However, the screenwriter quickly straightened his attitude, and the two stared at the red mark in Shen Li's script, as well as the suggestion with post-it notes on it.

"How?"

Wang Jian asked rhetorically when he heard her put forward the definition of a sentence.

The screenwriter nodded: "Yes, the scene is wrong, but the intention is not bad, here it can be replaced by the sentence you said." ”

After finishing speaking, the two began to discuss a new plot.

Shen Li pointed to a plot and said: "I think General Lu's scene can be more violent, and his character ideas can be a little fuller." ”

"This confrontation between monarchs and ministers is a dark line, but General Lu's mentality can be a little more, they are not just monarchs and ministers."

Shen Li quickly flipped to the back: "The emperor's lines here show that Father Lu and the emperor still have the feeling of being a companion, and their original relationship is more intimate." ”

It's just that as the emperor grew old, he began to be suspicious of everyone.

The former friend has immortal military exploits, and the young and strong prince has a good public reputation.

He was also afraid.

This contradictory idea caused the death of the prince in the later period and the tragedy of the Lu family's almost annihilation.

But also because of the emotions of the past, in the end, the crippled Lu family man and the incompetent female dependents were left behind.

"The Emperor could be a little more diverse here."

Wang Jian picked up the pen and wrote and drew on Shen Li's script: "This scene can indeed be a little more profound. ”

Jiang Xing is the role of the big heroine, and everything in the court wants to promote the growth line of the heroine, but Shen Li's suggestion is undoubtedly willing to give up a lot of scenes.

Now that he said this, Shen Li simply said another scene: "There is also here." ”

"My mother Lu has three scenes in the harem, and you can also add some feeling."

is similar to Lu's father, and the confrontation between him and the emperor is a temptation mixed with grievances for his former friends.

But Lu Mu was cautious and proud of the queen in the early stage, cautious and silent and forbearant in the middle stage, and strong east wind overwhelmed the west wind in the later stage.

She has little friendship with the queen, and the status of a woman is determined by the status of a man.

And after Lu Yun entered the court and took charge of the world with the Son of Heaven, Lu's mother hated the royal family.

The tone of the Lu family changed from happy and bright to bleak and tragic, but in the end, he was vaguely calculated, and he was assimilated into a knife-wielding person step by step in the era of cannibalism.

This adjustment is positive, of course the screenwriter and director are fine, and the actors themselves are even happier.

"My daughter is so smart."

When a few people were discussing, many people gradually gathered around.

Jiang Ming, the actor of Lu's father, is even happier, and he also feels that way when he reads the script.

I always feel that something is missing, probably because of the lack of emotional suppression in the early stage, which leads to the lack of clarity in the later reversal.

Wang Jian looked at the cheap and obedient one angrily: "Okay, say any suggestions, all of them are clear-eyed, and they are easy to say." ”

Not anyone's drama can be accepted, everything is focused on the main line, and those actors who have nothing to do with the main line want to plump up their character plots are sprayed back by Wang Jian.

What's more important is that in addition to the rookie actors, the crew spends a lot of money to invite veteran actors to the battle, and Wang Jian is confident that they can do the job of those emotional points mentioned by Shen Li.

Otherwise, no matter how good the script is, it won't be able to pout and stare at it.

The reading lasted for a total of five days, and the script became more plump in these five days, that is, the overall role was also heavy.

Wang Jian sent down the newly added scenes: "Fortunately, my filming time left a gap in advance, otherwise it would have been GG." ”

"Director Wang is quite trendy."

Geng Zongkai has a straight heart, no one dares to complain, and if he can't afford to provoke him, he hides behind his sister.

Wang Jian glanced at him, and when he turned his head to look at Shen Li, he became lighter and more gentle: "Libao, you go back early to rest, and the filming will start tomorrow, your first scene." ”

Shen Li bowed, she knew that Wang Jian had the heart to help her establish her authority.

Although after reading it, most of the crew has a very good attitude towards her, especially Jiang Ming and other old-timers, who always love to catch her and work overtime to polish her lines.

She also works part-time to grind movements with martial arts instructors, which is her strength, and now she wants martial arts movements to cooperate with her, not her to cooperate with martial arts movements.

What Shen Li didn't know was that Wang Jian originally lengthened the filming schedule because of her.

In addition to the high budget, Wang Jian was worried that Shen Li's announcements and acting skills needed to be run-in, so he reserved time for her.

Unexpectedly, someone said that the slot really vacated all the shooting slots, which made Wang Jian very satisfied.

watched Shen Li leave slowly with the kettle, and Wang Jian's big white teeth.

"That's right, Director Wang, I've found a treasure."

Jiang Ming looked at him with a smile like a smiling tiger: "This drama is okay." ”

Wang Jian was instantly happier: "Yes, Libao's traffic is so big hahaha, I've thought of several marketing plans." ”

Several veteran actors rolled their eyes together.

Jiang Ming didn't mean that.

In the end, the actor compares the cultural heritage.

Shen Li's performance in the past few days has allowed them to see more possibilities, and there are not many young people who can have such a big picture and their own views on the work.

There are not many people who dare to bring it up, after all, not everyone is a little princess like Shen Li, who is backed by a big company.

Strength and capital coexist, and the follow-up efforts of this drama will not be bad.

What's more, no one dares to add drama and pressure to Shen Li's crew.

You don't see the male protagonist of the crew for so many days, the main thing is to be obedient, mainly to save trouble.

Early the next morning, the studio, which had been quiet for many days, finally began to liven up.

Shen Li came to the dressing room early and waited until her makeup was put on.

In order to avoid the leakage of makeup, the group was stunned to make up at five o'clock.

Xu Jing squinted and followed the group throughout the whole process, and he had to concentrate on the makeup process.

In addition to avoiding the crew's makeup artists, it is also convenient for them to get started in the future.

Lin Sitian is also contacting the store to prepare for the first day, please add food and drink some drinks, which are all small rules in the circle.

Many people are not to blame.

"Mr. Shen's hair is really good, it is many and dense, and the hair quality is also very good." The makeup artist said enviously, no wonder there is news of Shen Li circulating in the circle.

Finally, it was her turn.

"yes, my Libao never uses a wig." Xu Jing's expression was proud.

The makeup artist nodded: "Today is men's clothing, you can also do without it, women's clothing still needs to use a little hair bag." ”

"Just look at the arrangement." Lin Sitian has an expression of listening to you.

She is very confident, if she is not good-looking, Xu Jing will make a move.

"Don't worry, Mr. Shen will be beautiful." Make-up artists also know these scenes.

Just kidding, these are all showy strokes on her resume, okay?

If the styling is good-looking this time, there will not be too many crew styling in the future to count.

Shen Li has always been very quiet, she is thinking about the plot that will start filming today, it is not difficult or simple.

(End of chapter)