The people who paid attention to Huang Baiyou at the scene were not only Guo Xing beside him, but also Wu Zinan, whose eyes were almost glued, but compared with the former's shocked eyes, the latter's eyes were more lively.

"Bai You, what do you think, if your opinion is not mature, you can also talk about what the problem is." Li Cang had a good attitude, "Lao Xia and we are all here, we can take this opportunity to discuss it." ”

"It's a bit of a problem, and I need to trouble Mr. Xia and Director Li." Huang Baiyou said frankly that he never felt that there was a problem and he needed to ask the church to be inferior, because it was difficult to know where he had a problem.

"Then I'll talk a little bit about the analysis of the characters first, and put the questions I want to ask later.

His father Lin Zhennan is one of the four masters of martial arts, but Lin Mansion was destroyed by Yu Canghai led by the Qingcheng people, which proves that the Fuwei Dart Bureau is not good, and the side reflects that Lin Pingzhi's martial arts talent is not good, and he is too well protected by his parents.

"Lin Pingzhi is naïve and kind, clever but very limited, more gullible to others, I think there are four important turning points about the character.

The first turning point was in the 72nd scene, Lin Pingzhi, who noticed that the Songshan faction had a problem with Zuo Lengchan, wanted to escape overnight, but this episode was a murder, and the innocence in his heart was wiped out, but the kindness was still maintained.

"The second turning point was in the 309th scene, I felt guilty because I wronged Ling Hu Chong, and was besieged by the man in black, so Ling Hu Chong made a brazen move, so I suspected that Ling Hu Chong cast the "Evil Sword Spectrum", [Senior brother, the sword technique you use, is it the Lin family's evil sword spectrum?] I think this line is an interrogative sentence, and Lin Pingzhi is not sure. It wasn't until he was masked in black that he snatched the sword spectrum from his hand, and everyone judged that it was Ling Hu Chong's doing, and the guilt and doubt in his heart instantly turned into anger, and this turn weakened the kindness in his heart.

"The third turning point came when he figured out the truth and reconciled with Ling Hu Chong again, only to find that Yue Buqun, the master he had always respected the most, actually knew how to complete the sword spectrum of warding off evil spirits, and his belief in others in his heart also collapsed.

"The last turning point is the content of 854 to 913 games, Lin Pingzhi, who has been trained in swordsmanship from the palace, and kills Yue Lingshan in a duel with Linghu Chong. Shi Niang Ning Zhong also committed suicide, knowing that the two people who were the best for him died directly or indirectly because of himself, Lin Pingzhi went crazy after all.

"My understanding is that Lin Pingzhi was gradually forced to become a demon from an innocent young man because of his sword spectrum, and the above is just a little bit of my opinion, and I also ask Teacher Xia for advice."

Compared with the analysis of 50,000 words, it is just a product of simplification and simplification, and it can be said that it is already very closed, with seven growth milestones and fifteen "if" branches, all of which are not said.

can't be too high-profile, Huang Baiyou thought to himself, but this unscripted and smooth understanding has made the scene silent. Li Cang's face was full of surprise, the good guy is really a little bit of a billion.

Screenwriter Lao Xia didn't have expectations for the "least able to act" person in the crew, but this understanding has to be at least read through the script many times to have it.

Wu Zinan raised his neck slightly to the left, a little sore, but the pain of the flesh has long been covered by the shock of the soul, compared with Huang Baiyou, isn't it the difference between reading comprehension for primary school students and reading comprehension for college students? !

The interesting thing is that before Huang Baiyou opened his mouth, the analysis of elementary school students was the best in the audience.

Guo Xing, who was beside him, came back to his senses and muttered to himself, "It's really a bit much." ”

"It seems that Bai You has studied the script carefully, I look good, what do you think, Lao Xia." Director Li Cang broke the silence with a speech.

