Let's start with a brief report on the results.

At present, the data is still normal, whether it is subscribed or subscribed, it has risen steadily.

The average order is 7200, which is a lot higher than the first order, and the collection has exceeded 50,000.

Thank you very much for your support.

There are also the bigwigs who silently vote for the monthly ticket every day.,Although many people rarely speak.,But I'm very familiar with the ID.,Thank you again.。

Orz

In addition, except for comments with rhythm or swiping, I rarely delete comments or ban them.

There are even several long comments from the book circle, although they criticize me, I have also refined them.

I think since I have written so many reviews, I must also be readers who have read the plot carefully.

Whether I personally agree with these suggestions or criticisms, I thank you for your support of this book.

Summarize the second volume.

Let's start with the simulated plot.

Unlike the first simulation, this simulation involved too few core characters.

For the first time, there was a rivalry between Bibi Dong and Qianrenxue, but this time, the main line involved at the beginning was to train Zhu Zhuqing.

Unless you go to Zhu Zhuyun's setting, it doesn't feel too interesting.

However, as I wrote like this, I realized that this setting was a bit too thin.

In order to avoid hydrology and flow accounts, I had no choice but to accelerate the progress of the simulation plot.

The main reason for this situation is that the detailed outline setting is a bit taken for granted, and the details are not thought about enough.

This will be corrected and optimized in the plot setting of the next volume, and try to make the character conflict more intense.

Then there's the reality main plot.

There's nothing wrong with this part of the progress.

From Zhu Zhuqing, to Qian Lingxue, and then to the meeting of the three of them, all of them were straightened out.

The relationship between the characters is basically shown more clearly here.

Including the first collision between the two heroines, as well as Ah Yin's change of concept catalyzed by the soul ring incident.

Zhu Zhuqing took advantage of an opportunity created by Su Cheng to catch the line of Bibi Dong through his own efforts, and also balanced the gap in strength between himself and Qianrenxue to a certain extent.

As for what happened later, the two of them still know each other's existence, and it will depend on their respective operations later.

Going back to the Soul Master Contest itself, I don't think it's particularly important whether it's the battle process or the final victory.

At least not so much that I need to sacrifice rationality to give the protagonist a trick in order to win.

The core plot of this book is not a pretending to slap the face, this is only a second-level adjustment.

If you write originally, it will definitely add to this part of the pen and ink.

But Douluo's words, to be honest, pretending to slap his face have been written badly, and there is no need to win the final championship.

There is no audience, the finals are closed, only the academies of the players and a group of bigwigs are present, and the protagonist himself is brilliant enough, and the pressure that should be pretended is finished, which is enough.

What's more, the Wuhun Hall itself is not a hostile force, and the purpose of the protagonist's participation at the beginning was just to show his strength.

The climax of the reality line is actually to take the soul ring.

However, this part is not particularly well written, and it feels like a lot of heat is missing, but everything that should be written is still written.

Finally, let's talk about the controversial plot.

One is Zhu Zhuqing's simulation. The summary has been reflected on at the beginning, and this paragraph does lack some consideration in the plot setting.

The other is the line of Ah Yin.

If you want to write this emotional line, you must have a strong medicine, otherwise, it will be difficult for Ah Yin to realize his true thoughts from the perspective of personality.

The main problem is that the foreshadowing is not enough, and this plot should be able to be handled better.

Then there are a few main characters that are more controversial, so let's briefly talk about my thoughts.

If the harem text wants to shape the female protagonist into a character, it needs to weaken the male protagonist to a certain extent, and overly highlight the male protagonist, it is difficult not to sacrifice the personal characteristics of the female character.

Unless you don't open the harem and write a single heroine, then if the male and female protagonists are double and the play is sugary, the two people will get along more balanced, similar to the situation of Su Cheng and Qianrenxue in the first simulation.

Or write about the ancient background, three wives and four concubines belong to the normal worldview, and the heroine can easily accept it, then it is okay.

But if you write about Shura Field, there are at least two important female characters who are relatively strong.

This is determined by the background of the worldview, and the heroine with character will inevitably not easily accept feelings being shared.

It's a matter of trade-offs.

When I first started writing this book, I set the tone and designed the personalities of several main female characters.

Lao Liu's masterpiece, I really didn't want to be reborn, what kind of Chen Hansheng was scolded in it. (I don't dare to compare with the great gods, but I just take this classic urban harem text as an example, after all, this book is deep enough to penetrate the hearts of the people)

Is Chen Hansheng not rich enough? Isn't the social status high enough?

Why are Xiao Yu'er and Shen Youchu reluctant to accept him to open a harem?

If there were no such independent personalities, would these two heroines still have so many readers to like?

Those who say it's because the protagonist is not strong enough, the idea is quite interesting.

It's like in reality, because you have money, you have several. So these people are with you, for affection, or for money?

Or do you think that as long as the protagonist is invincible in the world, with the character of Qianrenxue in this book, he will let him open a harem casually?

A female character with an independent personality, who wants to share it with others?

This is not the ancient worldview, the three outlines and five constants are deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, and it is normal for a man to have three wives and four concubines.

Why do people?

Even if the protagonist is invincible in the world, people just don't want to share.

Because what they want is not the strength of the protagonist, but the person.

If you want to see a brainless woman, you can go directly to the stallion Wen, there are many female characters in it, and I don't care about the protagonist hugging left and right, seeing one on the other.

In addition to the reasons mentioned above, it is also necessary to consider the character's personality undertone.

If you are unwilling to share, it does not mean that you can't share, but you also have to divide people.

If this matter is placed on Ah Yin in the book, or on a person like Hu Liena who is strong, it will be true.

But it is unreasonable to put it on Qian Renxue in this article, or on Xiao Wu in the original book.

Qianrenxue can die for the protagonist, or die with the protagonist, or even exaggerated, you can hold Brother Cheng's head and travel around the world on foot, but she just won't accept another person to appear.

(Of course, that's just the case at this stage.) ）

And if she is Zhu Zhuqing, she is different from Qianrenxue.

Her emotions are not as morbid as Qianrenxue, and the conditions in all aspects are weaker than Qianrenxue at this stage, so she will be calmer, think deeper, and the means she uses will not be directly put on the surface.

But that's all that needs to be written later.

The reason why many comments have a mentality is because some comments are not brainy at all, and they directly raise the bar without brains, and they are still looking for bugs there while jumping the plot, which is ridiculous. (It's not aoe.,I've seen all the normal comments.,I haven't banned or deleted anything that doesn't swipe the screen or spray with rhythm)

This number for writing books has never been used before, and I sometimes want to go to the chapter to say a few words when I use it to read books.

But I'm afraid of being picked off the vest and say that I use a trumpet double reed, so I never comment, to be honest, it's really uncomfortable.

Next volume: Poseidon roars.

Main characters: Bo Saixi, Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, A Yin.

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