Chapter 117: It's too good

Facing Guo Yang's question, Fang Yu nodded with a smile: "Yesterday, I originally wanted to read the script of "Fairy Sword", but I saw this "Asking Sword", so I took it out and read it on my own initiative, and changed some things that I thought were unreasonable, that is, obsessive-compulsive disorder, change it for fun." ”

"I didn't change much, but then Yang Jie called me and told me about the situation, I didn't continue to change it in the future, I hope you don't mind, just ignore what I changed, just follow the original script and look at it later!"

After he finished speaking, Guo Yang on the other side was dumbfounded, looking at Fang Yu with a strange expression.

Such creative ability, such story portrayal ability, smooth story transition, you told me that it was just for fun?

This inevitably made Yang Jie look at the investor in front of him more seriously.

Didn't you say you wouldn't be able to write a script?

Judging from the above modifications, it shouldn't be, and it's not reasonable!

However, he didn't say anything more, but continued to calm down and look at the other pages where Fang Yu had changed.

At this time, Fang Yu smiled again: "I did have itchy hands last night, so I changed a few pages." ”

He actually wanted to see the level of the screenwriter invited by Xuan Zefei last night, so he wanted to watch "Asking the Sword".

As a result, after seeing the script of "Asking the Sword", he was really disappointed, and even had the heart to replace the screenwriter.

So I started to revise those problematic places, and I originally planned to use them as evidence today to fire the screenwriter.

It's just that he didn't expect that after he changed a few pages, Yang Jie called and told him that this "Asking the Sword" was written by him, not by his master.

After he read the script of "Fairy Sword", it is undeniable that this Guo Yang screenwriter is indeed powerful.

At this time, Yang Jie, who was standing beside Guo Yang, felt strange about his master's reaction.

With his current level, he could see that Fang Yu had changed quite well, but he couldn't judge how well he had changed, after all, his ability was limited.

In addition, Guo Yang's speed of turning the page was too fast, and he couldn't keep up at all.

So he cautiously asked, "How did he change?" ”

"Good! It's so well changed! Guo Yang was so excited that he even raised his voice by a few decibels.

Yang Jie saw that his master was so excited, it seems that the change is really good! And it's not the average good kind.

Guo Yang looked at Fang Yu and asked, "Why did you hear Xuan Zefei say that you don't know how to write a script?" ”

Fang Yu replied with a smile: "I really can't write a script, this is a fact!" ”

Guo Yang couldn't believe this answer, so he asked again: "Oh? You really haven't written a script before? ”

Fang Yu nodded: "No, I don't know about the writing format and skills of the script, but I just feel that the original plot development is not very reasonable, so I revised it." ”

Guo Yang was amazed again and again in his heart.

Unexpectedly, the script that made him feel a little tricky was changed to satisfaction by the investor in front of him, who didn't seem to be very old and hadn't written a script yet.

has completely forgotten Fang Yu's identity as an investor in "Fairy Sword", grabbed Fang Yu's hand, and said kindly like an old grandfather told his grandson.

"Would you like to learn how to write a script with me? You're so talented. The sense of story is very strong, and a few places where the plot is not very smooth, after you add a few foreshadowings, it looks much smoother! ”

"There are also some details that are handled very well, it's a pity not to be a screenwriter!"

Guo Yang's face flushed with excitement, and he looked at Fang Yu as if he had dug up some treasure.

This is also the reason why he accepted 3 apprentices, because he cherishes talents and likes to promote talented people.

The plot design ability and text creation ability of the person in front of him, as well as his grasp of the development of the plot, far surpassed his three apprentices, and even surpassed him.

It would be a pity if you didn't grasp such abilities and talents well.

Fang Yu smiled humbly and waved his hand.

"I don't have any plans to write a script for the time being, it's because your old man thinks too highly of me!"

Guo Yang laughed: "You are too modest, with your creative ability, I am afraid that it will not take a few years to become a leader in the screenwriting industry and surpass most of your peers!" ”

As he spoke, he seemed to remember something, and asked again: "Can you ask, are you a writer?" ”

Guo Yang is old, nearly 50 years old, so he naturally won't watch shows like "Heartbeat Melody", so he doesn't know Fang Yu.

Fang Yu was stunned for a few seconds before replying, "That's right, I have written a novel. ”

Hearing this answer, Guo Yang seemed to understand where Fang Yu's talent came from.

It should have been accumulated by writing novels.

"Sure enough, in the chat with Xuan Zefei, I learned that he had written a novel, and I guessed that you should have it too! Hahaha......"

Before he could ask Fang Yu what novel he had written, the door of the private room was pushed open, interrupting his thoughts.

Xuan Ze rushed in from the outside.

He was followed by a waiter with a large plate of lobster and snacks.

"Hahaha...... Sorry, the hotel is a little delayed, only come now, you have been waiting for a long time! ”

Xuan Zefei arranged for the waiters to serve the food, while talking to Fang Yu and a few people.

"It's okay, it didn't take long!" Guo Yang replied with a smile.

After finishing speaking, he pulled Fang Yu to talk about the script, and even moved the seat he was sitting on to Fang Yu's side.

I want to formally ask Fang Yu about the revision plan after the script of "Asking the Sword".

and raised his mobile phone, took a photo of the previous pages that had been modified by Fang Yu and sent it to Director Chen, who was in the Hengdian crew.

And accompanied by the text - "This part has been changed, you hurry up and shoot this part first to see if it is much smoother!" ”

As soon as he sent it out, Director Chen immediately replied with the word "good".

After finishing this, Guo Yang continued to sit down and discuss the script with Fang Yu.

Xuan Zefei, who had just arrived, was directly stunned when he saw this scene.

When did the two of them get on such a good relationship?

Before Xuan Zefei found Guo Yang, he had a general understanding of this person.

This Guo Yang is a person who does not smile, especially in treating the script, he is very harsh and harsh.

It is said that several times, the gold owner asked him to change the script, but he thought that the change required by the gold owner was unreasonable, and it would ruin the entire script.

Such a person who adheres to his own principles can actually get along with Fang Yu!

This made it difficult for Xuan Zefei not to feel puzzled and curious, so he came behind the two and asked, "What are you talking about?" ”

Guo Yang was like showing off the treasure he had just discovered, and pushed Fang Yu's revised script in front of Xuan Zefei: "Talk about this, Fang Yu changed it, it's really good!" It's rare, it's rare! ”

Xuan Zefei was stunned, although he didn't know much about the script, but if Guo Yang could boast like this, it should be really good.

He patted Fang Yu's shoulder excitedly: "Hahaha...... Brother Yu, it's amazing! I lied to me before that I couldn't write a script, but it turned out to be hidden! ”

Fang Yu was patted on the shoulder by him, and he didn't speak.

Xuan Zefei looked at the table full of lobsters and side dishes, and said with a smile: "Let's discuss the revision of the script of "Fairy Sword" while eating!" ”