it quite high?" ”

"Of course, this score is very high." Che Shujun agreed, but if it was Chen Yuan, she felt that the requirements should be higher, so she said, "But after all, Chen Yuan." ”

"I remember that he used to write 57 essays, so this time his performance was ordinary."

Lao Mo thought so.

"But after all, I haven't taught high school, so I still have to see what the high school teachers say." Che Shujun said, "In short, it must be a good composition." ”

A good essay is indeed a good essay.

But it also shows that the current Chen Yuan does not have the strength to be the top student in the college entrance examination.

………

"It's innovation, isn't it?" Xia Xinyu asked very nervously.

"That's right." Chen Yuan said.

"That's okay, it's okay to digress." Xia Xinyu breathed a sigh of relief.

"But I have a hunch that a lot of people will go off topic." Chen Yuan said, "For example, it will be biased towards choice, and it will be biased towards a thousand Harry Potter in the eyes of a thousand people." ”

“…… It's Hamlet, right? ”

"Ahem." Chen Yuan changed the topic and said, "But if it's really off-topic, then the essay will be 36 points." ”

"This is a devastating blow to a lot of people......"

"A score of 36 is still a good premise for writing, if you are not usually good at it, maybe you will be 32, and you will directly bury your college dream."

Chen Yuan has already thought of how many students near the undergraduate line will be completely GG this year because of the failure of the Chinese subject.

The proportion of students who go off topic is definitely not low.

And once the composition is off-topic, it is sent directly.

"It took me a long time just to think about this question, but after the final review, I found that the previous materials were basically useless, just read the last sentence." Xia Xinyu said happily.

"How's it written?" Chen Yuan asked.

"I think it's okay." Xia Xinyu is quite optimistic, after all, it is really not difficult.

"Okay, let's order first."

In this way, after writing the essay hungry, the two of them ordered takeout.

And while waiting for takeout, Lao Mo sent a message.

The two of them looked over with great concern.

Lao Mo: This is the scoring after discussion with several teachers, and I will send you the comments later

Lao Mo: Chen Yuan, 52 points. Xia Xinyu, 49 points.

Seeing these two scores, the expressions of the two people are quite calm.

It seems to be expected.

But again, they are not very satisfied.

It's low.

"Baby, there is still a lot of gap between me and the champion." Chen Yuan looked at Xia Xinyu and said.

"Baby, there is also a gap between me and Huaqing Thistle." Xia Xinyu also looked at Chen Yuan and muttered a little disappointed.

This battle also made the two realize that if they were the ones in this year's college entrance examination, it would be difficult to get super high scores in language with only the current level.

"Nope." After Chen Yuan clenched his fists slightly, he said a little resolutely, "The composition must be strengthened." ”

"The next end of the semester is also the city's unified examination, and I estimate that it will also imitate the college entrance examination essay, for the next exam, I think we also have to focus on this kind of essay......"

"Nope." Chen Yuan raised his hand and said, "I understand, 95% of the next year's college entrance examination will also be the main theme essay." ”

"Is this the main theme?" Xia Xinyu asked.

In fact, the direction of guidance is the main theme. It can be said that all the current compositions, all the propositions, can all lean on it. ”

It was decided that Chen Yuan would leave one hand for next year.

"Then let's start practicing from now on, choose a model essay template, accumulate materials, and write this kind of composition to the extreme as much as possible." Xia Xinyu was willing to believe Chen Yuan.

"Well, from now until the college entrance examination, we will practice this one."

Chen Yuan has already thought clearly, that is, to formulate a series of sample essays for the examination room.

He has also seen the full score essay of the college entrance examination over the years, and there are very few of them with their own connotation and meaning, most of them are very empty shells after scrutiny, but you must know that in a very short period of time, the teacher can't appreciate the connotation, that is, look at the structure, look at the idea, look at the flashy literary algae, and the allusions and 'golden sentences' that come easily.

"Come on."

Chen Yuan stretched out his fist.

"So are you." Xia Xinyu also stretched out his fist and touched it lightly.

Both of them are under the 'blow' and are clear about each other's shortcomings.

Chen Yuan, on the other hand, was a little curious: "I don't know how those opponents played......"

………

After Shi Yiyi wrote the composition, he sent it to the Chinese teacher, and then waited in the study.

Composition has never been something he's been very good at.

But he still has a lot of experience in writing Chinese topics.

So basically, his language scores are very stable.

In fact, he also tried, whether to surprise the language, rush 140.

Then gave up.

For him, getting a 450 in science and mathematics is the ultimate goal.

Even he thinks that 450 is less difficult than 140.

After a while, the Chinese teacher sent:

I have discussed with several Chinese teachers, and in the final score, there is not much disagreement, and I unanimously think that 52 and 53 are about the same

OK.

This score is perfectly acceptable.

In fact, his language is only deducted from composition and reading.

So if this is the case, the overall score of the language should not be weak.

Everyone has limits.

Shi Yi knew that he couldn't be like the god of learning in Jingbei and get 146 in the language test.

But he was confident that he would surpass her in the overall score.

725 points......

There are still 3 points missing.

For the rest of the year, his goal is to gain another three points.

And if it is this score, in which year in the last 15 years, you will be able to win the provincial champion.

The harder he was chased, the clearer Shi Yi became. That is, only infinitely close to the limits of human beings can we win those two.