"I feel fine...... "Lao Xia paused, and unconsciously learned the Gao Zi mantra that he had teased earlier, "That's it, that's it." ”

"It's good that you didn't do your homework wrong." Huang Baiyou continued: "There is a small place in the script that I have some doubts, in the 254th scene, Lin Pingzhi questioned Master Yue Buqun's words, here Teacher Xia wants to temporarily show his subjectivity of not being afraid of power? But at that time, the master was his only support, and the reputation of the gentleman's sword and superb martial arts have always been the object of his worship. ”

"Before I found out that the master would ward off evil spirits, Lin Pingzhi's 'master's internal strength is profound' and 'master's swordsmanship is superb' said 16 sentences of similar admiration, and in the 368th scene, Yue Lingshan just opened his mouth [Xiao Linzi, my father and his father ...... ], was interrupted by Lin Pingzhi, he absolutely believed in Shizun. ”

"Combined with the script, Lin Pingzhi before the third turning point, the master is not a power, but a reliance. Mr. Xia, is there a problem with the questioning here? ”

Although the logic of the plot is rotten, if Huang Baiyou does not look at it from God's perspective in other places, it can be logical and self-consistent, only this place is inconsistent.

Lao Xia listened, brought the script from the side, and the other party came with his mouth open, and he had to flip through the script to find the paragraph for discussion.

He wrote the outline of the script, but the overall content was handed over to two anonymous screenwriter apprentices, and finally revised according to the requirements of the investor, and the standards were simple, there should be "love but not love", "deep love", and "love triangle".

"So Mr. Huang, how do you think this line should be changed?" After Lao Xia finished reading the script, he really couldn't remember what he thought when he wrote this line.

"[Master is thoughtful], I think Lin Pingzhi should respond like this."

Huang Baiyou said his thoughts, "Yue Buqun is a person who is very deep in the city, and his words are deliberately to test whether Lin Pingzhi is easy to control, so that Ning Zhongze will teach Huashan's advanced swordsmanship, and there is no writing in the script what swordsmanship is, I guess it is "Nineteen Styles of Jade Girl Sword". ”

"This martial art is mostly learned by women, and only Feng Qingyang is learned by men, and the sword moves are complex, and if the attainments are excellent, they can restrain thousands of swordsmanship, which requires a high degree of martial arts talent. As I said just now, Lin Pingzhi has no talent, so Yue Buqun's purpose is also about to come out, on the one hand, to give obedient rewards, and on the other hand, he doesn't want Lin Pingzhi to be too strong and out of control. ”

Damn, can it be so reasonable? Lao Xia's expression showed approval, but thousands of horses were galloping in his heart, and for the first time, he felt that the script pieced together by a few tailors was quite reasonable.

"Excellent! Completely dig out the deep meaning buried in my script! The bastard in the circle should be thick-skinned, Lao Xia continued: "Teacher Bao, what do you think of Mr. Huang's analysis? ”

Mr. Bao is a middle-aged actor Bao Ying, who plays the gentleman Jianyue Buqun, and when he heard this, he got up, "Mr. Xia's analysis of Yue Buqun, the head of Huashan, coincides with me, and I also feel that Yue Buqun intended to treat Lin Pingzhi PUA in the early stage, and has achieved the goal of obtaining "Sword Spectrum to Warse Off Evil Spirits". ”

When director Li Cang heard this, he immediately changed the script here, and changed the advanced swordsmanship that did not appear in the play to "Jade Girl Sword Nineteen Styles". Reasonable, too TM reasonable.

"This guy can't memorize all the lines, right?" Guo Xing's mind crossed this terrifying thought, and he was grateful. If she got up behind Huang Baiyou and said, the pressure mountain was quite big.

Immediately afterwards, the other core actors also got up to talk about their feelings about the role, but with Huang Bai You Zhuyu in front, it looked a little bland.

The reading meeting lasted for three hours, and everyone's name for Huang Baiyou became Teacher Huang, regardless of how the performance was in the future, but the adequate preparation in advance was worthy of respect.

"Is it all recorded?" Li Cang asked the photographer.

"The whole reading was recorded." The assistant director responded.

"That's fine." Li Cang nodded, and all the crew would shoot the reading meeting, and then edit out a few paragraphs as promotional materials.