If you all reach the limits of human beings, you still lose.

That's not your own sin......

……

: We discussed it, and it was discussed by all the teachers who had taken the college entrance examination, and we felt that we should score more than 58 points.

: However, your essay is not worse than the perfect score essay of the past few years

: So, you don't care too much about this score, that is, such an article with beautiful handwriting and no typos is very good

Looking at the Chinese teacher's evaluation, Liu Chengxi leaned back in the chair and smiled shallowly.

I wasn't particularly excited.

But it wasn't as crazy as expected.

It's just that he now finally understands why the top candidates compare languages.

At least for myself, language is a vast blue ocean.

Since the last time the thirteen-school joint entrance examination tasted the sweetness, Liu Chengxi began to ponder the composition and the perfect score composition.

Then, I also began to practice seriously.

During a monthly exam, his composition score was also very good, giving 56.

And this time, it's even higher.

Just as he was thinking, the door was suddenly pushed open: "Xibao, eat melon~"

“？！” Liu Chengxi was suddenly frightened, and his body tightened, "You, why did you come in?" ”

At this time, Shen Yating was wearing short-sleeved shorts, with a particularly casual appearance, and a plate of cut watermelon in her hand.

"Auntie cut the melon, so I helped send it in." Shen Yating went directly to his side, then inserted a piece of melon with a toothpick and handed it to his mouth, "Xibao, ah~"

After Liu Chengxi finished eating in a daze, he complained a little weakly: "You come, my mother didn't even say hello to me at all......"

And like my mom, I never knock on the door!

"It's all a family, what do you say hello?"

Shen Yating grinned, sat on Liu Chengxi's lap, then looked at the composition paper on the desktop, and said in surprise: "You are also writing essays?" Did you show it to the teacher? ”

"After you sent the question, I started to write, and I have already shown it to the teacher."

Looking at Shen Yating, who was naturally sitting on her lap, Liu Chengxi's cheeks were slightly red, and he also gently hugged her waist......

"The title of this essay is really outrageous, and I seriously suspect that the person who wrote the question has not read "Dream of Red Mansions", and almost circled me...... Fortunately, the question stem is clear, and I still wrote a 50 points. ”

Shen Yating said while looking at Liu Chengxi's composition, and then her eyes gradually lit up: "Wow, this is too literary to write, right?" This is all quoted from the classics, and the past is the present, and it is a big talk. ”

“…… Why is it still used a derogatory term. ”

"That's great, what did the teacher say? The score must be high, right? ”

Shen Yating turned her head and looked at Liu Chengxi and asked.

Then, Liu Chengxi handed her the mobile phone.

"Wow, doesn't that mean a perfect score for the essay?!" Shen Yating was dumbfounded all of a sudden.

Liu Chengxi, who has not been good at language before, how did he improve to this level.

Moreover, the teachers of No. 1 Middle School are all college entrance examination revisers, and they give such a score, which means that it is worth such a score.

If that's the case, doesn't that mean that you not only have to be surpassed by him, but also ruthlessly......

"Pretty much." Liu Chengxi is still very calm.

"Why are you so calm?"

Turning around completely, rubbing on Liu Chengxi's body, and then grabbing his waist, Shen Yating asked very eagerly: "Did you sign up for any class and suddenly play so strongly?" ”

"Strong ......"

"Just the first sentence at the beginning... I haven't heard what I've said. ”

"You don't care too much about current affairs, do you?"

"What's the point with that poem? We definitely didn't learn. Also, how do you still know such an allusion to the ancients that fits the theme? Shen Yating was curious.

So, Liu Chengxi opened an app on his mobile phone and handed it to her: "Just brush it every day, it can meet the vast majority of writing materials." ”

"What, do you want to advertise?"

Shen Yating, who was puzzled, was dumbfounded when she saw the software on her mobile phone: "Isn't this the 'Youth Study' that makes college students feel worried?" ”

Liu Chengxi's learning method is so out-of-the-way!

"I think it's kind of funny." Liu Chengxi said.

"You just rely on this, and then get a perfect score?" Shen Yating continued to be shocked.

"I've come to realize that I can basically write in this direction. In that case, if it's an extension material, this software is too suitable. ”

Liu Chengxi even thought that everyone was watching this.

"Indeed, I didn't expect that this daily brushing of questions is the process of accumulating materials!" Shen Yating suddenly realized.

"I see a lot of people writing arguments about this, and it's actually very helpful for essays."

"Learned." Shen Yating benefited a lot and praised, "You are so strong." ”

To defeat Shi Yi, get rid of Chen Yuan's pursuit, and get the composition to a full score is undoubtedly a trick.

"I just hope the essay will be as I imagined."

Anyway, Liu Chengxi thinks that next year's college entrance examination should also have this tendency.

"Well, our Xibao is awesome, reward it." Shen Yating pursed her lips, and couldn't help it.

After all, coming to him to talk about learning is secondary, and the primary purpose is, of course, to kiss him well......

And Liu Chengxi naturally will not refuse......

I'm looking forward to it.

That's it, waiting for the lips to come closer.

"Cheng Xi, ...... after eating the melon"

Cheng Xi's mother habitually pushed open the door to deliver melons.

Then, I saw Yating sitting on her son's lap, holding her waist, closing her eyes and approaching her side face......

"I'm sorry!!"

(End of chapter)